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#1Akira Eiji 

Akira Eiji Empty Sun Jan 24, 2021 7:51 am

Akira Eiji


Name: Akira Eiji

Age: 21 year old man. The male would be born on February 12th X769. He would seem around 18.

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Bisexual

Ethnicity, Father: Stellan

Ethnicity, Mother: Stellan

Class: Sorcerer

Race: Human

Rank: D-rank

Guild: Akira is Guildless.

Tattoo: The male once he joins a guild, would have a guild mark located on his right shoulder. It’d be a glorious gold, suiting. his hair.

Face: Katsuki Bakugo


Height: 6’1"

Weight: 168lbs

Hair: It can be considered a golden blonde.

Eyes: An orangish red.

Overall: The male would have a rather ‘handsome’ face for one to call it. His body would be muscular, and be extremely good to have hand to hand combat. Akira’s eyes may be red, but they'd be a beautiful red that glistens when you look inside it. His nose would be more, more.. “Cute” looking compared to the rest of him. His eyes are more pointed, revealing his anger in his eyes, or sometimes the surpassing happiness. His posture would be mature. You could obviously tell his height just by looking at him. His hair was a golden blonde, that was actually very spiky.

Extra: None!


Personality: The male would be short tempered. He would constantly be getting into fights. He would always be getting into fights. This would happen due to him getting bullied as a child. This would’ve affected him greatly, just causing him to become short-tempered. Even though he would be short-tempered, he’s not dumb enough to pick a fight he cannot win. His  personality changes a great amount. When he’s relaxed, he’s mostly just, chill, and happy. When he is having a bad day, he’ll be the exact opposite. Basically any human when you truly think about it. Akira would always trying his best for everything, and just- wants to be a good human. The only thing in his way is his bad side. Akira would have a slight factor of getting scared. This is a rare occasion, but it does happen. When this happens, you’ll feel great fear from him, along with his body shaking immensely. Akira would be a bit dumb, but, when you actually go down to it, he’s a very smart male. Not just any dumb boy. Akira would sometimes be an attention freak, and do dumb things for attention. If he does this, he will try to be smart about it  The male often does many different things, and hobbies, just to get away from the world.. Though he doesn't possess the greatest common sense, Akira is actually very intelligent.

Dogs: The male has a soft spot for dogs. Back as a child, he’d travel with them. The dog would always make him happy, and try to make him have a good day. Another reason why he always liked dogs.

Gardening: He always had a small spot for gardening. Gardening is something he likes to do to pass time, and get through life. It’s like a stress reliever for him. Gardening felt like something that saved him from his past, and fully helped him manage stress. But, when the anger takes over, it doesn’t.

Bragging: He has a disliking towards things that think they’re better than him. He can sense when somethings better of course, and he’ll respect that.. But, he really just wants to be the best. If you’re the same rank as him, bragging around how good you are, he’s bound to get pissed off. [Don’t mind him doing that himself, he doesn’t mind that.]

Bullying: He has a strong disliking towards the factor of people trying to bully/pick others. He was picked on as a child, and always hated to see someone get bullied. If he saw this happening to someone else, and he could manage it, he’d help the one getting bullied.


Being A Good Person: His greatest motivation is to best him. He wants to achieve the goal of becoming a good wizard, and just being a good person. He wants to get to manage his anger, along with everything. Akira wants to have a good life, and he wants to enjoy what he does.


Losing Loved Ones: He has a fear of losing the ones he loves. He’d always grow up watching people die, due to things that’ll be explained in history. He just really, can’t stand someone getting injured. In all honesty, he might act all strong, but if this happens, he’s bound to lend you a hand.

Heights: He has a fear towards heights. He is extremely overwhelmed by heights. They scare him in all honesty. If he were to be put somewhere high in the air, he’d freak out extremely. Just one of his fears..


Distribute 25 points over the attributes below.

Strength: 5

Speed: 5

Constitution: 4

Endurance: 6

Intelligence:  5


Magic Name: Star Make Magic

Magic Element: Fire, Earth.

Magic Enhancement: Double Element

Magic Description: Instead of an actual star, it's more of a yellow color, sort of like when you draw stars. The items it creates can affect gravity, cause burning damage and even inflict blindness. Most of the items will be melee based, but can be used to create some mid to long range items as well.


The male was born on X769. He was a baby with a golden, ashy blonde. His mother was a great woman, who significantly took care of the child. She decided to name his Akira, after being clear, smart, and also sun, reminding her of his hair. The child, as a baby, was always played with by his mother. The  mother loved the child, and would never want anything bad to happen to him. Unfortunately, the father was unknown, and left the family after he found out the wife was pregnant. The baby child always loved his mother, and looked up to her.

Little Akira, slowly grew up to the age of three. He would’ve started to be talkative. He never really.. Had anything or a grudge against the father. His mind would barely cross the father. Akira was growing at a rapid paste, but so was his attitude. His attitude was growing, due to occurrences that have been happening to him when he travels alone. His mother knows nothing of this.. Occurrence. By the time the occurrence started, Akira was the age of 10. His mom would let him play outside near the house.. But, sadly, other kids were picking on him. They would call him names, make fun of him for not having a father.

He continued growing up, and he was around the age of 13. By now, he was around 5’3, and looking a bit tiny. He was still getting picked on, but he was slowly learning magic. One thing his mother didn’t know.. The only thing she didn’t know, that was he was sneaking out and training in the forest. One day once in the forest, he met a male shooting out stars from a canon. Akira was extremely interested, afraid, but still interested. He slowly crept up, the male shooting stars turning in a blink of an eye. The dark haired male would smile, teaching Akira something new.

