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#1Sofia 

Sofia's Forge Empty Tue Apr 27, 2021 4:05 am

Sofia

I am Sofia and this is my forge!

I'll find a pic of Sofia with a hammer and anvil one day... One day...



Last edited by Sofia on Tue Apr 27, 2021 4:30 am; edited 1 time in total

#2Sofia 

Sofia's Forge Empty Sun May 09, 2021 11:45 am

Sofia

Name: White Lightsaber

Slot: Weapon

Type: Sword

Handling: One-Handed

Class: Unique

Quantity: Limited

Element: Light

Damage: +60 Strength

Durability: 2x S-Rank

Description: When inactive, the weapon is simply a curved hilt without a blade. However, when the user activates it by pressing the switch on the hilt, a long white mana blade extends. The blade is retracted when the switch is pressed again or if it loses its durability. It was made in Talaz Lagaar.

Details: The hilt is 30 centimeters long and the blade is 1 meter long.

Perk:

  • Mana Blade: When activated, a 1 meter long blue mana blade extends from the hilt. This does not sap mana from the user and deals Light-type magical damage instead of physical damage. The blade hums softly and makes a buzzing sound every time it is swung. Also, the blade glows in the dark, lighting up 1 meter radius around the user.

Drawback:

  • Once retracted, the user must wait 2 posts before they can reactivate the mana blade.


Spell:

  • Name: Pull
    Rank: A
    Mana Cost: 200
    Requirements: White Lightsaber
    Type: Supplementary
    Element: Arcane
    Range: 20 Meters
    Cooldown: 4 Posts
    Duration: Instant
    Effect: When the hilt is out of the user's hand, they may pull it back into the palm of their hand, so long as it is within the spell's range.

#3Gamemaster 

Sofia's Forge Empty Wed May 12, 2021 8:44 pm

Gamemaster
White Lightsaber has been approved for use.

#4Sofia 

Sofia's Forge Empty Thu Feb 24, 2022 12:30 pm

Sofia

Apparently I need to resubmit this to make sure it works with the new system...

Name: White Lightsaber

Slot: Weapon

Type: Sword

Handling: One-Handed

Class: Unique

Quantity: Limited

Element: Light

Damage: +60 Strength

Durability: 2x S-Rank

Description: When inactive, the weapon is simply a curved hilt without a blade. However, when the user activates it by pressing the switch on the hilt, a long white mana blade extends. The blade is retracted when the switch is pressed again or if it loses its durability. It was made in Talaz Lagaar.

Details: The hilt is 30 centimeters long and the blade is 1 meter long.

Perk:
  • Mana Blade: When activated, a 1 meter long blue mana blade extends from the hilt. This does not sap mana from the user and deals Light-type magical damage instead of physical damage. The blade hums softly and makes a buzzing sound every time it is swung. Also, the blade glows in the dark, lighting up 1 meter radius around the user.

Drawback:
  • Once retracted, the user must wait 2 posts before they can reactivate the mana blade.


Spell:
  • Name: Pull
    Rank: A
    Mana Cost: 200
    Requirements: White Lightsaber
    Type: Supplementary
    Element: Arcane
    Range: 20 Meters
    Cooldown: 4 Posts
    Duration: Instant
    Effect: When the hilt is out of the user's hand, they may pull it back into the palm of their hand, so long as it is within the spell's range.

#5Khnurn 

Sofia's Forge Empty Thu Feb 24, 2022 5:19 pm

Khnurn
Please follow the current Forge template for this item.



Sofia's Forge 296c149e1fc5956ad86cc42ef223d89ee18c0fdb
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#6Sofia 

Sofia's Forge Empty Sun Feb 27, 2022 9:45 am

Sofia


General


Name: White Lightsaber

Slot: Weapon

Handling: One-Handed

Type: Sword

Class: Unique

Quantity: Custom

Element: Light

Damage: +60

Durability: 2x S-rank

Details


Description: When inactive, the weapon is simply a curved hilt without a blade. However, when the user activates it by pressing the switch on the hilt, a long white mana blade extends. The blade is retracted when the switch is pressed again or if it loses its durability. It was made in Talaz Lagaar.

Measurements: The hilt is 30 centimeters long and the blade is 1 meter long.

Effects


  • Mana Blade: When activated, a 1 meter long blue mana blade extends from the hilt. This does not sap mana from the user and deals Light-type magical damage instead of physical damage. The blade hums softly and makes a buzzing sound every time it is swung. Also, the blade glows in the dark, lighting up 1 meter radius around the user.

Spells


  • Name: Pull
    Rank: A
    Mana Cost: 200
    Requirements: White Lightsaber
    Type: Supplementary
    Element: Arcane
    Range: 20 Meters
    Cooldown: 4 Posts
    Duration: Instant
    Effect: When the hilt is out of the user's hand, they may pull it back into the palm of their hand, so long as it is within the spell's range.


Points Breakdown


Please list Forge Points gained and lost for a faster approval process.
  • Rarity
  • Unique sword (20)
  • A-rank spell (-8)
  • Level 2 effect (-10)

Total points Acquired: 20
Total Points Spent: 18

#7Khnurn 

Sofia's Forge Empty Thu Mar 03, 2022 5:55 am

Khnurn
You're missing the portion of the effect where if the blade is retracted, it has a 1 post cd before being reactivated.

