Roc Aeros wrote:Name: Roc Gale
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Roc Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind/Fire
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: making a spell circle, the user then pushes with that spell circle to send out a blast of blisteringly hot air to burn those that get hit. This spell moves in a straight line for the duration of the range.

• D-Rank spells have a 5 meter range, even if your class says that it increases the range. You should create the spells without class modifiers and simply apply them appropriately in combat. The reason for this is the fact that you can change classes, so those bonuses aren’t guaranteed.
  
• You need a clear casting motion for the spell to form the magic seal.
  
• The spell dimensions should also be properly added according to the spell regulations.
  
• Example: The user pushes their hand forward causing a 0.25 meter magic seal to form in front of their hand. From that magic seal a 0.25 meter blast of blisteringly hot air is fired in a straight line that deals D-Rank damage.
  

Name: Roc tallon
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Roc Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind/Fire
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user makes a circle with their finger, then wraps their hands in searing hot wind before punching a target.

• Adjust the range of the spell to “Self”.
  
• Adjust the Duration of the spell to “Sustained”. Keep in mind, the spell can still only deal damage a single time. This just means that you can sustain it and attempt to use it in future posts if you fail to initially.
  
• Example: The user draws a circle in the air with their finger the size of their fist creating a magic seal. From the seal comes a flow of searing hot wind that wraps around the user’s fist to strike an enemy with and deal D-Rank damage.
  

Name: Roc Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Roc Magic
Type: Defense
Element: wind/fire
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user does a large upwards sweeping motion with his hand sending a gust of blistering wind upwards to deflect ranged attacks.

• Magic seals are required in the spell description.
  
• A defensive spell is similar to an offensive spell and limited in size. The size limit for D-Rank spells is 0.25 meters.
  
• Defensive spells have a durability that’s 1 tier higher than the spell, so it would create a shield with C-Rank durability with a D-rank spell.
  
• Defensive spells generally form shields, so change the range to 5 meters and you can form it anywhere within 5 meters.
  
• Example: The user sweeps their arm upward causing a 0.25 meter magic seal to form under the user; an additional magic circle will form at the target if casting remotely. The spell creates a swirling, blistering, shield of wind 0.25 meters in size that can block up to C-Rank Damage.
  

Name: Roc Constant Breeze
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Roc Magic
Type: Offense
Element: Wind/fire
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: User spends ten seconds doing a weird dance, before they do one big push in front of them, causing a constant stream of hot air to blow in that direction for either until the user runs out of mana, the user stops the spell, or they fall unconcious

• Range for D-Ranks is limited to 5 meters for the reason stated above.
  
• Offensive spells can only do damage a single time unless they are AOE spells.
  
• Spell size limits the form of a spell, so you wouldn’t be able to make a constant stream of wind that extends until the range limit.
  
• A casting motion should be simple as extra difficulty doesn’t offer anything besides an opening for you to be defeated.
  
• In general, this spell won’t function in the system without being entirely changed. I would recommend a different spell. There are many supplementary options like a Dash, Vibration sense, thermal vision, etc. I would recommend reading through The Magic and Spell regulations again to see if there are any other alternative spells that you would replace “Roc Constant Breeze” with.