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#1Shichiro Uchida 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Thu Jan 16, 2020 11:15 pm

Shichiro Uchida
Name: World of Volcanism
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Magma
Type: Offensive
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster claps their hands before violently slamming them into the floor beneath them. Injecting mana into the surface below, the user creates a two feet wave of magma to erupt from around the user, using themselves as a center point of the spell’s creation before traveling a maximum of thirty-six diameters, moving at twenty meters a second. Magma will continue to be released from the ground until it is a meter high. Once the spell hits its maximum given range, walls of earthen magma will sprout up in the form of an incomplete dome in order to simulate being inside the top of an open volcano waiting to erupt. The walls grow until they are five meters tall. Being hit by the magma wave or touching the wall will cause A-rank damage. Subsequently, standing in the field of the magma will also cause A-ranked sustain damage. 

Name: Magma Blades
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Magma
Type: Offensive
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster begins to heave magma from his mouth into the shape of an existing common sword or dagger of their choice. The user may shape and mold the dimensions of the earthen magma until it meets their requirements or satisfaction as long as it mirrors already existing blades. The spell does not replicate the magical properties of mirrored blades.

Name: Magma Fueled Flight
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Magma
Type: Supplementary
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster outstretches their arms in any given direction, concentrating their mana into the palms of their hands or the soles of their feet. This gives makes a violent burst of magma pouring out in which they use to simulate rocket propelled flight. The users can fly as high as ten meters, as well as up to twenty meters a second. 

Name: Magma Armor
Rank: A Rank 
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Magma
Type: Self-Buff
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user stomps his foot into the surface below him in order to create magma from the sole of his foot that begin to coat their entire body in a layered suit of heated armor. This spell grants the user an A-rank Constitution buff.

Name: Magma Beam
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Magma
Type: Offensive
Element: Magma
Range: Twenty Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user clasps their wrists together, curling the tips of their fingers, they would fire a two diameter beam in a direction their choosing, dealing A-ranked sustained damage, travelling at twenty meters a second up to a maximum range of twenty meters. The beam will halt when colliding into another person.

Name: Magma Bomb
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Magma
Type: Offensive
Element: Magma
Range: 15 Meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster curls one of his hands, concentrating is mana to the center to produce a magma ball which he can then hurl at in a direction of his choosing up to fifteen meters, travelling up to twenty meters a second. The magma ball is one diameter in size, exploding up to one diameter on contact, causing B-rank sustained damage. 

Name: Magma Surge
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Magma
Type: Self Buff
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user stomps on the floor before generating and coating his body with hardened magma in order to bolster his endurance. This provides the caster with a B-rank Constitution Buff.



Last edited by Shichiro Uchida on Fri Jan 24, 2020 4:35 am; edited 6 times in total

#2Fayre 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Sat Jan 18, 2020 8:56 am

Fayre
If you can, please split these into two or three different threads for grading.

#3Shichiro Uchida 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Sat Jan 18, 2020 1:40 pm

Shichiro Uchida
Odd request but sure.

#4Fayre 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Sun Jan 19, 2020 9:03 pm

Fayre
Hello~ I will be grading your spells.

Every Ability: Instead of Fire and Magic for Requirements, please replace it with just Magma. Also, before your, place in the magic in full that was approved and its perks. Lastly here, include your magic circle and color into descriptions.

World of Volcanism: 1/2 Approved.

Magma Blades: Self Buff and Offensive is not approvable. Only one function is allowed, not multiple like damage, strength buff, and durability. The blades will disappear upon dealing first damage. Furthermore, you cannot create more blades for more mana.

Magma Fueled Flight: You are unable to have more than one function, and type for spells. Also there is a max height, which is 10m for A rank.

Magma Armor: 1/2 Approved.

Magma Golem: Construct spells of this kind are not approvable.

Magma Bomb: Exploding in a 4m radius (aka 8m diameter) is not allowed for a projectile.

Magma Surge: 1/2 Approved.

#5Shichiro Uchida 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Mon Jan 20, 2020 2:52 am

Shichiro Uchida
Edited some of the concerns.

Every Ability: Most of what this addressed seemed nitpicky and not very relevant to the spells itself, such as the color and magic circle which are already defined in spell regulations. This is my magic if you want a reference. 

Magma Blades - Removed the 'Self Buff' tag, durability and extra blade effect. The spell is labeled 'sustain' which my magic allows me to perform so i can have it around as long as i pay the upkeep.

