Aegis starting spells

**Aegis** · Thu 18 Jan 2018, 19:42

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Name: Ether Healing
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ether Magic
Type: Healing
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: You gesture with an open palm towards a friendly target and begin healing them over time. A smoky mist comes forth from your palm and begins to swirl around your target as you heal them. Heals D-Rank damage.

Name: Ether Barricade
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ether Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Create a palisade of Ether to block incoming attacks from in front of you or a target within range. The barricade is 1 meter by 1 meter in size and is on one side translucent white, allowing only ally's to see through it. The barrier can block 1 C-rank or 2 D-rank damage.

Name: Ether Binding
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ether Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: After placing both palms on the ground, flowing white Ether chains come forth from the ground and weave towards your target, and possibly locking around the first targets legs. They begin holding them in place with 5 meter long, 1 Inch thick chains until they can break free. The chains are broken with D-rank Strength.

Name: Ether Infusion
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ether Magic
Type: Buff-Other (Speed)
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Infuse your allies in range with Ether, causing white energy to flow into their legs, strengthening their muscles and allowing them to run at a faster pace then they would normally be able to. Grants D-rank Speed increase

Name: Ether Enhance
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Ether Magic
Type: Buff-Other (Endurance)
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: You begin my pointing a finger at a friendly character within range and begin to infuse them with Ether. As white spirals of energy comes forth from your hand and envelops you target, they gain D-rank Endurance increase.

Last edited by Aegis on Sat 27 Jan 2018, 15:41; edited 9 times in total

**Xandra Queen †** · Thu 18 Jan 2018, 21:19

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Constitution :

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Endurance :

160

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Mana :

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Head :

Band of Balance

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Maraq's Ring

Hello, I'll be grading your spells.

Mana Infusion:
- I believe mana regeneration is not allowed. However, I'm a little unsure about this spell so I will get back to you on that.
Ether Healing:
- Mention that the spell can heal D-rank damage.
Ether Barricade:
- Opaque? Do you mean translucent or transparent? As you can see through it.
- Mention that the barricade can hold back up to 1 C-rank spell or 2 D-rank spells.
Ether Infusion:
- State that it gives them a D-rank speed buff.
- Change range to 5 meters.
Ether Binding:
- The chain can be 5 meters long.
- State that the binding is dependant upon your strength.
- Mention how many targets can be kept in place at a time. If it's more than one, state that the strength of the binding spell is divided equally among the number of targets.

Note:
- Mana cost for all spells in 25, not 20.
- Change Elementless to N/A

Bump when edited.

**Aegis** · Thu 18 Jan 2018, 22:32

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Intelligence :

251

Mana :

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Head :

Predator

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Mercenary Vest

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Medusa's Pertifying Eye

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1x Mysterious Merchant's Mercantilism,

Bump

Did you happen to find out if the mana regeneration is possible?
I can add that it cant be used on myself or increase the mana cost if that would seem more balanced.

**Xandra Queen †** · Fri 19 Jan 2018, 09:49

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Class :

Spellhowler

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Poison Magic

Strength :

230

Speed :

161

Constitution :

166

Endurance :

160

Intelligence :

122

Mana :

5,530

Head :

Band of Balance

Ring :

Maraq's Ring

Mana Infusion:
- I'm going to have to deny this spell. Mana regeneration of any sort is not allowed. Please change it.

Bump when edited.

**Aegis** · Thu 25 Jan 2018, 17:37

Jewels :

815,000

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Class :

Spellsword

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24

Speed :

38

Constitution :

3

Endurance :

79

Intelligence :

251

Mana :

4,000

Head :

Predator

Body :

Mercenary Vest

Ring :

Maraq's Ring V4

Modification :

Medusa's Pertifying Eye

Pouch :

1x Mysterious Merchant's Mercantilism,

Bump Bump Bump

**Xandra Queen †** · Sat 27 Jan 2018, 14:13

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Class :

Spellhowler

Magic :

Poison Magic

Strength :

230

Speed :

161

Constitution :

166

Endurance :

160

Intelligence :

122

Mana :

5,530

Head :

Band of Balance

Ring :

Maraq's Ring

Mana Infusion:
- I would suggest changing the name of the spell to avoid confusion.
- Change spell type to Buff (Endurance).
- 'begin to infuse them with mana'
Remove this line.

Bump when edited.

**Aegis** · Sat 27 Jan 2018, 15:16

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38

Constitution :

3

Endurance :

79

Intelligence :

251

Mana :

4,000

Head :

Predator

Body :

Mercenary Vest

Ring :

Maraq's Ring V4

Modification :

Medusa's Pertifying Eye

Pouch :

1x Mysterious Merchant's Mercantilism,

B u m p

**Xandra Queen †** · Sat 27 Jan 2018, 15:39

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

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Experience :

626,000

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12,100

Class :

Spellhowler

Magic :

Poison Magic

Strength :

230

Speed :

161

Constitution :

166

Endurance :

160

Intelligence :

122

Mana :

5,530

Head :

Band of Balance

Ring :

Maraq's Ring

Ether Enhance:
- Once again, remove the part in your effect that states that you infuse mana.

Please make these changes.

**Aegis** · Sat 27 Jan 2018, 15:40

Jewels :

815,000

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435,000

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Class :

Spellsword

Strength :

24

Speed :

38

Constitution :

3

Endurance :

79

Intelligence :

251

Mana :

4,000

Head :

Predator

Body :

Mercenary Vest

Ring :

Maraq's Ring V4

Modification :

Medusa's Pertifying Eye

Pouch :

1x Mysterious Merchant's Mercantilism,

I thought you meant change the name, I mean the text is just flavor but fine i guess xD

Last edited by Aegis on Sat 27 Jan 2018, 15:44; edited 2 times in total

**Aegis** · Sat 27 Jan 2018, 15:41

Jewels :

815,000

Rank :

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Human

Experience :

435,000

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8,700

Class :

Spellsword

Strength :

24

Speed :

38

Constitution :

3

Endurance :

79

Intelligence :

251

Mana :

4,000

Head :

Predator

Body :

Mercenary Vest

Ring :

Maraq's Ring V4

Modification :

Medusa's Pertifying Eye

Pouch :

1x Mysterious Merchant's Mercantilism,

Changed
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**Xandra Queen †** · Sat 27 Jan 2018, 15:48

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

626,000

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Class :

Spellhowler

Magic :

Poison Magic

Strength :

230

Speed :

161

Constitution :

166

Endurance :

160

Intelligence :

122

Mana :

5,530

Head :

Band of Balance

Ring :

Maraq's Ring

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Aegis starting spells

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