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#1Aryuru 

Aryuru  Empty Tue Jan 10, 2017 9:23 pm

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   Name: Aryuru
   Age: 21
   Gender: Male
   Class: Shaman
   Rank: D
   Guild: Rune Knight
   Tattoo: Left Hip
   Face: Zapp Renfro

   

Appearance
   


   Height: 6'2
   Weight: 175 lbs
   Hair: White
   Eyes: Gray
   Overall:
Standing at six feet and two inches, Aryuru is rather tall some even referring to him as a giant. Weighing 175 lbs, Aryuru has a slim structure perfect for executing flexible attacks. His gray eyes are told to be so bright that they glow in the dark, while his white short hair only adds to his Alluring look. No matter the occasion, this mage will often be seen wearing his white jacket with his matching bottoms and combat boots, usually only switching into other gear for special occasions.

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Personality
   


   Personality:  To sum up the base of his personality, Yuru is an asshole. He'll often make dark jokes on just about anything and taunt people if he senses that they are weak minded. Aryuru usually doesn't want to do anything unless it's going to benefit him though he'll make exceptions if he absolutely has to. He usually enjoys laughing and acting silly. Even while in battle he'll make funny comments. The prodigy really doesn't give a shit about what anyone thinks. Instead, if he does happen to get offended he'd often just murder you - though his short temper is something he's attempted to work on. Death doesn't scare him and neither does anyone else for that matter. It is extremely hard for him to even get close to anyone so it's very rare that he cares about people though it isn't impossible.

   Likes:

  • Violence: Violence is indeed an art - at least for Yuru it is. He enjoys watching murder, he enjoys causing bloodshed, and pretty much enjoys anything that has to do with death.
  • Sex: Despite his youthful age it is evident that he does have an obsession with sex.   


   Dislikes: 

  • Losing: It's safe to say that this male is a sore loser. Whether it be in a simple game, or fighting he hates to lose.    
  • Cry-Babies: People who whine, complain, and cry all the time should all just die. What happened to all the cold-hearted people who could take a hit? Everybody seems so soft these days.


   Motivations:

  • Power: There is nothing more important than power. As of now, gaining power is the only thing Yuru wants. Once he achieves power, then he'll be able to truly carry out any plans he has in store.


Fears: 

     
  • Losing His Sanity: Many people don't know, but Aryuru actually has a mental illness that causes him to go ballistic upon the site of blood. To him, this is the curse of the damned. If enough blood is present at one time it may be possible for him to lose himself. H fears the day will come.
       
  • Bot Flies: Bot flies unlike common flies are deadly. They're parasites that can grow inside mammals and that makes them scary. He will never even dare to come close to one.


   

Magic
   





   Magic Name: Corruption Manipulation

   Magic Element: No Element

   Magic Description:  
Corruption Manipulation, just like its name is the manipulation of "Corrupted" Energy. Users of Corruption Manipulation are trained from young to produce holy energy, then when they reach a certain age are taught to "Corrupt" or "Taint" this energy to create the ultimate magical energy. Corrupted energy stems from all violence and evil in the world, potentially making users one of the most deadliest mages ever if used correctly. Some know it for being the "Brother" of Chaos Control, often calling it "Unholy Magic". Corruption control also goes by "Chaotic Manipulation" and is labeled both a rare and forbidden magic.

By using this Corrupted energy, users can weaken (debuff) targets just by the substance touching them, or harm opponents from the inside out. Being able to harness this energy, the user can even allow their body to take it's form via supplementary spells or buff their endurance to last longer in battles. The user can even do other things by using Corruption through the use of supplementary spells, making this magic an extremely diverse and dangerous magic. Offensively, corruption burns or corrodes. The substance eats away at things causing it to wither away in the end.

   

History
   


   History:

Over 100 years ago, a holy priest roamed the earth in search of true power in order to receive the mandate of Heaven. Unfortunately this man obtained so much power that the he could not control himself. In the end both he and his magic became corrupt.

Malachi was born into the world but soon given up by his biological parents who could not take care of him. This boy was left for dead in a local dumpster but by the grace of the universe he was saved. A woman named Shiba saved the boy from death but over the years Malachi realized that death would have been the better result. Shiba brought him to a place called "The House" where him and other kids were treated with kindness and respected as individuals. Every meal was different, they always had time to play, and at the end of the day they were tucked into bed. Never did he ever have a "bad" day.

Shiba was the woman he was most attached to out of all the "Mommies" in The House. Mommies were woman who watched over these children day in and day out like real parents. Shiba would sing Malachi his own personal lullaby and often snuck him an extra snack. When the Mommies taught the kids Holy magic, she specifically gave Malachi personal time to train more. It was like she wanted the best for him so it was safe to say that the young boy loved her.

