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#1Jikan 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Sun Jun 13, 2021 8:30 pm

Jikan
Wishing to train for all of these.

Name: Watashi no hai kara no kūki
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Chikyū to kaze
Type: supplementary, AoE
Element: Wind
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Jikan extends one of her hands out before placing two fingers on her forehead. A .5 meter diameter white circle on the back of her palm while a 2 meter white circle is formed under her. Another 2 meter white circle is formed on the location the caster decides if it is not focused on their location. Once this is done a current of wind based on the size of the target's heads are formed for all who are in range, allowing them to breath underwater or in places with no breathable air. If they leave the target area before the spell activates, they do not receive the benefit of the spell.

Name: Feather step
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Chikyū to kaze
Type: supplementary, AoE
Element: Wind
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Jikan extends a finger before turning it and pointing it up. A .5 white meter circle forming at the tip of the finger while this occurs a 2 meter diameter circle also appears below the caster. At the same time, another 2 meter magic circle forms on the designated location. A small circular cylinder of wind circles is created around the feet of characters within the targeted area. This allows them to walk on vertical and horizontal planes (walls, water, etc) as long as they remain within 10 meters of the caster. If they leave the target area before the spell activates, they do not receive the benefit of the spell.

Name: Gale shrapnel
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Chikyū to kaze
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 15 Meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Jikans hold out their right hand making in a closed fist a 1-meter white magic circle appears under her as she does so. A white and brown light flashes around her fist before a twirl of wind is formed around her hand. Throwing her hand forward, the size of this twister grows outward to a max of 1 meter in size and traveling at most 15 meters. The damage of this attack is B rank.

Wishing to train for all of these.



Last edited by Jikan on Thu Jul 01, 2021 8:20 pm; edited 11 times in total

#2Tempris 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Thu Jun 24, 2021 2:16 pm

Tempris

Salutations,

Im sorry for the long wait. Due to the amount of spells you have. Lets go through them one at a time.

1. Do you plan to train or buy these spells. (all your spells)

For Watashi no hai kara no kūki
2. Since the origin of the spell isn't you (you are not shooting magic from your person at the target location) you need a spell circle to form under you. You can also have one appear on the back of your hand if you still want.

3. "A follow circle is formed on the foreheads of everyone who is in range of 2 meters of Jikan's destinated location."

It should say:
A following circle is formed on the foreheads of everyone who is in within 1 meters of the target location.
(You get a 2 meter diameter not radius.)

3. It will also take time for the spell to activate since its not spawning from yourself. The farther you spawn it, the longer it will take. So you need to mentioned that the spell circles either don't follow to members in the target location or once they leave the 1 meter radius, the magic circle disappears.

Please bump this thread when you make the requested changes.



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#3Jikan 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Fri Jun 25, 2021 6:37 pm

Jikan
Changes made based on feedback

#4Jikan 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Tue Jun 29, 2021 2:32 pm

Jikan
doing 2nd bump

#5Tempris 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Tue Jun 29, 2021 8:43 pm

Tempris

Change your last sentence to this.

If they leave the target area before the spell activates, they do not receive the benefit of the spell.

#6Tempris 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Wed Jun 30, 2021 10:38 am

Tempris

Haiena ga kuru mae ni ton'neru o horu

You cannot use a spell just nope out of a thread.

Feather Step
Remember, you get 2 meters in diameter not radius. You need to reflect that in the description.

Gale shrapnel
In terms of damage and the spell type, you need to write this spell as if you only had one element

#7Jikan 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Wed Jun 30, 2021 3:59 pm

Jikan
Changes made based on feedback

#8Tempris 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Thu Jul 01, 2021 12:02 pm

Tempris

Haiena ga kuru mae ni ton'neru o horu

This is denied. What you are describing is basically a burrowing spell which is like reverse flight which would need to be at least B rank. We are still working out how to do burrowing spells given the different unique benefits of just going and staying underground.

Feather Step
Change this:
Where everyone within a range of 1 radius from , a small circular cylinder of wind circles are created around the user's feet which allows them to walk on vertical and horizontal planes. (walls, water, etc) within 1 meters of the designated location.

To this:
A small circular cylinder of wind circles is created around the feet of characters within the targeted area. This allows them to walk on vertical and horizontal planes (walls, water, etc) as long as they remain within 10 meters of the caster.

Gale shrapnel
Sorry. I made a mistake. I was under the impression that you had combo element. Double element does not give you access to dual element spells. You have to turn this spell into a pure earth element spell, or a pure wind element spell.

After you do that, we need the dimensions of the spell.

Also, all your earth magics need to also have Double element in the requirements.

#9Jikan 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Thu Jul 01, 2021 7:24 pm

Jikan
thanks for the help. Adjustments made and I think it should be good to go now?

#10Tempris 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Thu Jul 01, 2021 8:22 pm

Tempris

This spell is approved for training.

#11Jikan 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Sat Jul 17, 2021 9:06 pm

Jikan

#12Ariael 
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Jikan spell series #2 Empty Mon Jul 19, 2021 3:47 pm

Ariael
These spells have been trained.



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