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#1Seika 

FDeS S-Rank Empty Mon Sep 20, 2021 6:21 pm

Seika

Name: Aura of the Sun Avatar
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Demon Slayer Magic: Fire
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire + Light
Range: Centered upon the caster, Expands out to 16 m.
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Blessed with the power of Sol, Seika has been graced with the power to call down the actual essence of the Sun itself, wreathing himself in a blaze of glory and light that would burn all who defy Sol’s majesty. With this power he would be crowned the Emperor of a Nation and be determined to be the Second Immortal Sun.

To activate the spell, Seika may cross his arms over his chest, or if he’s wielding a weapon, he instead may use his free hand to form a half praying motion in front of his chest to begin the activation. From his feet, an intricate golden orange magic seal made of interlocked golden diamonds surrounded by growing geocentric glowing white circles with blazing regalia, will form together in full detail. The magic seal itself will be 16 meters in diameter. At first there will be no indication of the actual spell itself existing in the world around the user, however should someone either already be in the zone, or enter it in any way, they will immediately begin to feel a heavy pressure pushing down on them from all sides as the literal air they breathed began to cook them alive. Upon entering the 16 diameter zone around the user, any person within will immediately take an S-rank of Fire Damage, and an S-rank of Light Damage.

There are a few visual indications of the spell being active other than the glowing magic circle at their feet. Around the user, small whitish flames will spark where the white rings are on the magic circle. These flames are a visual indication that the spell is actively superheating the air around the user. The air itself will appear thick and hazy, almost like liquid from how hot it was. This will not hide the user from view but will obscure the user's total image due to ambient heat in the area. This may require anyone wishing to see into the area itself to use a Thermal Vision spell.



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#2Poropo Poproporp 
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FDeS S-Rank Empty Tue Oct 12, 2021 10:09 pm

Poropo Poproporp
Main concern is to make sure you know Seika will be hit by this spell because you cannot be immune to your own AoE without help from outside the spell (enhancement, equipment, Limited Magic, etc). If you understand and wish to continue;

Please remove the line "At first there will be no indication of the actual spell itself existing in the world around the user" because an offensive spell cannot be invisible.

This spell also cannot make Seika half-invisible - please remove or alter the line "will obscure the user's total image due to ambient heat in the area". Of course, a wall of fire will obscure or block vision, but the wording assumes Seika can see just fine while everyone else cannot - it needs to go both ways for an offensive spell.

Also remove "Upon entering the 16 diameter zone around the user" - as an Instant offensive spell, once the spell reaches the AoE range and activates it will stop functioning and go on cooldown. It can only be a burst of damage.

Smaller note;

You can remove the mention of having to cross one or both arms over his chest - you just need one arm for this spell to work anyway so mentioning both methods is redundant. Of course, within a thread, you can cross both arms for flavor.

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