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Lightning Armament Starter Spells

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#1Naryuu 

Lightning Armament Starter Spells Empty Sat Jul 03, 2021 10:22 pm

Naryuu

Name: Lightning Armament: Hammer
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Armament
Type: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user cocks back their arm making a fist while holding an open palm against the fist. A yellow magic circle appears a few inches from the back of the open hand shrouding the fist in lightning. The user uses their lightning clad fist to strike their opponent for D-Rank Damage.


Name: Lightning Armament: Raijin
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements:Lightning Armament
Type: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Range:  Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect:     Clenching the wrist of the striking hand a yellow magic circle appears underneath the hand. This causes lightning to coat the user’s knife-hand and give it blade-like qualities. This user  uses their lightning clad knife-hand to strike their opponent for D-Rank Damage.

Name: Lightning Armament: Shroud-Volt
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Armament
Type: Self-Bulf
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user claps their hands together as a magic circle appears underneath their feet. The user's body hums to life with a shroud of yellow like aura and crackles of lightning. While active the Strength stat gains a D rank buff.

Name: Lightning Armament: Raiko
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Armament
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range:  5m
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect:  Crouching the user creates a yellow magic circle underneath their feet. With a burst of lightning the user is able to lunge in any direction up to 5m at lunge speed. Can also be used to change direction midair. A small trail of lightning is left behind as the user moves from their original position.



Last edited by Toma on Sun Jul 04, 2021 9:06 pm; edited 2 times in total

#2Ikazuchi 

Lightning Armament Starter Spells Empty Sun Jul 04, 2021 6:37 pm

Ikazuchi
Toma wrote:Name: Lightning Armament: Hammer
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Armament
Type: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user cocks back their arm making a fist while holding an open palm against the fist. A yellow magic circle appears in front of the hand shrouding the first in lightning. The user quickly strikes their intended target as the lightning dissipates after the strike.

  • Adjustment Example: The user cocks back their arm making a fist while holding an open palm against the fist. A yellow magic circle appears a few inches from the back of the open hand shrouding the fist in lightning. The user can use their lightning clad fist to strike their opponent for D-Rank Damage.


Name: Lightning Armament: Raijin
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements:Lightning Armament
Type: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Range: Sustain
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Clenching the wrist of the striking hand a yellow magic circle appears underneath the hand. The user makes a knife with the striking hand as lightning coats it giving it blade like qualities for as long as it is sustained.

  • Adjust the Range to self
  • Adjust the Duration to sustain
  • As for the spell itself, it would be consumed after a successful strike. It would require you to recast the spell in order to perform another strike with it.
  • Adjustment Example: Clenching the wrist of the striking hand a yellow magic circle appears underneath the hand. This causes lightning to coat the user’s knife-hand and give it blade-like qualities. This user can use their lightning clad knife-hand to strike their opponent for D-Rank Damage.


Name: Lightning Armament: Shroud-Volt
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Armament
Type: Self-Bulf
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user claps their hands together as a magic circle appears underneath their feet. The user's body hums to life with a shroud of yellow like aura and crackles of lightning. While active the Strength stat gains a D rank buff.

Name: Lightning Armament: Raiko
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Armament
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: 5m
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Crouching the user creates a yellow magic circle underneath their feet. With a burst of lightning the user is able to lunge in any direction. Can also be used to double jump midair. A small trail of lightning is left behind as the user moves from their original position.

  • “With a burst of lightning the user is able to lunge in any direction up to 5 meters at lunge speed.” Please add this little bit to this sentence for convenience.
  • Rather than say that it can jump midair, please change it to say that it can be used to change direction midair.
  • To clarify the above point, it’s to prevent dash spells being used to essentially reproduce flight by chaining jumps. You wouldn’t be able to gain more height or chain a lunge midair with a spell like this.


Hey there, I will be working with you on your spells. I have pointed out a few issues that need to be adjusted for these. For the first two I offered an example of an adjustment for the wording of the spell in order to prevent confusion with the description in the future. Please bump this thread when changes have been made.

#3Naryuu 

Lightning Armament Starter Spells Empty Sun Jul 04, 2021 9:07 pm

Naryuu

Changes have been made

#4Ikazuchi 

Lightning Armament Starter Spells Empty Mon Jul 05, 2021 4:10 pm

Ikazuchi
These spells have been approved.

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