Ace Brookes wrote:Name: Gates of the Wind
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Delirious Gas Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Wind (Krypton)
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Ace forms an extremely thin layer (half a millimeter) of krypton gas around his fists or feet which can be attached to his target upon contact or by throwing/shooting. It forms a string-like stream of gas between Ace's body and the point of contact with the target which is about a millimeter in diameter. The dense particles of the krypton that are closer to the target will linger over the marked point of contact. This allows Ace to link the user to himself and manipulate the flow of krypton on the point of contact. The powerful currents of gas formed will push the limb in the directions according to the concentrated gas flow. However the krypton isn't invisible when in use. So as soon as the current flows in either direction, the stream will increase in size and the gas will be visible allowing anyone to see the enlarged link which is around a quarter of a meter in diameter. When there is no current flow the gas is hard to see as it links to the target through a string-like millimeter diameter of faint green dispersed gas. The link can be broken when taking equal B rank damage. The total length of krypton obtained is 15 meters. Ace can use up to 4 points of contact as long as the connections don't go over 15 meters in length collectively. The link can be felt as a simple thump when attached if it is thrown onto a target, so it would be disguised when attached during a punch/kick/physical contact. (Note: 4 gates means each gate can be destroyed by one D-rank)

This only links yourself to the target correct?


Name: Art of Abundance: Clouds of Hell
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Delirious Gas Magic, Match/Fire
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind (Methane)
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Ace whips his hand in a circle and points it in the general direction of his opponent signaling the methane present in the environment to shroud the target forming a cloud of methane that engulfs them. The cloud is 2 meters in diameter. Ace then uses a small match (or any source of fire) to ignite the highly flammable gas resulting in an explosion. This happens at normal spell speed as Ace could move the gas and throw the lit match simultaneously to burst the gas as soon as it forms. The explosion as a whole leaves behind damage and burns of C-rank in total. Ace's target can't be further than ten meters away for him to be able to form the cloud around them.

Make sure you know this gas isn invisible in any shape or form. It has a color tint to it or a visible gas cloud to avoid any confusion. Also spells have to originate from the body, you can't just conjure the methane around someone and blow it up.

• While you do make mention of the faint layer which surrounds the appendage, please also make sure that the projected gas can be visible in some manner. As Geno suggested in the previous iteration, either having a tint of some kind or be an outright visible cloud.
  
• Please indicate that the maximum distance in which the spell can travel is 15 meters. So for instance, your example indicates that you can move it 10 meters in one direction and 5 in the other. In that example, that would be the maximum possible by which it can travel.
  
• Are any further gestures required as to move the cloud or is this something along the lines of a telepathy cloud?
  
• I will have to see regarding the ability to manipulate the cloud, as at the moment I do not know the legality of such a spell in respects to being able to manipulate the trajectory and otherwise control it (as the sustain cost implies).
  
• Please give a defined value as to the distance to which this spell is able to push a target.
  
• With respects to what you say at the end, collectively, do you refer to this spell being capable of striking and pushing a target multiple times within a single post or rather to just tie-in together the pushback and damage component.
  

• So just so I am sure I understand, the spell originates with the cloud surrounding the user and is then projected outwards?
  
• With respects to both the previous spell and Geno's remarks earlier, please indicate that this cloud may be visible in some manner.
  
• "leaves behind damage and burns of C-rank in total" - This indicates dealing damage and burns as separate entities. Please change this to simply burning damage.
  
• Is the explosion also the same size as the gas cloud which forms? Please specify.
  
• Understand that unless you possess a Magic or Race in which grants immunity to a respective element, you may harmed by your own spell. The spell description indicates that by all accounts, such a scenario is presented here. The speed to which you would have to take out a match, spark it, and then throw it such that it would ignite upon a target at the same time that the cloud travels out at 20 m/s (given present spell time) would require that the actions be accomplished prior to the releasing of the gas, therefore igniting it upon yourself.) As such, I would recommend that you refrain from indicating the capability of immediately detonating the gas as soon as it forms. I understand the want to give the target as little time to react as possible, but recognize the risk posed to one's self in the same scenario.
  
• If you could please change "to be able to form the cloud around them" in the last sentence as to not make it appear as if the cloud originates on the user, but rather must be in range to be struck by the cloud as its projected outwards, or something to that effect.