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#1Darka Monyx 

Kurayami Starter Pack Empty Thu Jul 30, 2020 11:45 pm

Darka Monyx
Name: Cloak of Darkness
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Dark Magic
Type: Self-Buff [Strength]
Element: Darkness
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user will have to swing their weapon once (if the user use fist, they only need to cross swing their hands) and some small magic circle will shown up around the weapon and cover it with darkness. This Darkness element around the weapon will increase the user strength in D-rank state unti the user stop sustaining the spell.


Name: Boots of Darkness
Rank: D-rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Dark magic
Type: Self-Buff [Speed]
Element: Darkness
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user have to stump one of their legs to the ground and it will make a magic circle under the user. The user foots will cover with darkness element in a boots looking form. This magic will increase the speed in D-rank state until the user stop sustaining the spell.


Name: Kurayami Shisso
Rank: D-rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Dark magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Darkness
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user will have to take 1 leap back while saying the spell and a magic circle will shown up on his back and the user will able to dash to any direction at a maximum range of 5 meters.


Name: Mana Skin
Rank: D-rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Dark magic
Type: Self-Buff [Endurance]
Element: Darkness
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user have to cover their whole body with darkness element by making a fist and put it infront of their chest. A magic circle behind their head will shown up and make the darkness around their body increasing the endurance in D-rank state until the user stop sustaining the spell



Last edited by Darka Monyx on Fri Jul 31, 2020 12:31 am; edited 3 times in total



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#2Masami 

Kurayami Starter Pack Empty Thu Jul 30, 2020 11:54 pm

Masami
Hello, I will be grading your spells!

  • Cloak of Darkness: Please state what type of Statistic the buff increases in the 'Type' variable (e.g. Self-Buff [Strength]) for easier reading in future references!

  • Boots of Darkness: Same issue as the one above.

  • Kurayami Shisso: Please state that the spell allows the user to dash up to a maximum of 5-meters.

  • Mana Skin: Same issue as the first and second spell/s.

Bump when fixed!



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#3Darka Monyx 

Kurayami Starter Pack Empty Thu Jul 30, 2020 11:58 pm

Darka Monyx
bump bump bump



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#4Masami 

Kurayami Starter Pack Empty Fri Jul 31, 2020 12:02 am

Masami
Sorry, but lastly please state the spell motion in Mana Skin and for the rest of the Self-Buff spells, state that it 'increases the statistic until the user stops sustaining the spell'. Bump when fixed!



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#5Darka Monyx 

Kurayami Starter Pack Empty Fri Jul 31, 2020 12:20 am

Darka Monyx
bump bump bump



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#6Masami 

Kurayami Starter Pack Empty Fri Jul 31, 2020 12:32 am

Masami
These spells have been approved.



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