Breath of the Forest Spells (Rank D Starters)

Eteri · Tue Jan 10, 2023 5:56 pm

Guild :

Fairy-Tail

Jewels :

802,500

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Wood Elf

Experience :

25,250

Reputation :

800

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Breath of the Forest

Strength :

3

Speed :

15

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

25

Mana :

510

Name: Breath Cut
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Breath of the Forest
Type: Offensive AOE
Element: Wind
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user raises their left arm with fingers spread out and a wind magic seal appears in front of them. Then a wind magic seal will appear on the ground beneath the intended targets, a gust of sharp wind will jet out from where they stand, and cut everyone in the area near them in a 1 meter diameter range, 0.5 meters away from them.

Name: Breath Touch
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Breath of the Forest
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 5 (+5) meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user presses their hands together, palms facing each other, and touches their target creating a wind magic circle in the process, upon touching their target, they will receive 1x D-Rank damage.

Name: Breath Defend
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Breath of the Forest
Type: Defensive
Element: Wind
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user crosses their hands together, palms facing inward, activating the spell creating a wind magic circle beneath them, they can then apply the spell by touching a target covering them in a defensive spell with 2x D-rank durability. The cover can be applied to both the user and to others and maybe manipulated by the caster for what it covers when first casting the spell. I.e whether it covers certain body parts, or certain pieces of equipment. The cover itself is transparent, creating no glare in the sunlight nor capable of impairing the vision of the recipient. The user must continue to sustain this spell for the effect to be maintained, paying for each person impacted by this spell.

Name: Breath Speed
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Breath of the Forest
Type: Buff
Element: Wind
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps the point of their foot on the ground and creates a wind magic circle beneath them in the process, upon doing so they will receive an D-Rank speed buff. The user must continue to sustain this spell for effect to be maintained.

Last edited by Eteri on Sun Jan 15, 2023 9:34 am; edited 4 times in total

**Saturn** · Sat Jan 14, 2023 3:51 pm

Epithet :

Justiciar of the Damned

Guild :

Rune Knights

Jewels :

15,025,250

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Demon (Speed)

Experience :

957,600

Reputation :

18,500

Class :

Spellsinger 🛇

Magic :

Darkness Dragon Slayer

Aura :

Hermit

Strength :

164

Speed :

127

Constitution :

61

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

5,450

Weapon :

Sleeping Dragon

Head :

Rings of Saturn

Cape :

Ormus Hundred Hoods ↂ

Ring :

Greeds' mark

Modification :

Crystal Implants

Companion :

Echo
Vestige of the Outsider

Howdy there Eteri!

I'll be handling your spell reviews today and I have some fixes you'll need to impliment before I can accept these!

So in general, enchancements and benefits from the class aren't added when you apply the spells. Instead they are added in post after they have been basically made. Ergo I need you to rewrite these in a fashion of where your class modifiers and your enchantments aren't 'present'. So if you switch classes down the line your spells are still valid!

Breath Cut: so multi-target spells are generally aoes! So if you're to write out that I'll need you to change it's 'type' to offensive aoe. Your actual range for the spell is 5 meters and then there's the aoe itself that is 1 meter in size. You'll need a magical seal origin and a magical seal end point as aoe's require that! the dimension is if you want to make it a projectile that can be interrupted and it'd blow up where it hits. [if you want to go that route feel free!]

Breath touch: This spell is more or less fine! Just needs the general improvements.

Breath Defend: Generally defensive spells can only be yourself or someone else, separating out the two since one wouldn't have any range and the other requires it to be more of a barrier of some kind. I know that's a little disappointing but if you want to pick between it being yourself or a 'target beneficiary'. Also at this rank were you to 'defend' someone or yourself it's limited to a single limb! Furtherso: You can multi-target but it would split the durability between the targets.

Breath Speed: Fine other than the earlier mentioned general changes!

Eteri · Sun Jan 15, 2023 9:35 am

Guild :

Fairy-Tail

Jewels :

802,500

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Wood Elf

Experience :

25,250

Reputation :

800

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Breath of the Forest

Strength :

3

Speed :

15

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

25

Mana :

510

Okay! I've made the general improvements aka removing the enchantment of invisible magic seals.

Breath Cut: I added a point of origin and end point.

Breath Defend: I actually copied this from the list of pre-approved spells. It is almost word for word from the forum. This is the example given.

Name: Body Defensive Spell
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Arcane Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 25 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user thrusts down their arm activating the spell creating a magic circle beneath them, they can then apply the spell by touching a target covering them in a defensive spell with 2x S-Rank durability. The cover can be applied to both the user and to others and maybe manipulated by the caster for what it covers when first casting the spell. I.e whether it covers certain body parts, or certain pieces of equipment. The cover itself is transparent, creating no glare in the sunlight nor capable of impairing the vision of the recipient. The user must continue to sustain this spell for the effect to be maintained, paying for each person impacted by this spell.