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#26Tempris 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Thu Mar 30, 2023 5:55 pm

Tempris

Esperia wrote:

General


Name: Mindbender' Ambition

Slot: Weapon

Type: staff

Class: Mythic, 60p

Quantity: Custom

Element: Darkness

Damage: +70

Durability: 3 S-rank

Details


Description: As much a memento as a reminder of the events that transpired in the Fractured Sky, the Signet of the Ulitharid is a reminder for Esperia that she was sacrificed by humanity and thereafter saved by a denizen of the void. The materials used in designing the staff seem to be otherwordly in nature, but once wielded it reveals to be made of energy that amplifies Esperia's latent powers.

Measurements: The rod of the staff is 1 meter and 20 centimeters in size.

Extra


Requirements: Voidling

Bonus:
  • +100 INT

Drawbacks:
  • N/A

Effects


  • Mindflayer: The user can convert damage they inflict through mana burn into a defensive shield. This can at most be an S-rank shield at 500 mana worth of defense for one turn.
  • Mind Manipulator: The user gains a 1 post cooldown reduction to their debuff spells from their magic.


Spells


  • Name: Unravel
    Rank: S-rank
    Mana Cost: 1000
    Requirements: Mindbender's Ambition
    Type: Offensive
    Element: Arcane
    Range: 100 Meters
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Duration: Instant
    Effect:
    The user raises one of their tentacles toward a target of their choice and releases a 16 meters wide and 16 meters high wave of psionic energy toward them. This highly charged beam of energy which inflicts 1 S-rank damage contains a disruptive effect on defensive shields, inflicting double damage to them and placing cooldowns of defensive spells on 3 additional posts


Points Breakdown


  • Mythic
  • Weapon
  • One-Handed
  • +100 INT
  • +70
  • Mindflayer (T5 35P), Mind Manipulator T2 (10P)
  • Unravel Signature spell (15P)

Total points Acquired: 60
Total Points Spent: 60

This custom has been approved (but on the watch list due to the spell), please create a copy of the item and the source post in a reply post using its name and rarity for its title in the Customs section.

#27Ryuko 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Thu Mar 30, 2023 6:01 pm

Ryuko


General


Name: Mindbender' Signet

Slot: Relic

Type: Signet

Class: Mythic, 45p

Quantity: Custom

Element: Arcane

Durability: 2 S-rank

Details


Description: As much a memento as a reminder of the events that transpired in the Fractured Sky, the Signet of the Ulitharid is a reminder for Esperia that she was sacrificed by humanity and thereafter saved by a denizen of the void. The materials used in designing the signet seem to be otherwordly in nature, but once wielded it reveals to be made of energy that amplifies Esperia's latent powers.

Measurements: A creepy signet, it fits nicely around the finger

Extra


Requirements: Voidling

Bonus:
  • N/A

Drawbacks:
  • N/A

Effects


  • Mindflayer' Assault: The user becomes capable of stretching and retracting the four tentacles from their waist, this allows them to use their tentacles only as a source of spell motions, being capable of being used for any spell the user possesses. They are incapable of attacking or holding gear with the tentacles. Each tentacle can stretch up to 1 meter in total. Their durability is shared with that of the relic item.
  • Sinner's Levitation: Due to the user's biological functions as a Voidling they aren't capable of walking normally, instead being capable of hovering up to a feet in the air. According to a small zealous child the way she hovers in the air is considered sinful, but Esperia would prefer to call it: stylish.
  • Improved Hover: The user is capable of hovering up to five meters in the air through a jump, or lunging in a direction after which they will descend back to their usual height.


Points Breakdown


  • Mythic
  • Relic
  • Mindflayer Assault T5 35P Sinner's Levitation (T1 5P), Improved Hovering (T1 5P)

Total points Acquired: 45
Total Points Spent: 45

using my storyline ticket for it.



Last edited by Esperia on Mon Apr 10, 2023 12:21 am; edited 4 times in total

#28Tempris 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Sun Apr 09, 2023 10:30 pm

Tempris

Esperia wrote:

General


Name: Mindbender' Signet

Slot: Relic

Type: Signet

Class: Mythic, 45p

Quantity: Custom

Element: Arcane

Durability: 2 S-rank

Details


Description: As much a memento as a reminder of the events that transpired in the Fractured Sky, the Signet of the Ulitharid is a reminder for Esperia that she was sacrificed by humanity and thereafter saved by a denizen of the void. The materials used in designing the signet seem to be otherwordly in nature, but once wielded it reveals to be made of energy that amplifies Esperia's latent powers.

