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Chain Magic Spells Vol2

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#1Joshua Graham 

Chain Magic Spells Vol2 Empty on Thu Aug 27, 2020 1:40 pm

Joshua Graham
Name: Chain Whip
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Chain Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Sustained
Effect: The user opens both hands creating a magic circle in their palm. A 0.25 meter wide chain appears from the magic circles that can reach a total of 10 meters from the User. Offensive spells apply a binding effect equal to one rank higher than the spell's rank.

This spell moves at spell speed, deals C rank damage, and inflicts a B rank bind. 

Name: Movement Chain 
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Chain Magic
Type: Supp
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user points at a target and runs their hand down their waist to their hips and taps it, the user is immediately pulled from the hips to the target at Lunge speed. 

Name: Movement Chain 
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Chain Magic
Type: Supp
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user points at a target and runs their hand down their waist to their hips and taps it, the user is immediately pulled from the hips to the target at Lunge speed. 

Name: Movement Chain 
Rank:
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Chain Magic
Type: Supp
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown:  2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user points at a target and runs their hand down their waist to their hips and taps it, the user is immediately pulled from the hips to the target at Lunge speed.



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#2Jan Ren 

Chain Magic Spells Vol2 Empty on Thu Aug 27, 2020 2:01 pm

Jan Ren
Hey there!

  • TWO CHAINZ Whip: I had to. XD
    Alright so again, mention spell travel speed and chain dimensions; also, note that to sustain an offensive spell, you must pay double the mana; as such, mana cost would be 100 on a C-rank. In addition, since your magic has bind on hit, mention bind effect for the two whips (binds when one hits, binds when both hit or whichever) and its respective rank.

  • Grappling Chain: Honestly, the parts about entanglement and breaking the chain are unnecessary as the binding effect applies in all your spells, should you choose to sustain them (as a bind effect).
    Aside from that, once again mention spell travel speed and dimensions, and mention precise rank of bind.

  • Movement Chain(s): Mention distance and change speed from running to dash.


Post again in spell review when done!

#3Jan Ren 

Chain Magic Spells Vol2 Empty on Mon Aug 31, 2020 4:52 pm

Jan Ren
Hey again!

  • As a general note, whenever you try to bind an opponent on supplementary, it should mention the chains' durability.
    In addition, all your spells travel at the same speed of 20 m/s (refer to as spell speed for convenience).

  • Twin Chain Whips: Because you're splitting the spell, it splits the binding effect as well. So the effect would be C-rank bind on both.

  • Grappling Chain: The added effect of moving the opponent for extra mana is not allowed. Remove that please.


Post again in spell review when done!

#4Jan Ren 

Chain Magic Spells Vol2 Empty on Tue Sep 01, 2020 2:15 pm

Jan Ren
These spells have been approved for training.

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