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Fire Dragon Slayer magick Vol. III

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#1Natsumi Duranndal 

Fire Dragon Slayer magick Vol. III Empty on Fri Aug 14, 2020 10:43 am

Natsumi Duranndal
Name: Fire Dragon's Roar Nova
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: First Generation Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The User breaths in fire, building up a huge amount and then roars, A 2 meter diameter concentrated Fire beam is fired out, dealing A rank damage too all caught in the path of fire. During the spell the user lets out a terrifying Dragonic roar that sounds inhumane.

#2Jan Ren 

Fire Dragon Slayer magick Vol. III Empty on Sat Aug 15, 2020 1:48 am

Jan Ren
Hey there!

So the only real issue I see here is the 'user breaths in fire' part. It insinuates that you'll be breathing in specifically fire, which is significantly hindering since you don't just find fire laying around in places. I might be reading too literally into this, but I think if it's just 'user inhales deeply' it would be a lot simpler for you.

Just a thought, honestly. Don't mind approving it as it is though



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#3Natsumi Duranndal 

Fire Dragon Slayer magick Vol. III Empty on Sat Aug 15, 2020 3:50 am

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It was supposed to be like that, like the later roars where they don't need to clasps their hands around their mouths

#4Jan Ren 

Fire Dragon Slayer magick Vol. III Empty on Sat Aug 15, 2020 4:25 am

Jan Ren
This spell has been approved for training.



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