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#1Achlys 

Achlys's Forge Empty Fri Feb 18, 2022 4:15 am

Achlys
This is my Forge

#2Achlys 

Achlys's Forge Empty Sat Mar 12, 2022 9:44 am

Achlys

General


Name: Sphere of Chordeva

Slot: Relic

Type: Sphere

Class: Legendary[30]

Quantity: Custom

Element: Darkness

Durability: 2X S-Rank

Details



Chordeva

Description: Sphere of Chordeva is a 3 inches clear orb with a structure inside of it and a metal ring floating around it. This sphere originally came from the Kyoyama family in Joya. Many generations before Achlys, her ancestor made a deal with a devil named Chordeva and kept her in a sphere now known as the Sphere of Chordeva. In every generation 1 child from the Kyoyama family is chosen by the previous holder to be the next holder after passing some tests. The last holder of the sphere happened to be Achlys’s mom and during her death, she gave the sphere to Achlys.

Measurements: 7,62cm

Extra


Requirements: Kyoyama family member.

Effects


  • Chordeva Protection: Chordeva gives the user of her sphere immunity against their spell. The user won’t get affected by their own offensive-type spells.
  • Blessed of Chordeva: With the skill that Chordeva has during her lifetime and with her blessing the user receives a 10% word reduction on completing quests.


Points Breakdown


  • Legendary[30]
  • Relic
  • Level 4 Effects[-20]
  • Level 2 Effect[-10]

Total points Acquired: 30
Total Points Spent: 30



Last edited by Achlys on Thu Mar 17, 2022 4:38 am; edited 16 times in total



Achlys Lilith Chordeva


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#3Konyo 

Achlys's Forge Empty Thu Mar 17, 2022 12:56 am

Konyo

Hi Achlys, I'll be looking at your custom today, for the most part fine but there are some things I need to highlight. Please provide a metric conversion of the item measurements. The formatting of the effects needs to be fixed. Otherwise, the B-Rank fits outside the spectrum of a regular spell as it is only otherwise attainable through a Body Defensive enhancement. If you'd like to increase the rank off the spell and tweak the item itself to fit the point limit that's one option alternatively you could replace the spell with something else, cheers.

#4Achlys 

Achlys's Forge Empty Thu Mar 17, 2022 4:11 am

Achlys
I've made some adjustment



Achlys Lilith Chordeva


Achlys

#5Konyo 

Achlys's Forge Empty Fri Mar 18, 2022 6:46 pm

Konyo

Item have been approved to be claimed.

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