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#1Kuvakiri 

D-Rank Starters Empty Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:07 pm

Kuvakiri
Name: Falcon's Beginning Swoop
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: A Free Hand
Type: Supplementary
Element: Frost
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The caster will thrust their arm forward and create a cyan sigil in front of their knuckles, summoning a frost knife that expands into the size of a cannon ball [.25 Meter Diameter] and flies towards a target, expanding and binding the target for 1 post. it can be broken out of with D-Rank Str.

Name: Snake's Beginner Journey
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: A Free Hand
Type: Supplementary
Element: Frost
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustained
Effect: The caster will form sigils around their eyes momentarily as they bring their free hand upwards before a frosty aura begins to emit from them, granting the caster thermal sense in a 5 meter radius around themselves.

Name: White Fox Snap
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: A Free Hand
Type: Offensive
Element: Frost
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The caster will thrust their arm forward and create a cyan sigil in front of their knuckles, summoning a frost knife that expands into the size of a cannon ball [.25 Meter Diameter] and flies towards a target/

Name: Ram Interception Strike
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: A Free Hand
Type: Supplementary
Element: Frost
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user will form an "okay" sign with their free hand and produce a cyan sigil in front of it, then by flicking their wrist, a battering ram of ice will spew forth towards the target from the casters palm. This ram has ram markings engraved upon its ice and is very blunt at the end, having a .25 Meter diameter. On a successful strike, the target will be knocked down.



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#2Kuvakiri 

D-Rank Starters Empty Mon Jan 11, 2021 11:33 pm

Kuvakiri
Updated

#3Ezekiel 

D-Rank Starters Empty Wed Jan 13, 2021 12:20 pm

Ezekiel
- Falcons Beginning Swoop: Spells can't be both Binding and offensive without an enhancement. Knock back is "Supplementary" spell.

- Snakes Beginner Journey: Remove "However, against "dark" races, this thermal sense will be extended an additional 5 meters.", not allowed. Also add a motion in which you activate this spell.

- Boars Tusked Charge: Denied. Limb crippling is an enhancement, knock back is considered a supplementary type spell, dashing is also a supplementary type spell.

- Iceviathan's Blink: Denied.

#4Kuvakiri 

D-Rank Starters Empty Mon Jan 18, 2021 5:20 am

Kuvakiri
Updated? Gone Full supplementary route

#5Aegis 

D-Rank Starters Empty Tue Feb 16, 2021 12:02 am

Aegis

Hello there. o/

A few things to change, and a bit of reading to do.


  • D-Rank Maximum Dimension for spells is 0.25-Meter Diameter and the actual size must be listed on each spell.
  • Snake's Beginner Journey: The range does not/can not increase
  • Requirements are what magic is required, so your own in this case
  • White Fox Snapback: Does not reapply after sustain. You need to state that someone can break out of it with D rank STR. It is also an AoE: D-Rank AoE: 1-Meter Diameter. I am assuming this was created as a bind, and cant create terrain. Also, once you leave a sustain spells range, you must recast it as the spell will end.
  • Polar Bear Launch: Can not change based of friend, foe, item, ect. It also is an AoE so size must change


I do recommend rereading the Magic and Spell regulations in order to better understand the limitations and spell types.




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Music: Visage- Social- Combat
#6Kuvakiri 

D-Rank Starters Empty Tue Feb 16, 2021 8:24 am

Kuvakiri
Updated. Reading Magic and Spell Regulations does not help my problems. :D

#7Aegis 

D-Rank Starters Empty Wed Feb 17, 2021 3:29 pm

Aegis

Falcon's Beginning Swoop: Can not have two effects
White Fox Snapback: is an AoE, so must have AoE range
Ram Interception Strike: Can not have 2 separate effects

All spells must also state the size of the magic circles, including the ones on your person.




D-Rank Starters Yaga-f12
Music: Visage- Social- Combat
#8Kuvakiri 

D-Rank Starters Empty Thu Feb 18, 2021 11:14 am

Kuvakiri
Maybe this is good now?

#9Aegis 

D-Rank Starters Empty Thu Feb 18, 2021 3:14 pm

Aegis

All spells must also state the size of the magic circles, including the ones on your person.




D-Rank Starters Yaga-f12
Music: Visage- Social- Combat
#10Karisa 

D-Rank Starters Empty Thu Mar 04, 2021 5:19 pm

Karisa

The user has 48 hours to reply to their spell thread notifying that they still wish to finish their spells before it becomes archived.

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