Measurements: A creepy signet, it fits nicely around the finger

Extra


Requirements: Voidling

Bonus:
  • N/A

Drawbacks:
  • N/A

Effects


  • Mindflayer' Assault: The user becomes capable of stretching and retracting the four tentacles from their waist, this allows them to use their tentacles for spell motions. These tentacles each have 2 S-rank durability and regrow if the user is healed or at the end of a topic.
  • Sinner's Levitation: Due to the user's biological functions as a Voidling they aren't capable of walking normally, instead being capable of hovering up to a feet in the air. According to a small zealous child the way she hovers in the air is considered sinful, but Esperia would prefer to call it: stylish.
  • Improved Hover: The user is capable of hovering up to five meters in the air through a jump, or lunging in a direction after which they will descend back to their usual height.


Points Breakdown


  • Mythic
  • Relic
  • Mindflayer Assault T5 35P Sinner's Levitation (T1 5P), Improved Hovering (T1 5P)

Total points Acquired: 45
Total Points Spent: 45

using my storyline ticket for it.

sorry it took so long. Mindflayer Assault is denied. It basically gives you 8 free S ranks of defense and they can regrow if you are healed which basically gives you item healing.

Everything else looks okay to me.

#29Ryuko 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Mon Apr 10, 2023 12:06 am

Ryuko

feel free to scrap this custom.

#30Ryuko 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Thu Jul 06, 2023 5:02 pm

Ryuko


General


Name: Mindbender' Signet

Slot: Relic

Type: Signet

Class: Mythic, 45p

Quantity: Custom

Element: Arcane

Durability: 2 S-rank

Details


Description: As much a memento as a reminder of the events that transpired in the Fractured Sky, the Signet of the Ulitharid is a reminder for Esperia that she was sacrificed by humanity and thereafter saved by a denizen of the void. The materials used in designing the signet seem to be otherwordly in nature, but once wielded it reveals to be made of energy that amplifies Esperia's latent powers.

Measurements: A creepy signet, it fits nicely around the finger

Extra


Requirements: Voidling

Bonus:
  • N/A

Drawbacks:
  • N/A

Effects


  • Psionic Ward: Casting debuff spells on herself coats her with psionic magic, offering a barrier with durability equivalent to the rank of the spell. The spell must be sustained.
  • Sinner's Levitation: Due to the user's biological functions as a Voidling they aren't capable of walking normally, instead being capable of hovering up to a feet in the air. According to a small zealous child the way she hovers in the air is considered sinful, but Esperia would prefer to call it: stylish. People with seisimic sense can still detect the vibrations of the hovering.
  • Improved Hover: The user is capable of hovering up to five meters in the air through a jump, or lunging in a direction after which they will descend back to their usual height. While airborne the user can't lunge a second time.


Points Breakdown


  • Mythic
  • Relic
  • Psionic Ward T5 35P Sinner's Levitation (T1 5P), Improved Hovering (T1 5P)

Total points Acquired: 45
Total Points Spent: 45

using my storyline ticket for it.



Last edited by Esperia on Mon Jul 10, 2023 4:35 am; edited 4 times in total

#31Go D. Drakkon 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Fri Jul 07, 2023 7:11 pm

Go D. Drakkon
Psionic Ward: You want to somehow debuff yourself and your teammates and make it convert a defense spell that is as strong as your strength. In the end, this doesn't work; if you want a defense ability make a spell or something.

Sinner's  Levitation: I will allow this for now it doesn't seem to hurt anybody and just gives you this ability to hover in the air by 1 foot. I do think it's a bit too strong because you screw over those with seismic vision, are various spells for just 5 points. If you can add that seismic visions aren't screwed over, then this is legit a perfectly fine Effect for 5 points.  

Improve Hover: As long as you can't move aka move around to dodge while you're descending to your original Sinner's Levitation then I'm fine with this as it's just Mobility Improvement.

It should be the same as if a person jumps or lunge into the air, if they don't have a flight spell, their descent would be something they can't move around in.

#32Ryuko 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Mon Jul 10, 2023 4:35 am

Ryuko

bump with the updates.

#33Go D. Drakkon 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Fri Jul 14, 2023 5:00 pm

Go D. Drakkon
This custom has been approved, please create a copy of the item and the source post in a reply post using its name and rarity for its title in the Customs section.

#34Ryuko 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Sun Jul 16, 2023 8:37 am

Ryuko


General


Name: Fae-blessed ring
Slot: ring

Type: Ring

Class: Unique, 20p

Quantity: Custom

Element: Arcane

Durability: 1 S-rank

Details


Description: An artifact that ties into one of Caelum's greatest rulers of yore. The ring once was in possession by Arwen Pendragon and later left in the care of the Queen of the Fae-folk. Bestowed onto Esperia in the aftermath of the events in Caelum which saw her become a friend to the Fae-folk, since then Esperia has started to notice a remarkable increase in her luck when it comes to getting rewards from tasks.

