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#1Shinko 

Prologue Arc: Starters | Completed Empty Sun May 06, 2018 9:17 am

Shinko
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Magic Name: Ethereal Literature

Magic Element: Light

Magic Description: Ethereal Literature is a Caster Magic and is a form of Letter Magic. The user writes an action in the air in third-person including narrative and literature forms e.g. "User indulges their energy and makes a bright, ball of light." The spells cannot appear in an instant and the user is required to do the actions their sentence include; and only certain and registered actions will enable the spells. This magic allows the user to use both offensive and defensive spells, supplementary, and self-buff: speed spells.

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Name: Resfeber
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ethereal Literature
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: 03 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user writes a sentence in thin air of placing their hands in their chest, forming a ball of light in the size of 0.5 x 0.5 meters e.g. "User breathes in and places their hands in their chest, drawing magic into a form of a ball"; and then releasing the form 3 meters into the direction of the foe, dealing 1 D-Rank Bludgeoning Damage.

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Name: Nemofilist
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ethereal Literature
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: 05 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user writes a sentence in thin air about pointing their hands to target e.g. "User points their hand to a foe, committing focus and attacking the enemy."; following the action of what they have written, the user makes an energy of light in a form of a fan as big as 0.5 x 0.5 meters through the finger they are using to point, launching at the foe in the range as far as 5 meters, dealing 1 D-Rank Piercing Damage.

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Name: Cliffhanger
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ethereal Literature
Type: Defensive
Element: Light
Range: 05 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user writes a sentence in thin air about pulling (something) off the ground and raising upwards e.g. "User places their hand on the ground, pulling it up to protect themselves from harm."; making a thin, structure of a light barrier that reaches 5 meters from the user at the size of 1 x 1 meters, protecting them from 2x D-Rank Spells/1x C-Rank Spell.

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Name: Novaturient
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ethereal Literature
Type: Self-Buff: Speed
Element: Light
Range: 01 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user writes in thin air about crouching or lowering down e.g. "User slowly crouches as they draw magic from their hands, empowering speed and light."; causing the user to increase their speed to D-Rank. While this spell is sustaining, the user's chest and legs glow with a light pink aura.

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Name: Nefelibata
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ethereal Literature
Type: Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: Personal
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user writes in thin air about placing their hands in the opposite shoulder e.g. "User places their right hand on their left shoulder and her left hand to her right, drawing light; allowing them to lift themselves up, enveloping a light body as they join with the wind."; allowing the user to leap up to 5 meters off the ground.



Last edited by Shinko on Tue May 08, 2018 9:23 am; edited 3 times in total

#2Nastasya 

Prologue Arc: Starters | Completed Empty Sun May 06, 2018 1:31 pm

Nastasya
Hi Shinko let's go over your spells~


  • Resferber: please change the range of your spell. In your description you say 5 while in the list it says 3. Every spell needs a size and as you can see in regulations a D rank cant be bigger than 1 x 1 meters. So please state a size to your spell.

  • Nemofilist: again please state a size of the spell.

  • Cliffhanger: please state a size again and pick one range; keep in mind that it is a maximum range it does not necessarily mean that it will be up to that range.

  • Novaturient: please change your amount of stat points (5 points) to: changes the rank with a D-rank. In case the points will be changed in the future, you won't have to edit your spell. And change range to: personal.

  • Nefelibata: flight spells are possible from B rank or highter. So unfortunately this one is denied.



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#3Shinko 

Prologue Arc: Starters | Completed Empty Sun May 06, 2018 11:25 pm

Shinko
Done editing! Ready for re-checking ^^

#4Nastasya 

Prologue Arc: Starters | Completed Empty Mon May 07, 2018 10:46 am

Nastasya
So a clear-up question from me; how do you cast your spells? Do you write them like what you wrote between "..." and than execute the motion in person for every spell you cast?


  • Sorry forgot to mention before but you need to use a modifier or spell damage type for your offensive spells: here

  • Cliffhanger: the way you wrote it now is that it's 5 meters of the ground, that means 5 meters above the ground to me and thus is not very useful to you as a person, would you reprase this?

  • Novaturient: change range to personal.



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#5Shinko 

Prologue Arc: Starters | Completed Empty Mon May 07, 2018 10:28 pm

Shinko
To answer your question: Yes, the user is required to submit the motion they had written since that written sentence is the enabler of the spells.

Bumping again, hehe ^^

#6Nastasya 

Prologue Arc: Starters | Completed Empty Tue May 08, 2018 2:02 am

Nastasya
Almost there~

  • Resferber: unfortunately light can't do burning damage that is left for Solar and Fire spells. Please change the damage type.

  • Cliffhanger: please change ground: ".. that reaches 5 meters from the ground at the size.." to either you or user: ".. that reaches 5 meters from the user at the size.."
    - it means you would have full support of the spell around you.



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#7Shinko 

Prologue Arc: Starters | Completed Empty Tue May 08, 2018 9:24 am

Shinko
So close owo

Bump! Ready for re-checking!

#8Nastasya 

Prologue Arc: Starters | Completed Empty Tue May 08, 2018 2:37 pm

Nastasya
These spells have been approved.



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