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#1Sylvester Hercules 

Hurricane Starters [Done] Empty Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:08 am

Sylvester Hercules
Name: Squall
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hurricane Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The caster swipes his hand horizontally, causing a ball of wind to form in front of him that is 1ft in diameter. He then strikes this ball of wind with his palm; this motion causes it to take the form of a small whirlwind, 3m tall and 1m in diameter. The whirlwind travels for 5m in the direction of the palm strike before dissipating, and deals a total of D-rank damage to a single target.

Name: Bubble
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hurricane Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: Up to 1m.
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster creates a bubble which can size up to 1m in diameter, the inside of which contains breathable oxygen. If a person puts his head inside the bubble while underwater, they would be able to breathe relatively normally. The bubbles last for as long as the caster can sustain the mana cost.


Name: Whip
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hurricane Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster materializes water in one of his hands by making a horizontal swiping motion with his arm. By swinging the arm in a desired direction, the water extends outwards into a thin whip which can wrap around targets within its range and pull them closer to the caster.  The whip itself is 2m long; being made of water, it can stretch to reach a target up to a maximum of 5m away. This construct lasts for as long as the caster can sustain its mana cost. The whip can sustain a total of D-rank damage dealt towards it before it breaks.

Name: Force
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hurricane
Type: Supplementary
Element: Wind
Range: 1 Meter
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The caster outstretches a palm in the direction of a desired target within 1m of him. From this palm, a 1m diameter blast of forceful wind magic is emitted, which deals no damage but knocks affected targets back to a distance 5m away from the caster.


Name: Cloudfoot
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hurricane
Type: Supplementary
Element: Wind
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The caster pushes off of the ground with one or both feet; in doing so, he propels a blast of air from his soles which pushes him forward in the direction which he stepped. The speed and distance of the dash scale with the caster’s speed stat.



Last edited by Sylvester Hercules on Mon Oct 16, 2017 10:27 am; edited 4 times in total

#2Seira 

Hurricane Starters [Done] Empty Thu Oct 12, 2017 3:10 pm

Seira
Hello Sylvester,
I'll be your moderator.

  • Squall: Spell deals D-rank damage once, to one target which it hits (not any or every target), before ending - please change that.

  • Drizzle: This is an AoE that deals no damage, the maximum size for your cloud/rain would be 1 meter diameter, so please change that. Also, the cloud has to be within the range of the spell, which is 5 meters here. Please fix that as well to prevent misunderstandings. Also, "snapping fingers" isn't sufficient as a motion, so please choose a more obvious motion here.

  • Haze: Once again, D-rank AoE dimensions are 1 meter diameter, somewhere within 5 meters of you, so change this. Also, with a D-rank spell you could only debuff 10% of someone's vision within that spell.

  • Sense: First, please add an element.

    From the Rules:

    Examples would be that using Wind to sense around you would only vaguely indicate if someone was moving near you or not, not their exact movements at all. This would make it an useful spell when the user is unable to see something, or in case the user wants know if someone is sneaking on them from behind. You are still unaware whether they are doing a punch, kick, stab, slash, shoot etc.

    Please adjust your description, since you would only notice the presence of people, probably not objects since they do not move.

    Also, unless you want this to be only for a moment, change duration to "sustain".

  • Cloudfoot: Denied. Not only are soundless spells A-rank and higher, flight spells are also B-rank and higher and this is both, doesn't matter if you float 1inch, 5 inches or 5 meters.

Bump when changes are made.



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#3Sylvester Hercules 

Hurricane Starters [Done] Empty Sun Oct 15, 2017 9:11 pm

Sylvester Hercules
Bumped. Should've just read the rules better, my bad on that one

#4Seira 

Hurricane Starters [Done] Empty Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:40 am

Seira
Whip: Please specify how big/long the whip is. Also, no dealing damage and/or pulling closer - please choose one of those options and adjust type accordingly (offensive or supplementary).

Force: I know it's just a blast of wind, but please give me an idea of the size of that blast.

Bump when changes are made.



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#5Sylvester Hercules 

Hurricane Starters [Done] Empty Mon Oct 16, 2017 10:28 am

Sylvester Hercules
Bump, ready for review

#6Seira 

Hurricane Starters [Done] Empty Mon Oct 16, 2017 11:51 am

Seira
These spells have been approved.



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