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#1Oliver Oxford 

Oliver's first spells Empty Wed Feb 22, 2017 7:43 pm

Oliver Oxford
Name: Kodiak Claw
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Spirit Guide Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Clenching his fists and curling his toes before uncurling all them, Oliver envelops his hands in a cyan flame, allowing him to throw a series of punches, dealing 1/2 amount of D-rank damage for each blow that lands. The shape of the spell is reminiscent of a bear's claws and paws.

Name: Flock Swarm
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Spirit Fire Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Crossing his arms while pointing his arms downward over his stomach, index, middle and ring fingers tucked into his palms, Oliver creates five floating green will-o-wisp balls. Spreading his arms out creates a series of fireballs that float in front of him at different heights as much as a third of a meter higher than Oliver's head. He then snaps his fingers which will send each ball out, aiming them at different areas.  Each shot takes the shape of a bird before it nears its target and spirals into a conic bullet shape, dealing 1/5 D-tier damage per strike. Each projectile is 20 centimeters with each split off bird shape being about 4 centimeters each.

Name: Puffing Ball
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Spirit Guide Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Clapping his hands together before lifting up overhead and spreading them out to his sides, Oliver creates a 0.1m cubed sized sphere of deep cyan flame.  He will then lob it at his intended target and blow up a 1m cubed sized area of D-tier damage. The spell's shape is reminiscent of a puffer fish, expanding itself out when it strikes the ground.

Name: Fox Tail
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Text Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Extending an arm outwards while leaning in the direction of his arm being extended, Oliver clenches a fist before snapping his fingers with a flick of the wrist, creating a spark that turns into a green ball of flame with a fox tail sticking out of it. Throwing the ball of flame will give it direction and as it nears the intended target the tail section will rapidly increase in size and spin around the ball in a 1 meter SQUARED area, shaping itself much like a large bladed shuriken rather than forming into a large cubed AoE.  This technique deals D-tier damage.

Name: Wilting Blossom
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Spirit Guide Magic
Type: Debuff
Element: Fire
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: One of Oliver's non-animal themed spells, taking the form of a seed shaped ball of purple flame with no fumes coming off of it.  It is formed by Oliver holding closed fingers over an open palm and pulling outwards while spreading his fingers.  Applying it to a foe's body results in the shape of a flower showing up on their body before it starts to wilt away, diminishing the endurance by a D-tier buff. The shape of the seed is 45 centimeters by 7 centimeters.



Last edited by Oliver Oxford on Mon Feb 27, 2017 9:02 pm; edited 3 times in total

#2Oliver Oxford 

Oliver's first spells Empty Thu Feb 23, 2017 9:00 pm

Oliver Oxford
Bump for 24-hours passing, awaiting approval.

#3Selena Maelstrom 

Oliver's first spells Empty Fri Feb 24, 2017 1:35 am

Selena Maelstrom
Kodiak Claw: I see what you're doing its just a little confusing. You are unable to decide the amoubt of damage your spell does, it needs to be set. Imo a sustained spell that covered both your hands and dealt 1/2 d rank damage for each claw would be easier.

Flock Swarm: Need dimensions please.

Puffing Ball: You have it classed as debuff, please change it to offensive.

Fox Tail: Emm 1.5 D rank damage? Yeah no only D rank damage and i dont understand what you mean by "for forgoing a cubbed Aoe." If you could explain it to me that'd be great!

Wilting blossom: Dimensions please.

Bump when done.



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#4Oliver Oxford 

Oliver's first spells Empty Fri Feb 24, 2017 10:01 pm

Oliver Oxford
Bump at Selena's request

#5Rowan Vincent 

Oliver's first spells Empty Mon Feb 27, 2017 2:14 pm

Rowan Vincent
Yo, I'll be taking over these for the moment.

Kodiak Claw:
  • The range on this should be just 0 meters since you need to physically hit someone to deal the damage. Unless you're adding size to the flames that is and not simply wrapping your hands and feet in fire.


Flock Swarm:
  • Need to know where these five orbs are made. Are they located somewhere near your body or are you spawning them anywhere within a fiver meter area?


Wilting Blossom:
  • Defense isn't a statistic. I'll assume you meant Endurance, but you'll still need to change that.
  • Also, you shouldn't state the points redacted from an opponent's stat. Just state that their Endurance is reduced by a D-rank debuff. That will suffice.


Give me a bump when you're all set.



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#6Oliver Oxford 

Oliver's first spells Empty Mon Feb 27, 2017 8:17 pm

Oliver Oxford
Bizzity Bump for you Rowan, did the edits.

#7Rowan Vincent 

Oliver's first spells Empty Mon Feb 27, 2017 8:58 pm

Rowan Vincent
Kodiak Claw:
  • If you're going to have the spell deal 1/2 D rank damage you'll need to limit this to 2 limbs. If you coat all four limbs in fire you will only be able to deal 1/4 D rank damage with each hit. Please specify.



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#8Oliver Oxford 

Oliver's first spells Empty Mon Feb 27, 2017 9:02 pm

Oliver Oxford
Bump for you Rowan

#9Rowan Vincent 

Oliver's first spells Empty Tue Feb 28, 2017 9:58 am

Rowan Vincent
Congratulations, these spells have been approved.



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