Also you have two points left over.



Sofia's Forge 296c149e1fc5956ad86cc42ef223d89ee18c0fdb
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#8Sofia 

Sofia's Forge Empty Thu Mar 03, 2022 1:47 pm

Sofia

Kinda feels like those statements cancel one another out, wouldn't you say?

If I haven't spent all my points, why would I be forced to add a weakness to offset other benefits?

I mean it's not as if a normal sword can't be sheathed and used again immediately, so help me clear up why this is such a big hole in the weapon?

#9Khnurn 

Sofia's Forge Empty Thu Mar 03, 2022 11:52 pm

Khnurn
It's a part of the effect. Weaknesses and Drawbacks no longer exist in the forge.

Please include that the weapon has a 1 post cd to be reactivated.

You have two points remaining.



Sofia's Forge 296c149e1fc5956ad86cc42ef223d89ee18c0fdb
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#10Sofia 

Sofia's Forge Empty Fri Mar 04, 2022 4:55 pm

Sofia

So basically you have no reason, you just want me to do a thing because you say, and make my weapon weaker, even though you've not really told me why?

If you cannot provide a legitimate answer to me on this matter, I'm happy to wait for a staff member who can?

To my eyes, there's no announcement of a deadline on when re-apps need to be updated by, and no announcement saying anything that was approved before is not currently valid either, so there's no rush is there?

#11Khnurn 

Sofia's Forge Empty Fri Mar 04, 2022 5:56 pm

Khnurn
I'm going to restate this, because apparently you don't understand me.

The cool down. Is part of the effect. It is not a weakness, nor is it a drawback. Because those don't exist. It is a function that exists, as part of the effect.

If that is not a legitimate enough answer for you, then unfortunately your item, both the current and previous versions will be pulled.

Thank you for patience.



Sofia's Forge 296c149e1fc5956ad86cc42ef223d89ee18c0fdb
Khnurn - #FF731D/Fiorian|#D2CA27/Desiertian|#27D2CA/Joyan
Dice Roll | Victory Road | Fortune Wheel
#12Sofia 

Sofia's Forge Empty Sat Mar 05, 2022 2:18 pm

Sofia


General


Name: White Lightsaber

Slot: Weapon

Handling: One-Handed

Type: Sword

Class: Unique

Quantity: Custom

Element: Light

Damage: +70

Durability: 2x S-rank

Details


Description: When inactive, the weapon is simply a curved hilt without a blade. However, when the user activates it by pressing the switch on the hilt, a long white mana blade extends. The blade is retracted when the switch is pressed again or if it loses its durability. It was made in Talaz Lagaar.

Measurements: The hilt is 30 centimeters long and the blade is 1 meter long.

Effects


  • Mana Blade: When activated, a 1 meter long white mana blade extends from the hilt. This does not sap mana from the user and deals Light-type magical damage instead of physical damage. The blade hums softly and makes a buzzing sound every time it is swung. Also, the blade glows in the dark, lighting up 1 meter radius around the user.


Drawback:
  • Once dispelled, the user must wait 1 post before they can reactivate the mana blade.

Spells


  • Name: Pull
    Rank: A
    Mana Cost: 200
    Requirements: White Lightsaber
    Type: Supplementary
    Element: Arcane
    Range: 20 Meters
    Cooldown: 4 Posts
    Duration: Instant
    Effect: When the hilt is out of the user's hand, they may pull it back into the palm of their hand, so long as it is within the spell's range.


Points Breakdown


Please list Forge Points gained and lost for a faster approval process.
  • Rarity
  • Unique sword (20)
  • A-rank spell (-8)
  • Level 2 effect (-10)
  • Attack Power +10 (-2)

Total points Acquired: 20
Total Points Spent: 20

#13Sofia 

Sofia's Forge Empty Sat Mar 05, 2022 2:19 pm

Sofia

Seika wrote:
I'm going to restate this, because apparently you don't understand me.

The cool down. Is part of the effect. It is not a weakness, nor is it a drawback. Because those don't exist. It is a function that exists, as part of the effect.

If that is not a legitimate enough answer for you, then unfortunately your item, both the current and previous versions will be pulled.

Thank you for patience.

So, I spoke to Kon, and he cleared things up for me?

Apparently the deactivation thing is because of the magic blade effect?
That was what was confusing me? Like, it's an inherent trait of that effect, not a weakness, so THAT's why you needed me to change it huh?

Anyway, I had put the weakness back in, and used those pesky pair of extra points for an attack boost, which should hopefully make it gucci, yes?

#14Konyo 

Sofia's Forge Empty Thu Mar 17, 2022 12:51 am

Konyo

Howdy Sofia, I'll be taking over the reviewing process from here. Regarding your lightsaber, while you are making a direct copy of the lightsaber available in the shop itself, the item you're referencing exceeds the total amount of points available with the perk being 15 and the spell being A-Rank so 8 points totaling 23. you can still achieve a similar outcome however if you lower the spell to B-Rank it will leave you with one more point to allocate somewhere else. :)

#15Sofia 

Sofia's Forge Empty Thu Mar 17, 2022 4:02 pm

Sofia

Welllll, frankly since that will make my custom inferior to the store bought one, I think I'll just can this and move on from it?

Thank you to both you and Seika for the effort you put in to help me here, and sorry things didn't work out?

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