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#1Jeremiah Ali 

on Wed Feb 21, 2018 12:53 pm

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Name: Flame Wall
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Jeremiah rises his arm up before a 2 meter tall wall of fire erupts anywhere within 10 meters of him. This spell does C rank burning damage; 2nd degree burns upon contact.

Name: Demonic Aura (Lvl. 1)
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Strength Buff
Element: Fire
Range: -
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Jeremiah touches the left side of his chest with either of his hands before activating an aura of white flames around his body. This spell increases Jeremiah's strength by 10.

Name: Spit Fire
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Instant
Effect: Jeremiah shouts "Spit Fire" loudly before he releases a 1 meter in diameter spitball of flames that can reach up to 10 meters away.

Name: Embrace
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Jeremiah extends both of his arms outwards which causes flames to coat his hands and whatever he is holding, doing C rank burning damage when the flames touch something.

Name: Hell Step
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Supplmentary
Element: Fire
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Instant
Effect: Jeremiah dashes forward in a single direction at his own physical speed up to 10 meters away.



Last edited by Jeremiah on Sun Feb 25, 2018 1:07 pm; edited 4 times in total

#2Adelaide Sokolov 

on Fri Feb 23, 2018 2:00 am

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  • Flame Border: In your post I think you meant 2 meters diameter not 2 meters for the range of the falme border, so edit that please.

  • Demonic Aura (lvl 1): Approved

  • Spit Fire: You mention that the distance is bigger than the average novice spell, remove this, apart from that the maximum range of of a C-rank spell is 10, do you mean the size of the spell? Because than again the maximum diameters of a C-rank spell can be 2 meters, else it ranks down.

  • Embrace: So did you intend to have the spell only be active once you move your hand forward and have the blast or also when you already coat your hands in flames?

  • Hell Step: Approved




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#3Jeremiah Ali 

on Fri Feb 23, 2018 3:10 pm

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For the first spell I'm saying the flames themselves reach 2 meters in height. For spitfire le rules say you can extend the range of spells if you give it a drawback, mine is an extra post of cooldown. & for Embrace I fixed a few words to clarify.

Bump.

#4Jeremiah Ali 

on Sun Feb 25, 2018 11:29 am

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Bump

#5Adelaide Sokolov 

on Sun Feb 25, 2018 12:10 pm

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  • Flame Wall: approved

  • Spitfire: an extra cooldown isn't considered a major drawback. Considering you can buy items and companions to get rid of cooldowns. Please remove the part of: further than any novice spell.

  • Embrace: The thing with this spell is that it's two in one. So you either have flames on your hands that do burning damage or you make the blast by moving your hands forward.




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#6Jeremiah Ali 

on Sun Feb 25, 2018 12:20 pm

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Gotcha. Bumpity

#7Adelaide Sokolov 

on Sun Feb 25, 2018 12:51 pm

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Almost there!


  • Spit Fire: change it into: The user can not move while using this spell and for one post after it has been cast.
    than it can be considered a major drawback.




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#8Jeremiah Ali 

on Sun Feb 25, 2018 1:10 pm

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I realized that it's not worth it lol!

Bump

#9Adelaide Sokolov 

on Sun Feb 25, 2018 1:15 pm

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These spells have been approved for training.




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#10Jeremiah Ali 

on Tue Mar 13, 2018 4:41 pm

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#11Hikari Snow 

on Tue Mar 13, 2018 9:44 pm

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These spells have been approved for usage.

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