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Jikan Supēsu spell series #1 [Done]

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#1Jikan 

Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Empty Wed May 05, 2021 6:49 am

Jikan
Name: Whispering Voice [ A]
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Chikyū to kaze, dual element; earth
Type: Supplmentary/Seismic sense
Element: Earth
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration:  Sustain
Effect: When cast, Jikan extends both of her arms outwards around her. Concentrating her magic to create rock structures form at the bottom of her feet, giving her an increased awareness of movement on the ground by the vibration sensitivity. While doing this, a small .25 meter circle is formed in the middle of her core and under her as she casts this spell. This magic seal is white and brown.

Name: Whispering Voice [ B ]
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Chikyū to kaze
Type: Supplmentary/Vibration sense
Element: Wind
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration:  Sustain
Effect: When cast, Jikan extends both of her arms outwards around her. Concentrating, a current of wind surrounds her body that gives off a reaction when others are moving within her area. While doing this, a small .25 meter circle is formed in the middle of her core and below her as she casts this spell. This magic seal is white and brown.

Name: Almighty push lvl 1
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Chikyū to kaze
Type: Supplementary/Knockback
Element: Wind
Range: 5 meter
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration:  Instant
Effect:Throwing out an arm, a .25 by. 25 meter wind suddenly extends outward in a sudden rush. If hit, the target is moved back from the angle of being hit by the user. This spell is instantaneously cast and cannot be sustained. A white magic seal 0.25-Meters in diameter, seen below Jikan's feet when she is casting this spell.

Name: Wind Stamp
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Chikyū to kaze
Type: Debuff
Element: Wind
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration:  Sustain
Effect: D-rank debuff to Endurance if hit. Jikan flicks her wrist, creating a .25 white magic circle in her palm that forms  a twister that is .25 meters wide that travels before turning into a stamp and attempts to strike them.

Using my first 4 free D rank slots to make these!

since these are getting pulled, I am making a 5th D rank spell and am paying for it because of the slot rule update

Name: Be One
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Chikyū to kaze, dual element; earth
Type: Supplementary
Element: Earth
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user pushes their elbow out in a direction and a brown magic circle 0.25-Meter Diameter spawns behind the user. Earth composition forms at the point of the elbow, before shooting out like a cannon, pushing them in the opposite direction their elbow was pointed to. The earth force pushed the user at their lunging Speed. The possible distance of the spell does not need to be completed before coming to a complete halt.

^buying this



Last edited by Jikan on Wed Nov 24, 2021 7:44 am; edited 13 times in total

#2Akushitsuna 

Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Empty Mon May 10, 2021 11:53 pm

Akushitsuna

Just a couple things to get these approved.

Name: Almighty push lvl 1: This would move the user up to 5 meters back from the angle of being hit by the user, not outside of the 'circle' you create at .25 meters.

Name: Wind Stamp : Any De-buff that isn't considered to be an 'area of effect' must be a projectile, and must hit the opponent in order to debuff the opponent. Also, please get rid of the 'pressures opponent to the ground part', while it is descriptive and a cool aesthetic we cant forcefully prone our opponents with a stat debuff.

#3Jikan 

Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Empty Tue May 11, 2021 12:12 pm

Jikan
Okay, corrections made

#4Akushitsuna 

Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Empty Sat May 15, 2021 4:06 pm

Akushitsuna

These spells have been approved for use.

#5Tempris 

Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Empty Tue Oct 19, 2021 5:49 pm

Tempris

Pulling these spells due to all mighty push being written as an illegal spell.

"Knock-Back: Knock-back spells are allowed for all elements. They can be used to push a target away from the user. The target can be moved up to the spell range of the spell or the AoE range if applicable. Knock-Back spells must always be an instant."

Since you wrote 1 meter as the spells range, technically you could only push people up to 1 meter. To fix this. I need you to set the spells range to 5 meters. Then I need you to remove any mention of distance being pushed back in the spells description. Once these two things are done, you will have a working legal spell that actually works the way you want it to. If you have any questions, let me know.



Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Charlotta-granblue-stance-by-ucantw1n Let all heretics be purged by my holy flames.
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#6Jikan 

Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Empty Thu Oct 28, 2021 3:41 pm

Jikan
corrections made as asked

#7Tempris 

Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Empty Sun Oct 31, 2021 6:06 am

Tempris

Almighty push lvl 1
"Throwing out an arm, the wind suddenly extends outward in a sudden rush, if hit, the target is moved back from the angle of being hit by the user."

This line needs the spell dimensions



Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Charlotta-granblue-stance-by-ucantw1n Let all heretics be purged by my holy flames.
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#8Tempris 

Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Empty Wed Nov 24, 2021 7:49 am

Tempris

These spells have been approved for use.



Jikan Supēsu  spell series #1 [Done] Charlotta-granblue-stance-by-ucantw1n Let all heretics be purged by my holy flames.
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