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Kazimir's S-rank spell 3

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#1Kazimir Seiryu 

Kazimir's S-rank spell 3 Empty Wed Jul 08, 2020 8:23 am

Kazimir Seiryu
Name: Orchestra of Wind
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 1,000
Requirements: Empyreal Storm Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 25 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: The user thrusts his palm anywhere within the spell's range. A white magic circle appears at the location and on the user's hand. A blade of wind slashes outward from the magic circle and its trajectory is controlled by the user's hand. The blade of wind is 4 meters long, .5 meters wide and high, and deals S-rank damage. The spell ends when the win blade hits. The user may thrust two palms outward at different locations and conjure a blade of wind with each hand. The two blades of wind are each controlled by a different hand and deal A-rank damage. The blades are 2 meters long, .5 meters high and wide. The spell ends when both wind blades have hit.


Would like to train this spell, from reaching X-rank



Last edited by Kazimir Seiryu on Thu Jul 16, 2020 9:15 pm; edited 1 time in total

#2Jan Ren 

Kazimir's S-rank spell 3 Empty Sun Jul 12, 2020 12:06 pm

Jan Ren
Hey there!

- You put the Mana cost as 1,000 while an S-rank spell would normally be just 500. Is that intentional? If not, do fix that. In addition, offensive spells cannot be sustained.

Post again in Spell Review when done!



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#3Kazimir Seiryu 

Kazimir's S-rank spell 3 Empty Wed Jul 15, 2020 8:52 am

Kazimir Seiryu
1. Yes, the 1,000 is intentional because of trajectory control.

Spell Trajectory: All spells move in a trajectory described in the spell description upon casting.

You may control the trajectory of your spell after casting it instead of giving it a pre-defined trajectory. If you choose to do that, the spell must be sustained and it will cost double the mana. This must be mentioned clearly when applying for the spell. The control cannot be done in your mind and will require obvious hand gestures.

2.  offensive spells can be sustained at the cost of continual mana. Examples below

#4Jan Ren 

Kazimir's S-rank spell 3 Empty Thu Jul 16, 2020 1:34 am

Jan Ren
...my bad. .-.
Thanks for enlightening me.

Only thing you need to add is that the spell ends when they hit the target!

Post again in Spell Review when done!



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#5Kazimir Seiryu 

Kazimir's S-rank spell 3 Empty Fri Jul 17, 2020 8:05 am

Kazimir Seiryu
Fixed them. thanks

#6Jan Ren 

Kazimir's S-rank spell 3 Empty Wed Jul 22, 2020 2:28 am

Jan Ren
This spell has been approved for training.



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#7Kazimir Seiryu 

Kazimir's S-rank spell 3 Empty Fri Jul 31, 2020 9:29 am

Kazimir Seiryu

#8Jan Ren 

Kazimir's S-rank spell 3 Empty Fri Jul 31, 2020 9:32 am

Jan Ren
This spell has been approved.



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