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Manji Starter Spells (5D)

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#1Chisu Lau Manji 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Mon Oct 02, 2017 4:11 pm

Chisu Lau Manji



SPIRIT OF THE SAMURAI
"God's power is in your dark soul."



Name: Spirit of The Samurai

Element: Spirit (Non-Elemental)

Description:  Spirit of the Samurai (사무라이 정신 Wǔshì ui Sīngshén) is a magic that utilizes the user's lineage. This magic is based around channeling the user's energy and magic enchanting various tools and items. It utilizes spiritual essence around the caster.









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Name: Chilyo
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Spirit of The Samurai
Type: Healing
Element: Non-Elemental
Range: 5 Meter (Targeting)
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster raises both of their hands above their head,
leaving them vulnerable for an attack. The caster begins to call upon the spirit of Chilyo, whose name must be mentioned for the spell to work. The spell will only be instantaneous if the spirit's name is mentioned, if not, the spell will be delayed for a second. An aura around the user in a green color will emit from the ground. Anyone in the radius will be healed (D-Ranked), excluding the caster. (The caster must pay additional Mana for each individual effected within range.)

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Name: Mugu
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Spirit of The Samurai
Type: Other-Buff
Element: Non-Elemental
Range: 5m
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster calls upon the spirit of Mugu, a great large armored samurai. The targets's Endurance is increased by D-rank and at the time of casting, their body glows a purple aura for a few seconds. While sustained the aura will fade away.

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Name: Bangpae Geom
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Spirit of The Samurai
Type: Defensive
Element: Non-Elemental
Range: 1 Meter radius
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster opens their palm and creates ten large swords which hover in front the user. They cannot deal damage, but instead act as shields. If one sword takes damage, they all take damage. Together they can withstand 2D damage. Shield is 1x1m

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Name: Mogsum
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Spirit of The Samurai
Type: Healing
Element: Non-Elemental
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Visually, this spell is quite conventional, and has its problems. Unlike other healing spells, this spell takes the appearance of an offense spell. The caster points their palm at their target and a large beam 1m in diameter is cast in their direction. The beam itself will heal the target for D-rank, rather than deal damage. The caster resorts to the evil spirit of Mogsum who often was a trickster making nothing seem what they appeared. Can only effect 1 person per post

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Name: Gwon-wi
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Spirit of The Samurai
Type: Other-Buff
Element: Non-Elemental
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster clenches their fist and calls upon the dark spirit of Gwon-wi. A red ring with symbols surrounds the user. The ring is 1m wide. The caster then points at their target. Their target's strength is increased by D-rank. The ring will be around them as long as the spell is sustained, as well as their target will emit a red aura.



Last edited by Chi Lau Manji on Wed Apr 11, 2018 5:58 am; edited 7 times in total

#2Venus Rosé 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Thu Oct 05, 2017 10:26 am

Venus Rosé

Hello, I'll be grading your spells.

Chilyo:

  • An AoE healing spell is not allowed and can only be targeted at a single person. Please make the changes.


Mugu:

  • Approved.


Bangpae Geom:

  • Defensive spells cannot surround the user's entire body, it is only allowed at S-Rank. Domes are not also allowed as well, but half a dome is fine.


Mogsum:

  • Approved.


Gwon-wi:

  • Approved.


Bump when edited.



#3Chisu Lau Manji 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Thu Oct 05, 2017 4:11 pm

Chisu Lau Manji
Not even if the healing was split evenly to anyone in the radius? Could I have it target just 1 person within the radius?

Bangpae Geom - So like half meaning only front or behind yeh? Could I have it be two casts at double the cost to be two half domes or no?

#4Venus Rosé 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Fri Oct 06, 2017 10:20 am

Venus Rosé

Chilyo:

  • While AoE healing isn't allowed, multiple people can be healed within the spell's range as long as you pay the mana for each additional person.


Bangpae Geom:

  • No, you cannot pay double the mana to do it. Only the front, behind or sides are allowed.


Bump when done.



#5Chisu Lau Manji 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Fri Oct 06, 2017 11:07 am

Chisu Lau Manji
Bump. Hopefully these edits are good~!

#6Venus Rosé 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Fri Oct 06, 2017 11:19 am

Venus Rosé

Chilyo:

  • The range cannot be 1 meter radius since AoE healing is not allowed so please put the range as 5 meters -- the spell's range.


Bump when edited.



#7Chisu Lau Manji 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Fri Oct 06, 2017 11:20 am

Chisu Lau Manji
How about now?

