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Rakurai (落雷) Starter Pack

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#1Raikou 

Rakurai (落雷) Starter Pack Empty Tue Jan 19, 2021 11:03 am

Raikou
雷光急騰

Name: Raikō kyūtō
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25 MP
Requirements: Rakurai (落雷)
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user have to snap their finger and after the magic circle showed up under their feet, they only have to make a jump this spell will allow him to jump for 5 meters with the electricity from the lightning

雷光疾走

Name: Raikō shissō
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25 MP
Requirements: Rakurai (落雷)
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: When the user snap their finger, and the magic circle triggered under their feet, the lightning will cover their body and will allow them to dash in any direction within 5 meters

電光球

Name: Denkō-kyū
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25 MP
Requirements: Rakurai (落雷)
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user only need to snap his finger and open their fist, and a little ball of lightning will appear on their hand and can be use to illuminate the dark up to 5 meters around the user.

電光動き

Name: Denkō ugoki
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25 MP
Requirements: Rakurai (落雷)
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user only need to snap his finger while they’re in mid air and will call the 2 magic circle under each of their feet. This will allow them to control their move mid air to make sharp move, turn, and restrict forced movement (e.g. falling from the sky, knock-back).

#2Akushitsuna 

Rakurai (落雷) Starter Pack Empty Sat Jan 23, 2021 11:36 pm

Akushitsuna

No offense, but I'm gonna need you to be a bit more grammatically correct with the wording of your spells overall.

  • EXAMPLE
  • Name: Raikō kyūtō
  • ORIGINAL: Effect: The user have to snap their finger and after the magic circle showed up under their feet, they only have to make a jump this spell will allow him to jump for 5 meters with the electricity from the lightning.

  • POSSIBLE SOLUTION:
  • The user snaps their finger, which causes a magical circle to appear clearly beneath their feet. The user can then jump a total of 5 meters at 20 M/s with a surge of electricity left behind the original location.

  • ETC. Please make the rest of your spells more definitive in nature, along with more grammatically correct information.

  • Sorry, I wouldn't ask as much if it wasn't several issues present.

#3Karisa 

Rakurai (落雷) Starter Pack Empty Thu Mar 04, 2021 5:19 pm

Karisa

The user has 48 hours to reply to their spell thread notifying that they still wish to finish their spells before it becomes archived.

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