Magma Fuel Flight - Removed the 'Offensive' tag. Also, the spell already states the maximum height it can obtain.

Magma Golem - Now changed to Magma Beam

Magma Bomb - Edited the mistake of radius to diameter. The spell regulations state a projectile can be an AoE after contact under 'Movement'.

Bump.

#6Noyiah Dashi 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Wed Jan 22, 2020 9:01 am

Noyiah Dashi
Spell Notes:

Name: World of Volcanism
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Magma
Type: Offensive
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster claps their hands before violently slamming them into the floor beneath them. Injecting mana into the surface below, the user creates a two feet wave of magma to erupt from around the user, using themselves as a center point of the spell’s creation before traveling a maximum of thirty-six diameters, moving at twenty meters a second. Magma will continue to be released from the ground until it is a meter high. Once the spell hits its maximum given range, walls of earthen magma will sprout up in the form of an incomplete dome in order to simulate being inside the top of an open volcano waiting to erupt. The walls grow until they are five meters tall. Being hit by the magma wave or touching the wall will cause A-rank damage. Subsequently, standing in the field of the magma will also cause A-ranked sustain damage.

Approved

Name: Magma Blades
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Magma
Type: Offensive
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster begins to heave magma from his mouth into the shape of an existing common sword or dagger of their choice. The user may shape and mold the dimensions of the earthen magma until it meets their requirements or satisfaction as long as it mirrors already existing blades.

Please Indicate That you may not replicate Magical blades/properties.



Name: Magma Fueled Flight
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Magma
Type: Supplementary
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster outstretches their arms in any given direction, concentrating their mana into the palms of their hands or the soles of their feet. This gives makes a violent burst of magma pouring out in which they use to simulate rocket propelled flight. The users can fly as high as ten meters, as well as up to twenty meters a second. Should something be caught by the magma being violently expelled from the caster, the being in question will receive A-rank sustained damage.

As this one Breaches the capability of Supplementary Spells  I am seeking a Second opinion from a Admin,  until then fix up the other changes and ill get back to you ASAP on this spell  my apologies.

I have been Informed  you can not deal damage and fly at the same time with one spell,  they must be split into two different spells,  or to  just remove the damage.


Name: Magma Armor
Rank: A Rank
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Magma
Type: Self-Buff
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user stomps his foot into the surface below him in order to create magma from the sole of his foot that begin to coat their entire body in a layered suit of heated armor. This spell grants the user an A-rank Constitution buff.

Approved

Name: Magma Beam
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Magma
Type: Offensive
Element: Magma
Range: Twenty Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user clasps their wrists together, curling the tips of their fingers, they would fire a two diameter beam in a direction their choosing, dealing A-ranked sustained damage, travelling at twenty meters a second up to a maximum range of twenty meters.

This one would Stop on contact of first enemy.( but can be Sustained on)  I would like that included please.

Name: Magma Bomb
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Magma
Type: Offensive
Element: Magma
Range: 15 Meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster curls one of his hands, concentrating is mana to the center to produce a magma ball which he can then hurl at in a direction of his choosing up to fifteen meters, travelling up to twenty meters a second. The magma ball is one diameter in size, exploding up to four diameters on contact, causing B-rank sustained damage.

This one  states its 1 Diameter,   so please correct this to 1m diameter.  4m Diameters

Name: Magma Surge
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Magma
Type: Self Buff
Element: Magma
Range: Self
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user stomps on the floor before generating and coating his body with hardened magma in order to bolster his endurance. This provides the caster with a B-rank Constitution Buff.

Approved.

#7Shichiro Uchida 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Thu Jan 23, 2020 2:10 am

Shichiro Uchida
Magma Blades - Add cannot replicate magical properties of weapons.

Magma Beam - Added knockback and only halts if it collides into a person at max range.

Magma Flight - Removed damage

Magma Bomb - Changed Magma Bomb explosion radius.

Bump.

#8Noyiah Dashi 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Thu Jan 23, 2020 9:02 am

Noyiah Dashi
the others are good,

Magma beam- if you add Knock back you must lower the damage by one stage ( B ranked)

#9Shichiro Uchida 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Fri Jan 24, 2020 4:35 am

Shichiro Uchida
Magma Beam - Removed knockback.

#10Noyiah Dashi 

Shichiro's Spells Empty on Fri Jan 24, 2020 4:58 am

Noyiah Dashi
These spells have been approved.

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