Remaking some spells

**Atlas Prime** · Thu Jul 27, 2017 2:12 pm

Guild :

Lamia Scale

Jewels :

635,000

Rank :

B-rank

Race :

Lycan

Experience :

165,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Vibration Magic

Strength :

31

Speed :

12

Endurance :

11

Intelligence :

2

Mana :

1,285

Companion :

Totodile

i think i need to redo my spells from an update a while ago.

Old spells:

Updated spells:

Name: Balance Breaker
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25 (25 to sustain)
Requirements: Vibration Magic
Type: Supplementry
Element: None
Range: User
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user clickers there heels together, causing vibrations on there feet to allow the atoms to match up to a surface, allowing them to walk on it. This only works for liquids or even a soild like ice. This will allow them to basically walk on water or other liquids or not slip on ice.

Name: Defensive Barrier
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25 (25 to sustain)
Requirements: Vibration Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: None
Range: 1 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user raises there hands in front of them then pushes them forward to energize the air in front of them. This makes a a white wall of energy in front of them that can block up to 1 C-rank of damage. The wall is 1mx1m.

Name: Charged Ball
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Vibration Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user positions a hand in a cup like formation while the other is held above that to form an visible ball of energy in the middle. They then channel magic into the middle to make a ball that is .5m round. They can then throw it at an object to deal D-rank damage.

Name: Atomic Shock
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Vibration Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 1 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user smacks their foot down on the ground to send out a shock of energy at those that are around them. This deals D-rank damage to anyone within a 1m radius of them.

Name: Energy Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25 (25 to sustain)
Requirements: Vibration Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: None
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user puts there hand up in the form of blocking an attack with a shield. With this action the user uses magic to construct the atoms in the air to a more solid form to form a 1m in diameter shield that can block up to 1 C-rank worth of damage.

Last edited by Atlas Prime on Mon Jul 31, 2017 7:37 pm; edited 2 times in total

**Evangeline** · Fri Jul 28, 2017 2:34 am

Epithet :

Celestial Daughter: Austeria

Rank :

B-Rank

Experience :

215,200

Class :

Trickster

Aura :

Seated's Resilience

Strength :

14

Speed :

14

Endurance :

25

Intelligence :

26

Mana :

950

Weapon :

Solar Sect

These spells has been approved.

**Evangeline** · Sat Jul 29, 2017 8:47 pm

Epithet :

Celestial Daughter: Austeria

Rank :

B-Rank

Experience :

215,200

Class :

Trickster

Aura :

Seated's Resilience

Strength :

14

Speed :

14

Endurance :

25

Intelligence :

26

Mana :

950

Weapon :

Solar Sect

Pulling these for revision.

**Evangeline** · Sat Jul 29, 2017 9:05 pm

Epithet :

Celestial Daughter: Austeria

Rank :

B-Rank

Experience :

215,200

Class :

Trickster

Aura :

Seated's Resilience

Strength :

14

Speed :

14

Endurance :

25

Intelligence :

26

Mana :

950

Weapon :

Solar Sect

I apologize but problems with my grading on this app has been pointed out. I apologize for my careless mistakes. I'll be giving this another shot.

Balance Breaker
Looks Fine.
Defensive Barrier
The range in your spell and the size you specify in this doesn't add up. Sustained spell size cannot exceed 1mx1m area.
Charged Ball
The ball of energy you are creating cannot be invisible. I know it makes sense for it to be but we cannot approve that. Sorry.
Atomic Shock
Okay.
Energy Shield
Please specify that you can take up to 1 C rank or equivalent damage.

**Atlas Prime** · Sun Jul 30, 2017 2:02 pm

Guild :

Lamia Scale

Jewels :

635,000

Rank :

B-rank

Race :

Lycan

Experience :

165,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Vibration Magic

Strength :

31

Speed :

12

Endurance :

11

Intelligence :

2

Mana :

1,285

Companion :

Totodile

Just pointing out its Area of Effect spells that make it 1m not sustained. Sustained never said anything like that in the rules

Bump

**Evangeline** · Mon Jul 31, 2017 5:36 am

Epithet :

Celestial Daughter: Austeria

Rank :

B-Rank

Experience :

215,200

Class :

Trickster

Aura :

Seated's Resilience

Strength :

14

Speed :

14

Endurance :

25

Intelligence :

26

Mana :

950

Weapon :

Solar Sect

Not exceeding the dimensions of 1mx1m for sustained spells is what has been accepted and enforced for a long time now. This is so that someone won't create a fireball of 10mx10m dimensions and sustain it. This is also enforced taking other factors into consideration.

Atomic Shock
The range you specified and the range in your description doesn't add up. As it is an AoE spell, change the range to 1m.

**Atlas Prime** · Mon Jul 31, 2017 7:37 pm

Guild :

Lamia Scale

Jewels :

635,000

Rank :

B-rank

Race :

Lycan

Experience :

165,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Vibration Magic

Strength :

31

Speed :

12

Endurance :

11

Intelligence :

2

Mana :

1,285

Companion :

Totodile

bump bump bump

**Evangeline** · Mon Jul 31, 2017 11:29 pm

Epithet :

Celestial Daughter: Austeria

Rank :

B-Rank

Experience :

215,200

Class :

Trickster

Aura :

Seated's Resilience

Strength :

14

Speed :

14

Endurance :

25

Intelligence :

26

Mana :

950

Weapon :

Solar Sect

These spells has been approved.

Remaking some spells

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