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#1Atlas Prime 

Atlas Prime Empty Mon Nov 14, 2016 10:33 pm

Atlas Prime


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Personal


Name: Atlas Prime

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Class: Sorcerer

Rank: B-rank

Guild: Lamia Scale

Tattoo: Right hand

Face: Terra - Kingdom Hearts

Appearance


Height: 6' 2"

Weight: 180 lbs

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Blue

Overall: Atlas is a fairly built guy. He stands a little taller than most others and looks to be quiet strong. Atlas normally wears, for his casual clothes, black at the top, but mostly brown on the bottom set of pants. He has a black shirt with red overalls that cross over his chest. His right arm has a longer sleeve on where his left has a short sleeve on it. His hair is spiked up in the center of his head.

Extra: N/A

Personality


Personality:  Atlas prefers to act like a big brother to those that he trusts. Not having any siblings of his own he tends to want to bring others close to himself to act as a family. He is a big arrogant at times, thinking that he is strong enough to protect those around him even if it gets himself hurt. Atlas prefers to being around others, because it makes him feel more comfortable than being alone. He isn't afraid of being alone though, but enjoys the company of others. Another reason he may act arrogant is because he likes to test him strength. When he acts arrogant, he knows that others will want to "take him down a peg", meaning they would want to fight him to hurt his pride. This means that he can test his strength against others with his attitude.

Likes:

  • Having others depend on him: He likes to be like a big brother to others. So he enjoys when others rely on him like siblings would do to an older brother.
  • Strong opponents: Atlas likes to test his strength to see how strong he is. So since he wants to be stronger than others he has to fight them to figure out if he is stronger or not.


Dislikes:

  • Others getting hurt: Since he wants to protect others he feels like he does a bad job if someone else gets hurt from his failure to protect them.
  • Complicated thinking: Its not that he doesn't like to think, Atlas just doesn't like when thinking of what to do takes to long. If they have to decide something and it takes to long, he might just go with what his gut tells him.



Motivations:

  • To be a top mage: He is motivated to be stronger than anyone else. This helps him want to train and try new methods to boost his strength up.


Fears:

  • Losing his power: With power comes the strength to protect others and get stronger himself. So with no power he fears he will become weak and useless
  • Falling behind: Atlas trains a lot with the fear that if he doesn't he might get left behind with those that he travels with.


Magic


Magic Name: Vibration Magic

Magic Element: None

Magic Description:  Vibration magic is a magic that releases energy. from the user, in the atoms around to cast spells. The user spends mana to releases the energy in a way that can speed up or slow the atoms to either deal damage or block incoming attacks. This can be used to possibly energize the atoms around his fist to allow it to deal more damage, or energize the atoms in front of him to create a wall of energy that can block spells. The user can also, at higher levels vibrate the atoms even in the air to let them fly.



History


History:  Atlas grew up in an orphanage. He was more dropped off at the age of four. He doesn't really remember anything of his parents either. He would try to ask about them from time to time, but never got an answer. After a while Atlas came to the conclusion that he didn't need them anyway. Atlas would often hang around with the others at the orphanage. He made a lot of friends while there.

Because he was in an orphanage, people wanting to adopt would come by often. It seemed that none of them really took to Atlas so he got to watch as his friends would leave him to live with there new parents. At the age of ten, Atlas grew used to this. He became sad a lot with not being adopted but would make himself feel better telling himself that they weren't the right parents for him.

When Atlas turned sixteen a person came to the orphanage looked at the kids still there. It seemed he was in need of an apprentice for his work. Seeing as how Atlas was the biggest he was finally chosen to leave that place. Saying goodbye to everyone he left with the man that would become his new parent.

Atlas traveled with the man named Tyson for a while. The work in which the man did was doing quests for money. Basically he was a mercenary mage earning his keep. This is how Atlas learned to use magic. It took him a couple years to get to a good level with it and he learned a lot from the man. When Atlas was eighteen is seemed they decided they would do a quest not knowing the dangers of it. With in the quest Tyson was mortally wounded. As Atlas struggled to fight off the creature attacking them another mage saved his life. This mage was from Lamia Scale. From that day Atlas swore to get stronger to protect the ones he cared about so that he wouldn't lose another life.



Last edited by Tyson Winnett on Fri Nov 25, 2016 10:07 pm; edited 3 times in total

#2Atlas Prime 

Atlas Prime Empty Wed Nov 23, 2016 7:02 pm

Atlas Prime
Bump please for completion and grading

#3Atlas Prime 

Atlas Prime Empty Fri Nov 25, 2016 5:41 pm

Atlas Prime
2 day bump

#4Bianca Fleur † 

Atlas Prime Empty Fri Nov 25, 2016 6:13 pm

Bianca Fleur †
Hello, sorry to keep you waiting! I'm Bianca and I'll be helping you finish your application. Please fix the following errors:

  • One of your dislikes Weak Opponents is pretty obvious given that you like strong opponents. Replace that one with something else so we have more insights into his personality.
  • State exactly what you can do with your magic as a Battlemage in your magic description. (The types of spells you can make.)
  • Remove the big space at the end of your template, it would make your app look neater.

Bump when done!

#5Atlas Prime 

Atlas Prime Empty Fri Nov 25, 2016 9:03 pm

Atlas Prime
All good now, so bump

#6Bianca Fleur † 

Atlas Prime Empty Fri Nov 25, 2016 10:06 pm

Bianca Fleur †
Okay one last thing:

  • Your magic can't let you do anything defensive, because you chose Battlemage as your class. Please fix that in your magic section.

Bump when done.

#7Atlas Prime 

Atlas Prime Empty Fri Nov 25, 2016 10:07 pm

Atlas Prime
Woops, meant Sorcerer

#8Bianca Fleur † 

Atlas Prime Empty Fri Nov 25, 2016 10:35 pm

Bianca Fleur †
Congratulations, this application has been approved.

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