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Empyrean Dragon Slayer Spell | A Rank

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#1Ariael 

Empyrean Dragon Slayer Spell | A Rank Empty Fri Jun 25, 2021 11:19 am

Ariael

Empyrean Dragon's Roar:
Empyrean Dragon Slayer Spell | A Rank D3jqykv-62107307-81c1-4948-83a1-c7eab5d703d2.gif?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzA0OTVhOWM0LTgxMDMtNDQ3Yy04YTRmLTFlNmZmYTAzOGVkNVwvZDNqcXlrdi02MjEwNzMwNy04MWMxLTQ5NDgtODNhMS1jN2VhYjVkNzAzZDIuZ2lmIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0

Name: Empyrean Dragon's Roar
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Empyrean Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user opens their mouth causing a magic seal to appear in front of it. A 2 Meter diameter tornado of sharpened wind will erupt from the spell circle causing destruction anywhere it hits. The spell moves along with the user's head, but the user is also able to control the trajectory of it if they choose to do so. The action required to control the trajectory is moving a hand in the direction where you want the spell to go.



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#2Ariael 

Empyrean Dragon Slayer Spell | A Rank Empty Fri Jun 25, 2021 11:19 am

Ariael

Buying this spell (50% Off).

#3Ikazuchi 
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Empyrean Dragon Slayer Spell | A Rank Empty Thu Jul 01, 2021 1:33 pm

Ikazuchi
@Ariael wrote:
Empyrean Dragon's Roar:
Empyrean Dragon Slayer Spell | A Rank D3jqykv-62107307-81c1-4948-83a1-c7eab5d703d2.gif?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzA0OTVhOWM0LTgxMDMtNDQ3Yy04YTRmLTFlNmZmYTAzOGVkNVwvZDNqcXlrdi02MjEwNzMwNy04MWMxLTQ5NDgtODNhMS1jN2VhYjVkNzAzZDIuZ2lmIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0

Name: Empyrean Dragon's Roar
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Empyrean Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user opens their mouth causing a magic seal to appear in front of it. A 2 Meter diameter tornado of sharpened wind will erupt from the spell circle causing destruction anywhere it hits. The spell moves along with the user's head, but the user is also able to control the trajectory of it if they choose to do so. The action required to control the trajectory is moving a hand in the direction where you want the spell to go.


  • According to the spell regulations, the size of the “tornado” is limited to 2 meters. This would refer to every dimension and not just diameter. It wouldn’t connect in the shape of a long tornado from the magic seal to the end of the spell range. Please clarify that all of the dimensions would be 2 meters as a result.
  • According to the spell regulations, you would not be able to turn your head to control the path of the attack. It would require obvious hand motions to take control of the spell's trajectory in any manner currently. Please remove the mention of it moving according to head movement.


There were a couple of issues that I have pointed out that I would like you to address. Maximum spell size limits both width and length, so it would be 2 meter by 2 meter for its size. It could only travel up to 20 meters, not extend that far. After addressing these issues, please bump the thread.

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