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#1Talia Locket 

Talia locket  Empty Fri Jan 27, 2017 5:27 am

Talia Locket



Personal


Name: Talia Locket

Age: 16 years of age

Gender: Female

Class: hierophant

Rank: D-rank

Guild: Blue Pegasus

Tattoo: white and on her right forearm

Face: youmu from touhou

Appearance


Height: 185 cm tall

Weight: 83 kilograms

Hair: short white with a golden streak on her left side and a red streak on her right

Eyes: soft blue

Overall: Talia is a fairly unique sort of locket clan member. Her height and weight aren't out of the ordinary but her streaks in her hair originate from her ties with past members of the clan, eve and Alisha locket. Her choice in clothes range from large cloaks to very revealing tops and shorts, which don't really make her mind wearing them as of her goals and desires. Talia tends to carry around her clan's sword, the getsuga, but not for combat. Instead, it is for marriage intents as to, as you would say, combine the blood of her and her desired lover together.

Extra: she has a spirit form, the ghost around her back and side, that mimics her actions and shows her emotions. It does nothing in battle. Her personality can shift to past Locket clan members, Alisha locket and eve vollan-Locket, though this does nothing in battle.

Personality


Personality: Talia is a very unusual 16 year old girl who seems to swing between emotions very easily. She seems unease at times of intense moments of tension and seems to be very excitable at times when the situation isn't that excitable. She isn't too quite that she wouldn't be counted as shy but not too loud that she'd be counted as talkative, though she can't exactly talk very well, as her voice is so quiet, you would have to be next to her or a few meters away to even hear her whisper. She is very cowardly and isn't good with intense situations, only really helping by providing support but that's all she can do. She is rather unstable and can seem to do a 180 on her personality, as of her ties to past members of her clan. Her personality can shift over to a Pacifist or a cry baby, depending on exactly which past Locket decides to take a bit of control over Talia. Talia's ties to them can even extend to her actions, as her spells would have a familiar feel to her ancestors.

Likes:

  • water: more towards the sea then actual water, Talia is naturally drawn to earth and loves to just stare at it for hours on end, as it's her affinity
  • family: Though raised as an orphan, Talia loves to see people with a family as she wishes for no one to feel the pain of being all alone


Dislikes:

  • solitude: being alone is a truly horrible experience. Being all alone, or seeing someone alone, makes Talia actively go to someone and have them talk to them, even if they aren't in a taking mood.
  • guns: Being strictly a healer, Talia doesn't like, and rather hates, guns. The sound, the use and even the look of a gun is enough to make Talia wish they were destroyed. Guns, not her.


Motivations:

  • help preserve the locket clan: Talia is one of the last locket clan members, where there is only 5 clan members remaining. The clan had sent Talia, their very last child, out to find more of the clan, if there were any, and to find someone to help populate the clan to prevent them from dying out. Talia believes this is her main and only motivation to live, and will let nothing stop her from achieving this.


Fears:

  • evil: As she isn't exactly brave, Talia is scared of evil, evil acts, people, and the threat of being turned evil. This fear pushes her towards her motivations
  • carnivors/hunters: Being rather cowardly, Talia is afraid of anything big, scary and has large teeth. These include tigers, lions, monsters and demons


Magic


Magic Name: water sanctuary

Magic Element: Water

Magic Description: The Locket clan's most prized magic, used swornly for healing and buffing and adding special affects onto yheir allies. this magic uses water, making it strong against fire but weak against lightning. the user must always carry a flask of water, preferably fresh water, at all times to use this magic. Those of whom passed down this magic had also passed down a special flask of water inbued with a special type of magic unique to the locket clan. This water magic is one focused on healing and is barely able to do much more. It is used by having the water bend to the users will and can been seen as more of a sea serpent made out of water, wrapped around the user to maximize use and to reach the users allies much more easily.
The main uses of this magic is to heal and add buffs to allies by using water from either the flask the user carries around or by nearby water. The spells this magic uses healing, buffs and supplementary and  debuff spells.

History


History: Talia was born in the year x769 on a cold winter morning in the town of magnolia by Amelia locket, who had recently lost her love, Daniel locket, only 5 months earlier. But Talia had no joy in her life as her mother shortly died after giving birth to her, leaving Talia all alone. Talia was taken to a orphanage where she'd be raised by a very unusual man, who seemed to have a connection to her and the locket clan. That man was known as Alexander vollan, a man who seemingly raised Talia like she was one of his own. During her childhood, around three years of age, she was known to be fairly quiet and the source of that was unknown until she was examined to have a fault in her throat, her voice box was much weaker then normal.