When Malachi was twelve a group of men who introduced themselves as "Fathers" came and took all the children away from their mommies. Of course the kids were afraid because they didn't have a choice. If they refused, they would be taken away and never seen again. Chi was smart, he didn't refuse because he saw what would happen. When he looked to Shiba he could only see her eyes water before turning away and never looking back. Nothing made sense.

The Fathers took the kids to another place, except this place didn't have a name. Here the kids names were changed. The Fathers said that it was always something about Malachi that they liked, so his name was changed to Aryuru - translating to "Allure". Every day the kids were forced to eat crappy food and constantly abused. They were told that they would amount to nothing yet they were still trained in the art of magic. This tactic was meant to build hate within these kids and when their spirits were at their lowest, they were brought out of the country to murder foreigners. Eventually it became a sport as the kids were rewarded based off of how many people they killed. Why? After a year or two of doing that they actually enjoyed killing. Without murder they didn't feel right, thus becoming corrupted. 4 years later every single kid was expected to have learned "Corruption Manipulation". Those who didn't were murdered by their peers.

From the age of 16-19 Aryuru was used by the "Fathers" to murder people, along with those who were strong enough. They were assassins. Aryuru didn't know why he was doing it, but these were his orders. He lived for the Fathers and died for The Fathers. When Yuru turned 18 he was given the choice to leave, but all his powers would be stripped from him. In hopes of freedom he accepted it and fled, immediately seeking the Rune Knights to help him get on his feet. Miraculously throughout his training his powers began coming back though not fully. Everyday he is getting stronger though, soon he will be that happy little Malachi again.



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#2Tenshi † 

Aryuru  Empty Tue Jan 10, 2017 10:21 pm

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Hello, I'm Finn and I'll be grading your app.

First of all, you need a class. Your age cannot be 116, as you start Human and Humans would be dead- Please fix that.

If your magic does not have an element, please state that.

"Chaos control also goes by "Chaotic Manipulation" and is labeled both a rare and forbidden magic. By law, users are subjected to time in prison." Please get rid of that.

Your history needs to be changed as well, due to the fact that you are not over 100 years old.

Also- Please get rid of you being awoken through ritual. You being sealed makes it seem/implied that you are a demon, angel, or some other creature other than human, which is not the case.

Bump when fixed.



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#3Aryuru 

Aryuru  Empty Thu Jan 19, 2017 4:24 pm

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Bump

#4Tenshi † 

Aryuru  Empty Fri Jan 20, 2017 9:41 am

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Just as a quick note- The Rune Knights are an organization made to uphold peace and protect the innocent. Are you sure you would like to join them as a sadistic killer? You certainly may- But I just wanted to make sure you know.

For your likes: "Sex: Even before he was sealed away Aryuru was a sex machine." You were never sealed away, get rid of any mention of that that.

For your fears: "Ironically, the fearless Kami fears a damn fly" You're not a Kami, and there's no mention of that being your nickname, so eliminate that mention.

History: "Over 100 years ago, a holy priest roamed the earth in search of true power in order to receive the mandate of Heaven. Unfortunately this man obtained so much power that the he could not control himself. In the end both he and his magic became corrupt. " There's no reason for that- It doesn't fit in with the rest of your history either. Are you sure you want to keep it?

Bump when edits are made.



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#5Aryuru 

Aryuru  Empty Fri Jan 20, 2017 11:06 am

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Finn wrote:Just as a quick note- The Rune Knights are an organization made to uphold peace and protect the innocent. Are you sure you would like to join them as a sadistic killer? You certainly may- But I just wanted to make sure you know.

Yeah 'cause plot.

For your likes: "Sex: Even before he was sealed away Aryuru was a sex machine." You were never sealed away, get rid of any mention of that that.


For your fears: "Ironically, the fearless Kami fears a damn fly" You're not a Kami, and there's no mention of that being your nickname, so eliminate that mention.

Kami means god. It's a self proclaimed egotistic kinda thing.

History: "Over 100 years ago, a holy priest roamed the earth in search of true power in order to receive the mandate of Heaven. Unfortunately this man obtained so much power that the he could not control himself. In the end both he and his magic became corrupt. " There's no reason for that- It doesn't fit in with the rest of your history either. Are you sure you want to keep it?

Yes. It's there to show where the magic came since everything that happened in his life was because of this magics existence.

Bump.

#6Tenshi † 

Aryuru  Empty Tue Jan 24, 2017 8:57 am

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Congratulations, this application has been approved.



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