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#1Kazuma Snow 

Kazuma Snow Empty Fri Apr 07, 2017 10:03 am

Kazuma Snow




Personal 


Name: Kazuma "Kaz" Snow

Age: 19

Gender: Kazuma Snow Male-symbol-40699

Class: Sorcerer

Rank: D-rank

Guild: Lamia Scale

Tattoo: None

Face: Oreki Houtarou from Hyouka

Appearance 




Height: 5'7

Weight: 75kg

Hair: Black

Eyes: Sea Green

Overall: Kaz is an averaged built guy who looks nothing at first glance but is rather athletic. He has messy black hair that can't seem to be fixed no matter how much you try. His facial features always looks bored(Which he almost is) but can sport some unreadable ones as well (although it is rare).  

He always wears his signature black 'Beats' headphones. His clothing can be really flexible but he is always seen wearing a simple Gray colored V neck shirt, same colored Pants, and Black Sneakers.

Extra: None

Personality 


Personality: He is an introvert-quiet, shy, and hates crowds. He is often bored with things and can only be excited when talking about music. He often lurks behind shadows or blend in the background while observing other people and only shows himself when he deems necessary. Same is true when he is watching the battle styles of his opponents or when he stumbles across discussions that he wasn't supposed to hear.

Though many perceive him as a dumb and lazy guy. Which is partly true especially on the latter part, he is shown to have a very high IQ in battles because of his observation skills and because of his high concentration level that is due to him not wasting energy from speaking.

He has a very high temperance and is usually seen as the calm one but the truth is, his one fatal flaw during battle is when he is angered. When he is triggered, he can't differentiate friends from foes anymore.

His saying in life is that "It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for who you are not", hence he is a pretty straightforward guy and always says what he thinks of you bluntly regardless of your feelings. The ironic thing about it though is that he is often seen as a "Big Brother" figure and his friends usually come to him for advices.

Likes:

  • Patting Girls Head: Like I said, Brother figure. Does it to every girl he meets for the first time regardless of age.

  • Strawberry flavored drinks: Loves the sweet yet sour taste at the same time. Although the color sometimes gets too bright for him.

  • Music: The one thing he deemed the world gave as his companion. It calms him down when he is angry but can have the opposite effect as well. Sometimes, he can't even do some things without hearing music(e.g. Cooking, Taking a Bath, Sleeping, etc.)

  • Hedgehogs: He gets some flashbacks tied to his past whenever he sees one although with an accompaniment of a very quick but painful headache. He has a pet one named Roll.

  • Observing things from a safe distance: He considers it as his hobby.


Dislikes:

  • Girl's Crying: Has a soft spot and he feels all guilty inside when witnessing a girl crying.

  • Party People or pretty much all extroverted people:He hates it when he is forced to mingle with others. 


Motivations:

  • Finding of his true purpose: As much as he is pained to admit, he is lost and will do anything-quest and whatnot if he thinks it might contribute to him finding out who he really was and his purpose of existence.

  • Finding someone he can tolerate: Although he likes being alone most of the time, he imagines sometimes what it would be like to have a girl by his side who he can tolerate whatever the situation may be. So far, no go.


Fears:

  • Cockroaches: He once ate a bread containing one when he was pranked by a fellow guildmate. Since then, just the thought of him being in the same room as a cockroach makes him go ballistic.
  • Deep Sea: Just imagining being at the middle of the ocean gives him the creeps.


Magic 



Magic Name: Cryogenesis

Magic Element: Ice

Magic Description:Ability to reduce the kinetic energy of atoms and thus reduce temperature. Can be used to control, generate, or absorb ice.
Although he is much more skilled in freezing things and generating ice blasts rather than sculpting things with his power. If he do so, His energy will be reduced greatly.

Spell Types:
Offensive: Can generate Ice Blast, Can use Ice spells
Defensive: Can generate Ice Armor around himself.
Supplementary: Can reduce the temperature to gain an advantage in battle.
Self-Buff Strength: Can fuse ice to certain body parts to strengthen it. This is made possible by him utilizing the freezing potential of his magic.

