Celes'tiells Hemocraft Magic 4 D Spells

Celes · Wed Mar 09, 2022 10:21 am

Guild :

Sleeping Calamity

Jewels :

375,500

Rank :

D-Rank

Race :

Half-Elf

Experience :

14,000

Reputation :

500

Class :

Hunter

Magic :

Hemocraft Magic

Strength :

5

Speed :

6

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

6

Intelligence :

11

Mana :

200

Weapon :

Revolver

Boosts :

Returning Member 25% (03/03/2022)

Name: Bloody Bubbles
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hemocraft Magic, a gun
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters (1 meter after impact)
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user cocks his gun and points towards a target. A blue magic seal aparates, from which a Bloody Bubble shoots towards the pointed targets direction(speed 20m/s). The bubble (size 0,25m) explodes upon impact, damaging all creatures in a 1 meter radius.

Name: Bloody Geyser
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hemocraft Magic, a Gun
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user points the gun on a surface and shoots in that direction. On The surface or area a seal appears which turns into pool of water from which a Bloody Geyser gushes out. Anyone who is in the 1 m Diameter Geyser is damaged.

Name: Bloody Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hemocraft Magic, gun
Type: defensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: sustained
Size: 1 by 1 meter
Effect: The user shoots towards one of the limbs or bodily areas of a character. On the shot area a seal appears from which a Bloody Shield surges and sticks/imbeds itself around that area. The Shield moves with the targeted area of the Body on which it's attached to.

Name: Bloody Jett
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hemocraft Magic, gun
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: instant
Effect: On the users gun, the muzzle a Seal appears, from which he shoots a bursts of streaming bloody water which redirects his movement during a run in the opposite direction.

Last edited by Celes on Thu Apr 07, 2022 2:57 pm; edited 8 times in total

**Khnurn** · Fri Apr 01, 2022 2:24 am

Epithet :

Prometheus

Contract :

4,800,000

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

0

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Fae

Experience :

639,100

Reputation :

12,700

Class :

Spellsword

Magic :

Tiny Flame Magic

Aura :

Lovers (Hitomi)

Strength :

190

Speed :

2

Constitution :

251

Endurance :

106

Intelligence :

251

Mana :

6,010

Bubble:
- Missing a magic seal
- How large are the bubbles.
- Since this spell is coming from the gun, list the weapon in the requirements of the spell.
Bolts:
- Missing a magic seal
- Keep in mind that the spell can not travel further than 5 meters away from you the caster, even if you should activate it in a puddle that is 4 meters away.
- How many bolts are coming out the water.
Shield:
- Missing a magic seal.
- Missing casting motions.
- Missing the location of the shield.
- Defensive spells can not move unless they're directly attached to you.
Jet
- Missing a magic seal.
- Missing casting motions.
- Include travel speed.
- Can not make spells that fly at D-rank. Earliest you can fly is at B-rank.

Celes · Sun Apr 03, 2022 8:23 am

Guild :

Sleeping Calamity

Jewels :

375,500

Rank :

D-Rank

Race :

Half-Elf

Experience :

14,000

Reputation :

500

Class :

Hunter

Magic :

Hemocraft Magic

Strength :

5

Speed :

6

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

6

Intelligence :

11

Mana :

200

Weapon :

Revolver

Boosts :

Returning Member 25% (03/03/2022)

Bubble

Bolts

Shield

Jet

I hope I wrote everything alright.

**Sho** · Thu Apr 07, 2022 12:08 pm

Guild :

Halcyon Eclipse

Jewels :

848,250

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

256,025

Reputation :

5,300

Class :

Berserker

Magic :

Raigaloth the Fanatic of the Future

Aura :

Empress

Strength :

100

Speed :

130

Constitution :

65

Endurance :

61

Intelligence :

50

Mana :

4,310

Weapon :

Overture

Off-Hand :

Bagheera's Paw [Left Hand]

Head :

Thunder Monarch's Bandana

Body :

Sherwood Cloak

Ring :

Gheed's Greed

Bloody Bubbles: Good

Bloody Bolts:

Even though its flavor text you can only really shoot one bolt because you can't really split a D rank spell.
Not to mention it could be considered confusing if you fire multiple bolts from one spell but only one counts as damage remove the multiple bolt thing.

Bloody Shield:

It needs a size for the shield and it can't be full-body due to those only being available at S rank
Also per rules unless the shield is 1 by 1 meter it can't move

Bloody Jet

Need to be a bit more specific as to how it redirects your movement. During a dash? Run? Or just standing still etc.

Celes · Thu Apr 07, 2022 2:59 pm

Guild :

Sleeping Calamity

Jewels :

375,500

Rank :

D-Rank

Race :

Half-Elf

Experience :

14,000

Reputation :

500

Class :

Hunter

Magic :

Hemocraft Magic

Strength :

5

Speed :

6

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

6

Intelligence :

11

Mana :

200

Weapon :

Revolver

Boosts :

Returning Member 25% (03/03/2022)

Scraped the bolt idea, made a Geyser

Bloody Shield is specifically stating its Size to be 1 by 1 m, I Added a section in the Spell called Size so it's easier to spot

Jet has been more specified

**Sho** · Thu Apr 07, 2022 3:58 pm

Guild :

Halcyon Eclipse

Jewels :

848,250

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

256,025

Reputation :

5,300

Class :

Berserker

Magic :

Raigaloth the Fanatic of the Future

Aura :

Empress

Strength :

100

Speed :

130

Constitution :

65

Endurance :

61

Intelligence :

50

Mana :

4,310

Weapon :

Overture

Off-Hand :

Bagheera's Paw [Left Hand]

Head :

Thunder Monarch's Bandana

Body :

Sherwood Cloak

Ring :

Gheed's Greed

These spells are approved

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