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Curse Magic (Starter Spells)

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#1Thorn Vancarr 

Curse Magic (Starter Spells) Empty Thu Feb 08, 2018 2:32 pm

Thorn Vancarr
Name: Curse Magic: Demonic Claw
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Curse Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Dark
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Thorn swings her left arm to her side, clenches her fist, then releases it opening her hand wide and causing demonic aura to come out from it and tearing the bandages covering her arm away, revealing her demonic left arm. She can use this arm to deal D-Rank cutting damage and extend it’s reach up to 5 meters. If she doesn’t pump her magic into it though it begins to hurt and she magically re-wraps it in bandages to stop the spell and end the pain.

Name: Curse Magic: Deadly Scythe
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Curse Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Dark
Range: 1 Meter AoE diameter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Thorn swings her bandaged left arm from her chest to her side, causing the end of her hand to burst forward in demonic energy and curve out behind her like a scythe, ½ a meter long from the end of her fingers with the curved blade being 1 ½ meters long. She then swings her arm and body around in a circle causing all within a 1-meter diameter to be hit.

Name: Curse Magic: Crippling Fate
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Curse Magic
Type: Debuff - Strength
Element: Dark
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Thorn brings her left hand to her mouth and either says of whispers the spells name, causing dark runes to rise from her hand. She then looks at her target and releases the runes, going slowly if trying to be subtle and quickly if not. Depending of the one targeted they may or may not know they’ve been sapped -5 points of their strength until they use it if Thorn is try to be sneaky.

Name: Curse Magic: Brutes Favor
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Curse Magic
Type: Self-Buff – Strength
Element: Dark
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Thorn opens her left palm in front of her and utters the spells name, caused cursed runes to float in front of her. She then brings the runes to her chest and her body briefly flares with a demonic aura, giving her +5 strength.

Name: Curse Magic: Shadow Sneak
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Curse Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Dark
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect:After uttering the spells name Thorn clenches her fist then releases it, causing runes to appear on the underside of her arm. She then uses it’s power to pull nearby shadows over her like a blanket, hiding her from view with a 20% Transparency rate. She can move up to 5 meters in the shadows until she has to re-cast the spell to stay hidden and can only move from shadow to shadow if they are attached. Attacking or being attacked breaks the spell but not casting subtle spells.



Last edited by Thorn Vancarr on Tue Feb 13, 2018 12:30 am; edited 2 times in total

#2Venus Rosé 

Curse Magic (Starter Spells) Empty Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:06 pm

Venus Rosé

Hello, I'll be grading your spells.

Curse Magic: Demonic Claw:

  • The motion of initiating the spell has to be visible to the opponent. Simply clenching a fist isn't detailed enough, please specify a larger movement.
  • The different kinds of damage on the site is bludgeoning, piercing, burning, freezing, cutting, etc. Please indicate the correct damage kind.


Curse Magic: Deadly Scythe:

  • Please give dimensions of the deadly scythe.


Curse Magic: Crippling Fate:

  • Approved.


Curse Magic: Brutes Favor:

  • Approved.


Curse Magic: Shadow Sneak:

  • I'm assuming this is a kind of Invisibility spell. Depending on the rank of the spell, it will give you a certain percentage of invisibility. For instance, a D-Rank Invisibility spell only lets you to be 20% Transparent. Please refer to the Magic Regulations for more information.


Bump when edited.



#3Thorn Vancarr 

Curse Magic (Starter Spells) Empty Sun Feb 11, 2018 11:51 pm

Thorn Vancarr
Bump! Thank for grading!




Current Location: Orchidia Town
#4Venus Rosé 

Curse Magic (Starter Spells) Empty Tue Feb 13, 2018 12:01 am

Venus Rosé

Curse Magic: Demonic Claw:

  • You cannot cut through darkness magic if that is what you wanted your spell to be. It simply does cutting damage to foes. So, instead of saying "She can use this arm to swipe at people for cutting darkness damage" you might want to re-word it as "she can use this arm to deal D-Rank cutting damage".


Curse Magic: Deadly Scythe:

  • The range in your spell's description states 1 meter radius. Please change it to diameter.


Curse Magic: Shadow Sneak:

  • Approved.


Bump once done.



#5Thorn Vancarr 

Curse Magic (Starter Spells) Empty Tue Feb 13, 2018 12:30 am

Thorn Vancarr
Bump!

Wow, that was a bit of shoddy language there, huh? Thanks for your help!




Current Location: Orchidia Town
#6Venus Rosé 

Curse Magic (Starter Spells) Empty Tue Feb 13, 2018 2:23 am

Venus Rosé

These spells have been approved.



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