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First 5 free D-rank Spells [Ice-Make; Savannah Knight]

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#1Savannah Knight 

First 5 free D-rank Spells [Ice-Make; Savannah Knight] Empty Tue Feb 20, 2018 3:53 pm

Savannah Knight
Name: Ice Hammer
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ice Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Ice
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Savannah clutches one hand as though she was holding something and hits the flat side against her other hand. Pulling her clutched hand a pole, 5in in diamiter, starts to form. The pole extends to 3ft then tops out with a 2x1x1ft rectangle and a flat plate-like shape in the middle, parallel to the pole. The hammer is susceptible to shattering after a D-Rank hit, but can last multiple post and causes an equal d-rank damage per post. And has the ability to push objects away.

Name: Cold Lance
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ice Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Ice
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Starting at her chest Savannah folds her hands over each-other, palms out. She then pushes out causing a lance to extend out from a magic circle at a maximum of 5 meters and can only do D-rank damage. The lance itself is thin, a diameter of 4in in size and at the end a Spetum tip; the Magic Circle is 1ft in size with a basic design and glows a pale dark-blue.

Name: Swords of Beira's Guards
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ice Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: Ice
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Savannah takes her foot and makes a semi-circle in front of her. She then tangles her fingers together and pushes down at the "semi-circle". From this "semi-circle" comes out wide pointed blades of ice that connect above her. The blade are a C-Rank durability at 1x1m.

Name: Cryokinetic Surfing
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ice Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Ice
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Savannah stomps her foot down creating a small thin disc of ice, then using her other foot she pushes off. Twisting her upper-body left and right ice continues to form in front of her as she dashes on top, up to 5 meters. Mainly used for movement not much takes to form the ice from things such as a body of water to out of her magic.

Name: Old Man Winter's Blessing
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ice Magic
Type: Self-Buff Strength
Element: Ice
Range: 00 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Savannah claps her hands together in a praying fashion and starts whispers 'Old man Winter'. Then crosses her hands on each-other over her heart finishing with 'give me your blessing'. Afterwords she is blessed with a D-Rank strength buff.



Last edited by Savannah Knight on Wed Feb 21, 2018 10:54 am; edited 4 times in total



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#2Akira Shimada 

First 5 free D-rank Spells [Ice-Make; Savannah Knight] Empty Tue Feb 20, 2018 4:23 pm

Akira Shimada
Hi there, I'll be reviewing your spells.


  • Ice Hammer: Please add the rank, durability and the type of damage the hammer does. Also, add that you can only deal one D rank damage per post, using the hammer.

  • Cold Lance: Please add the dimension of this lance/lances and the magic circle. State the rank of the damage the lance causes. Note that, no matter where the magic circle spawns, the lances cannot go beyond the maximum range of 5 meters, from you. Add that the lances can only do 1 D rank damage per post.

  • Swords of Beira's Guards: Add the dimension of the shield that these swords join to form and its durability. Note that these swords cannot be used offensively.

  • Cryokinetic Surfing: Could you please elaborate how you plan on using the ice sheets you create to surf? Can you freeze parts of water bodies to surf, for example? Could you list the utilities?

  • Old Man Winter's Blessing: This one is almost ready for approval, just change the +5 to D rank strength buff.


Bump when edited~ :)



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#3Savannah Knight 

First 5 free D-rank Spells [Ice-Make; Savannah Knight] Empty Tue Feb 20, 2018 5:15 pm

Savannah Knight
Ba-Da Bump!



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#4Akira Shimada 

First 5 free D-rank Spells [Ice-Make; Savannah Knight] Empty Tue Feb 20, 2018 6:29 pm

Akira Shimada
[quote="Akira Shimada"]Hi there, I'll be reviewing your spells.


  • Ice Hammer: You can sustain the hammer for multiple posts, however, state that you hammer has D rank durability, which means it will shatter if it takes D rank damage. Also, state that the hammer can only do one D rank damage per post. Can you please add the dimensions of the hammer. Lastly, there is no damage type called bruising, do you mean bludgeoning?

  • Cold Lance: Once again you can sustain your magic circle, but please add that it will only cast 1 lance that does 1 D-rank piercing damage per post, also please add the length of the lance.

  • Swords of Beira's Guards: At D-rank your shields can only be 1x1m with a C rank durability. If you want your shield to be of a higher dimension (max 2x2m), it will then have D rank durability. Please choose one and make the edits accordingly.

  • Cryokinetic Surfing: If you intend on using this for movement, you may use it to dash in any one direction based on your speed statistic for a maximum of five meters and in this case, the spell will have to be instantaneous, because dash spells cannot be sustained.

  • Old Man Winter's Blessing: This one is almost ready for approval, could you please state that you will get a D rank strength buff.


Awaiting your bump! Let me know when you've made the edits~ :)



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#5Savannah Knight 

First 5 free D-rank Spells [Ice-Make; Savannah Knight] Empty Wed Feb 21, 2018 8:38 am

Savannah Knight
And another bump!



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#6Akira Shimada 

First 5 free D-rank Spells [Ice-Make; Savannah Knight] Empty Wed Feb 21, 2018 9:49 am

Akira Shimada

  • Ice Hammer: Can you make the dimensions of the hammer a little smaller. At best, from handle to the top of the hammer, it should be about a meter (3 ft) make the hammerhead accordingly proportional.  

  • Cold Lance: Approved

  • Swords of Beira's Guards: Approved.

  • Cryokinetic Surfing: Approved.

  • Old Man Winter's Blessing: Approved.


Just waiting on the ice-hammer~ :) Bump when you're done.



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#7Savannah Knight 

First 5 free D-rank Spells [Ice-Make; Savannah Knight] Empty Wed Feb 21, 2018 10:57 am

Savannah Knight
..Bump..



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#8Akira Shimada 

First 5 free D-rank Spells [Ice-Make; Savannah Knight] Empty Wed Feb 21, 2018 11:22 am

Akira Shimada
These spells have been approved.



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