The male would be teaching Akira a new magic called Star Make Magic. Akira would sneak out everyday to be taught. Eventually, his mother ended up finding out. Akira would explain the whole thing to her, and she would understand, allowing him to train. The age of Akira was now 18, and he was rather- muscular. The bullies would try to pick on him, using ice magic, and other magics. Akira was able to beat them, throwing a few punches, and using his star sword to defeat the ice. Akira was finally getting somewhere in life.

After he thought everything was going so well.. At the age of 20, his mother died. She was sadly assassinated by some dark mages. They used her as a hostage while mages killed her. Akira vowed to become a full-on mage, just to stop these things from happening to others. Her death was his snapping point, and.. Is the reason why he is the way he is now. He would reach 21, and that’s where we are now!

Reference: I found the website while trying to find a Fairy Tail roleplay. This is actually my first time doing forum roleplay, and I’m really excited!

Last edited by pinkie!! on Sun Jan 24, 2021 2:02 pm; edited 6 times in total


Akira Eiji Empty Sun Jan 24, 2021 11:33 am

Hello, I'll be grading your character application.

Overall, it's not bad, you get the general gist of things. I just have some modifications and recommendations before your application can be fully accepted.

  • For his age, you don't need to actually explain things. Simply writing it as: 21 | February 12th X769 will work perfectly fine.

  • As far as the parents are concerned, we just need to know what ethnicity they are. You don't need to include their names here. There is a list of ethnicities you can choose from in the character application template.

  • Just put Sorcerer as your class.

  • You don't need brackets around Human.

  • For the tattoo, all you need to say is: When he joins a guild, the tattoo will be gold, and placed on his right shoulder.

  • For the height, you only actually need to include one type of measurement. It's fine if you want to leave it as it is, but it's not necessary.

  • Same thing for weight. It's fine if you want to have both of those, but just pounds or kilograms works.

  • Your Overall section is fine. It could use a little cleaning up to help with the flow, but for the most part, it's acceptable.

  • For your personality section, you have a mixture of past tense and present tense going on. This can be a bit confusing when reading. Saying things like "Would have" or "Would be" when referencing something that the character currently possesses can lead people to believe that these are traits or habits that the character no longer possesses. Also, you have a few contradicting statements regarding his personality. Saying that he's dumb, but then saying that he's smart. I recommend saying something like: Though he doesn't possess the greatest common sense, Akira is actually very intelligent.

  • You can remove the ! after Fire.

  • Your magic is going to be a bit trickier. As it is now, you're basically designing a Fire Make Magic. Considering gravity is the primary aspect of a star, not fire, I recommend switching your enhancement to Double Elemental. That will allow you to add in Earth as an additional element, and that would let you add in gravity effects to your magic, which would make it much more similar to an actual star's effects.

  • For your magic's description, you can remove the bits in brackets about upgrading your magic, it's not necessary for the description. You also don't need to mention the size of the items you can create with it.

  • I recommend removing the bit about not being able to make cannons, as that would be a very good ability for this magic, but that's entirely up to you.

  • As far as the magic 'sort of being a star', remember, stars are basically huge balls of highly dense mass, insane gravity, and incredible heat. As such, it would be very difficult for you to make the magic actually appear as a star. This doesn't mean your magic won't work, I'd just take this part out.

  • 'When using Star Make Magic, it does not hurt the opponents eyes are anything of that matter. It’ll just be like a star with a burning sensation.' I'd remove that bit, as causing blindness in your targets will be a very useful ability. Again, not necessary for approval, just a recommendation.

The rest is good to go. Whenever you make the edits, post a reply saying the edits have been made, or just 'Bump'. Then link your application in the Character Review area once more so it can be reviewed again.

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#3Akira Eiji 

Akira Eiji Empty Sun Jan 24, 2021 11:58 am

Akira Eiji
Bump! I just got done making my edits! If there's anymore problems, just let me know!! Also, for the would be parts, I was a bit confused.. So, I just tried my best to fix it! Thanks for making my application better!


Akira Eiji Empty Sun Jan 24, 2021 12:33 pm

It's better, but you still have a few things to edit up, and then it'll be good to go.

  • For the parents, you'll need to use ethnicities found in the FTRP world. You can find a list of possible ethnicities to use here: Character Application Template

  • You don't need to mention how your magic is similar to Ice Make magic, as that's a given, considering your using a maker magic. You also don't need to mention things like the magic having spikes and whatnot. What we're looking for, is a simple explanation of how your magic will be used.

  • For example, you can simply say something like: This magic possesses properties similar to a star. The items it creates can affect gravity, cause burning damage and even inflict blindness. Most of the items will be melee based, but can be used to create some mid to long range items as well.

  • You'll focus on the actual effects of the magic and it's spells when you actually start making the spells. You don't need to mention anything about upgrades, as that's a given for all magic as you rank up and get stronger.

Bump again like you just did and link the app to character review again after you've made the edits.

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#5Akira Eiji 

Akira Eiji Empty Sun Jan 24, 2021 2:19 pm

Akira Eiji
Bump! Thanks for helping.

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Thank you for reading!

Akira Eiji Empty Sun Jan 24, 2021 2:22 pm

This character application has been approved.

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