Measurements: a beautiful ring with a gem at its center

Extra


Requirements: Esperia

Bonus:
  • N/A

Drawbacks:

Effects


  • Rhongomyniad's Chosen: The user gains a 10% increase in their jewels earned from quests and social interactions.
  • Rhongomyniad's Legend: The user gains a 10% reduction to their WC for quests.


Points Breakdown


  • unique
  • ring
  • Rhongomyniad's Chosen 10P, Rhongomyniad's Legend 10P

Total points Acquired: 20
Total Points Spent: 20



Last edited by Esperia on Tue Aug 01, 2023 3:05 am; edited 23 times in total

#35Vex 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Thu Jul 27, 2023 9:45 am

Vex
This Custom is denied

The effect is denied as it "warps" peoples perceptions of them to someone else "a past ruler".

The spell is denied as well as again it "warps" NPC's to believe you are the ruler. As well as the mana cost being at 2% as base transformations are 5% still currently. The making a limited magic enhanced past it's limit is as well a soft deny from me as part of this.

As well as appearance changing items are MM things or other wise restricted to a very few companions or races out side of that so it is denied.

#36Ryuko 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Thu Jul 27, 2023 1:09 pm

Ryuko

https://www.fairytailrp.com/t49215-ii-agatha-s-mask

last I checked this was not a MM effect in the slightest. I changed the cost of the transformation to 5%

#37Vex 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Thu Jul 27, 2023 4:49 pm

Vex
Esperia you linked a limited item, with a spell. It being limited shows it is a limited item and the spell is meant to be limited. The very spell on the item you just sent here says the words "The spell does not allow the user to change their appearance into that of an existing person (whether it's a player or non-player, dead or alive)." It is denied.

That magic is limited on the amount of swords, allowing it to add more sword is breaking the magics restriction. "The user may not freely choose between the number of swords they wish to summon. The spell can be re-cast only if all the summoned swords are destroyed or if the user deliberately cancels the spell." the swords are hard limited by rank of the spell and having more swords is adding damage to the magic by adding a free enhancement to the magic itself.

Biggest issue off all of this is you also don't have the S-rank slots for a Signature spell on a Unique custom as you only get one S rank slot on it and signatures cost two S rank slots.

#38Ryuko 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Sun Jul 30, 2023 2:55 am

Ryuko


General


Name: Fae-blessed ring
Slot: ring

Type: Ring

Class: Unique, 20p

Quantity: Custom

Element: Arcane

Durability: 1 S-rank

Details


Description: An artifact that ties into one of Caelum's greatest rulers of yore. The ring once was in possession by Arwen Pendragon and later left in the care of the Queen of the Fae-folk. Bestowed onto Esperia in the aftermath of the events in Caelum which saw her become a friend to the Fae-folk, since then Esperia has started to notice a remarkable increase in her luck when it comes to getting rewards from tasks.

Measurements: a beautiful ring with a gem at its center

Extra


Requirements:

Bonus:
  • N/A

Drawbacks:
  • N/A


Effects


  • Rhongomyniad's Legend: The user gains a 20% WC reduction to their quests.


Points Breakdown


  • unique
  • ring
  • Rhongomyniad's Legend - WC reduction to quests 20P

Total points Acquired: 20
Total Points Spent: 20

#39Takao 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Thu Aug 03, 2023 5:10 pm

Takao

This custom has been approved, please create a copy of the item and the source post in a reply post using its name and rarity for its title in the Customs section.

unique
ring
Rhongomyniad's Legend - WC reduction to quests 20P


Total points Acquired: 20
Total Points Spent: 20

#40Ryuko 

Esperia Ivalice's forge - Page 2 Empty Sat Aug 05, 2023 6:37 am

Ryuko


General


Name: Origins Pendant

Slot: Necklace

Type: Pendant

Class: Mythic - 40

Quantity: Custom

Element: Arcane

Durability: 3x S-rank

Details


Description: A mysterious pendant, its origins unknown, its purpose a tightly kept secret.

Measurements: it's a pendant?

Extra


Requirements: N/A

Bonus:
  • N/A

Drawbacks:
  • N/A


Effects


  • Whispers of the past: You receive an additional 20% jewels when completing quests.
  • Guidance of the past: You receive an additional 10% WC reduction when completing quests.
  • Unrestrained Love: Passive effects of the user's magic have a 10 meters increase in their range.




Points Breakdown


  • Mythic
  • necklace
  • Whispers of the past (20% increase in jewels) T4(20), Guidance of the past (WC reduction) T2 (10), Unrestrained Love T2 (10P)

Total points Acquired: 40
Total Points Spent: 40

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