After 5 years of being raised by Alexander, the clan leader of the locket clan, a woman simply known as Kateline Locket, picked up Talia and taken her to  the village of the locket clan. Once their, Talia was infused with her magic, passed down from generation to generation of locket clan. However, once Talia had taken the magic, she grew a golden blond and light red streak across her left and right side of her hair. She was seen as a special locket and thus immediately trained in the ways of healing and protection with her new magic.

During her time in the village, Talia watched the people she learned from die from a mysterious illness  that seemed to be spreading to all but 5 of the clan members, who had been cured long ago. After eleven long years of this, Talia was ready to be sent out into the world. The clan members handed over the getsuga, the blade of marriage in the village, and guided her to clover, where she applied to blue Pegasus to hopefully find someone that would provide her love and help preserve the locket clan.



Last edited by Talia Locket on Sun Jan 29, 2017 1:06 am; edited 7 times in total

#2Talia Locket 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 10:55 am

Talia Locket
Character ready for evaluation. Bump

#3Selena Maelstrom 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 1:21 pm

Selena Maelstrom
Hey talia, Jr. Mod Selena here. Just a few things hefore I can approve your character.

1. There is no E rank, only D at the beginning so change that please.

2. Can you be a little more specific on your tattoo placement? Left or right arm, and where on the arm if you please.

3. I'm not quite sure on the spirit form thing you have going on. Maybe you could try to explain it to me in pms but right now I'd say no to it.

4. Im going to need you to kind of refine your magic description. See although you are right in saying your magic's strength and weakness, you are describing things your magic can't do, such as defend. The reason you cannot do this with your magic is because of your class, Hierophant. If you were to be a Prophet instead your magic would be able to cast defensive spells as well as heal. Speaking of classes and magic, in your magic description please state what type of spells your magic can do.

Everything else seems good though. Bump when done.



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#4Talia Locket 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 1:33 pm

Talia Locket
Bump. I'm not really having the best day so I hope I have done well

#5Selena Maelstrom 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 2:16 pm

Selena Maelstrom
Again more specific on where on the arm. Inside or outside. On the bicep or tricep or forearm?

And again need you to literally take the spells your class can use and place it in your magic description. (Also when describing the magic make sure to describe all it can do.)

And lastly your spirit form seems alright as along as it can only be seen by you and makes no difference to anything of yours.

Bump when done.



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#6Talia Locket 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 2:24 pm

Talia Locket
I believe I have tweaked it enough. If not, I'll keep trying till I get it right. Bump

#7Selena Maelstrom 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 3:05 pm

Selena Maelstrom
Please remove anything about the type of Supplementary spells and effts the magic has. They can be explained in spells and it looks like you are limiting yourself a lot. And lastly i said to literally mention what spells you can do, so here please put this in your magic description and if you still do not understand go look at some other apps.

What should be in your description.
Healing Spell Price 1x
Supplementary Spell Price 1x
Other-Buff Spell Price 2x
Debuff Spell Price 3x

Bump when done



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#8Talia Locket 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 3:22 pm

Talia Locket
I believe I fixed it but I could be mistaken. I'm not used to this system so if you could help me a little, that would be nice. Bump.

#9Selena Maelstrom 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 3:32 pm

Selena Maelstrom
Please do as I asked as I am trying to help you. If you would take out the bit about magic cost (as that is not meant by price.) And please Copy and paste what i have given you in my previous post.

Bumo when done



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#10Talia Locket 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 3:35 pm

Talia Locket
Is this okay? Bump

#11Selena Maelstrom 

Talia locket  Empty Sat Jan 28, 2017 3:44 pm

Selena Maelstrom
Congratulations, this application has been approved.



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#12Selena Maelstrom 

Talia locket  Empty Sun Jan 29, 2017 12:53 am

Selena Maelstrom
Pulled as the codinf used for this app is incorrect.



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#13Talia Locket 

Talia locket  Empty Sun Jan 29, 2017 1:08 am

Talia Locket
I hope I used the correct code. Bump

#14Selena Maelstrom 

Talia locket  Empty Sun Jan 29, 2017 1:15 am

Selena Maelstrom
Congratulations, this application has been approved.



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