Demon Soul Magic: Ba’al (B Ranked Spell)

**Zanto** · Sun Jan 14, 2018 10:33 pm

Jewels :

350,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Experience :

37,500

Class :

Battlemage

Strength :

1

Speed :

10

Endurance :

2

Intelligence :

8

Mana :

550

B Ranked Spells:

Last edited by Zanto on Tue Jan 16, 2018 3:26 am; edited 1 time in total

**Xandra Queen †** · Tue Jan 16, 2018 3:22 am

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

626,000

Reputation :

12,100

Class :

Spellhowler

Magic :

Poison Magic

Strength :

230

Speed :

161

Constitution :

166

Endurance :

160

Intelligence :

122

Mana :

5,530

Head :

Band of Balance

Ring :

Maraq's Ring

Hello, I'll be grading your spell.

Electric Field:

- This is an AoE spell, so change the range to 4 meters.

- If the spell injured those within the perimeter, it cannot push them back as well. Remove this part:
'the field violently pushes back objects that meet it's perimeter'

- Mention that anything within the perimeter suffers from B-rank Shocking damage.

Bump when edited.

**Zanto** · Tue Jan 16, 2018 3:26 am

Jewels :

350,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Experience :

37,500

Class :

Battlemage

Strength :

1

Speed :

10

Endurance :

2

Intelligence :

8

Mana :

550

Fixed it Xandra

**Xandra Queen †** · Wed Jan 17, 2018 1:59 am

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

626,000

Reputation :

12,100

Class :

Spellhowler

Magic :

Poison Magic

Strength :

230

Speed :

161

Constitution :

166

Endurance :

160

Intelligence :

122

Mana :

5,530

Head :

Band of Balance

Ring :

Maraq's Ring

This spell has been approved for 75,000 Jewels.

Demon Soul Magic: Ba’al (B Ranked Spell)

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