#8Venus Rosé 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Fri Oct 06, 2017 11:22 am

Venus Rosé

These spells have been approved.



#9Akira Shimada 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Sat Apr 07, 2018 2:02 am

Akira Shimada
Hi there, these spells have been pulled for re-review, since the magic and the spells require a few tweaks.

Firstly, could you please remove the fact that the magic can be taught to other users, as a basic magic it cannot possess this trait.

Since these spells are the same as Bodak's, the following changes need to be made for these spells too.


  • Chilyo: Please add the rank of the healing done.
  • Mugu: Denied, since your class cannot perform self-buffs
  • Bangpae Geom: Add a motion to cast this spell and the dimensions of the sword shield generated.
  • Mogsum: Could you remove the data about the speed, since the numbers maybe subject to change. If the beam is capable of healing multiple targets, additional mana needs to be paid and it may only heal a target once per post. (Note: Since this is a healing spell, the dimensions are ok, but true offensive spells cannot have a dimension that big, at 1m diameter, it'll be considered a moving AoE)
  • Gwon-wi: Currently this spell acts a illuminating spell as well as a buff. It may only do one of the following. If it is going to be a buff, please change the type to 'other-buff' and instead of the number add the rank of the buff.


Bump when edited! :D



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#10Chisu Lau Manji 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Sat Apr 07, 2018 8:10 am

Chisu Lau Manji
ok

#11Akira Shimada 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Sun Apr 08, 2018 12:32 am

Akira Shimada
Firstly, could you please remove the fact that the magic can be taught to other users, as a basic magic it cannot possess this trait.

Since these spells are the same as Bodak's, the following changes need to be made for these spells too.


  • Chilyo: Please add the rank of the healing done. - Approved.

  • Mugu: Denied, since your class cannot perform self-buffs, you cannot cast the endurance buff on yourself, it has to be on another user. Mention the rank of the buff, since points may be subject to change.

  • Bangpae Geom: Add a motion to cast this spell and the dimensions of the sword shield generated.

  • Mogsum: Could you remove the data about the speed, since the numbers may be subject to change.. Please add that if the beam is capable of healing multiple targets, additional mana needs to be paid per user. It may only heal a target once per post. (Note: Since this is a healing spell, the dimensions are ok, but true offensive spells cannot have a dimension that big, at 1m diameter, it'll be considered a moving AoE)

  • Gwon-wi: The user who has been buffed may glow, but it cannot act as an illuminating spell. So while they may glow, it is not going to aid in offering vision at night, for example. If it is going to be a buff, please change the type to 'other-buff' and instead of the number add the rank of the buff.


I've struck out the parts that have been addressed, bump when the rest is done too :).



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#12Chisu Lau Manji 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Sun Apr 08, 2018 6:38 am

Chisu Lau Manji
ok

#13Akira Shimada 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Sun Apr 08, 2018 7:09 am

Akira Shimada
Firstly, could you please remove the fact that the magic can be taught to other users, as a basic magic it cannot possess this trait.

Since these spells are the same as Bodak's, the following changes need to be made for these spells too.


  • Chilyo: - Approved.

  • Mugu: Mention the rank of the buff, instead of the points, since the points may be subject to change and then it is ready for approval.

  • Bangpae Geom: Add a motion to cast this spell Instead of per sword, could you just add the dimensions of the final shield that is generated? At D-rank it can be a maximum of 1x1 meter in area.

  • Mogsum: Could you remove the data about the speed, since the numbers may be subject to change. It may only heal a target once per post.. Sorry, forgot to ask you to edit the rank of the healing done... Could you add D rank healing on a single target per post?

  • Gwon-wi: - Approved



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#14Chisu Lau Manji 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Sun Apr 08, 2018 1:45 pm

Chisu Lau Manji
. . . ok

#15Akira Shimada 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Sun Apr 08, 2018 3:00 pm

Akira Shimada
Almost there!


  • Chilyo: - Approved.

  • Mugu: Approved.

  • Bangpae Geom: Approved

  • Mogsum: Please specify it can heal a single target once per post. (Post instead of time per post, just to avoid confusion in the way it can be used.)

  • Gwon-wi: - Approved



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#16Chisu Lau Manji 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Wed Apr 11, 2018 5:59 am

Chisu Lau Manji
ok

#17Akira Shimada 

Manji Starter Spells (5D) Empty Wed Apr 11, 2018 6:01 am

Akira Shimada
These spells have been approved.



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