Offensive Spell Price 1x
Defensive Spell Price 1x
Supplementary Spell Price 2x
Self-Buff Strength Spell Price 3x

History 


History: 
|The Awakening|

Not much is known about him due to him not being able to recall things before his 15th birthday. Although he "awoke" in a frozen river when he was 15 noticing a man with blue hair fighting a bunch of wolves. He was astonished by the strength of the guy but it seems that he was too enraged beating up all the wolves to notice that a cunning wolf was already on his back and was ready to maul on him. That's when he reacted out of instinct and attacked the said wolf with an ice blast. The guy shoots him a thankful glance before resuming the battle. When the battle was done, the guy approached him and asked who he was and what was he doing there. Kazuma told him that he didn't really remember anything aside from his name and age. The guy then introduced himself as Yuuto, a member of the guild "Lamia Scale".

|Growing up|

He agreed to be a member of Lamia Scale as soon as Yuuto mentioned something about a free room. He was then introduced to the guild master and became a permanent member of the guild. He underwent a very strict training regimen from some of the senior members and was raised just like any other Lamia Scale Member, toughly love as what others like to call it.



Last edited by KazumaSnow on Sun Apr 09, 2017 8:58 pm; edited 8 times in total

#2Kon 

Kazuma Snow Empty Fri Apr 07, 2017 9:28 pm

Kon

Hallo Kazuma, as this has the header (Final) I'll get to work on grading your character application first off I'm going to need you to use the appropriate template which can use obtained by copying and pasting the code from this box:

Once you have all the content from your current application give this topic a bump and I'll continue overlooking it.

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#3Kazuma Snow 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sat Apr 08, 2017 5:40 am

Kazuma Snow
Thank you for guiding me. I already did your request. What should I do now?



#4Kon 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sat Apr 08, 2017 5:54 am

Kon

Remove He loves music and hedgehogs. from your personality as it is repeated in your likes and please elaborate on those as well. Provide one more fear that is commonly found, adjust your magic to explain all of the spell types your class/magic can use in your case: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary and self-buff strength spells. you'll also have to remove the mention of this: Ability to create permafrost(Although a forbidden spell). Once used, the wielder must sacrifice one body part which will be frozen permanently. Aside from that refrain from using the name of the Lamia Scale guild master as it isn't known instead I'd recommend having the guild member in your history simply be a lamia scale member.



#5Kazuma Snow 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sat Apr 08, 2017 10:49 pm

Kazuma Snow
Done as requested.



#6Kon 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sat Apr 08, 2017 11:17 pm

Kon

Unfortunately you will have to remove the portion regarding Can use ice as a means to temporarily stop bleeding of wounds(Applicable to Allies) which can help him last longer in battle despite being wounded. As it implies that it also performs healing a function available for your class.



#7Kazuma Snow 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sun Apr 09, 2017 6:29 pm

Kazuma Snow
It is done



#8Kon 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sun Apr 09, 2017 8:45 pm

Kon

Remove this He has also a 2x resistance to Ice spells. From your magic as there is no way to have immunity or resistances against an element unless you have specific races or magics.



#9Kazuma Snow 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sun Apr 09, 2017 8:48 pm

Kazuma Snow
I'm finished removing it. Sorry for making things hard for you man. I suck at this



#10Kon 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sun Apr 09, 2017 8:53 pm

Kon

Reword this Can absorb ice to recover some energy. Can reduce the temperature to gain an advantage in battle. As the first component implies that it is Dragon Slayer magic and the second portion can be moved to the supplementary section. I'll recommend having something along the lines of Using the freezing potential of the magic the user may strength their body by infusing it with their frost/ice magic



#11Kazuma Snow 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sun Apr 09, 2017 9:00 pm

Kazuma Snow
Thanks for the suggestion, I also finished editing as requested.



#12Kon 

Kazuma Snow Empty Sun Apr 09, 2017 9:29 pm

Kon

Congratulations, this application has been approved.



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