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#1Sage Meilyr 

Arts of The Kamui Empty on Tue Dec 24, 2019 11:46 pm

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Name: Kamui Phase
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Supplementary
Element: Arcane
Range: -
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps the temple of their head prompting their eye to change in appearance and activate. They then suck themselves into their right eye entering the Kamui dimension. Upon entering the dimension a magic circle will form indicating their origin. The user must sustain the spell to keep the dimension active in the topic itself. The user may freely leave the dimension once per turn and return in the following post with a magic circle appear at the original position.

Name: Short Ranged Kamui
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Defensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user taps the temple of their head prompting their eye to change in appearance and activate. They then may teleport anything they are looking at into the kamui dimension which only they can access. This can be an individual, spell or equipment, even general environment within the 4-meter Area of Effect. This allows them to block up to A-Rank damage if a spell is offensive or the individual is attempting to attack them. If an individual is teleported into the Kamui dimension the user must pay an additional 100 mana. The target can also break out of the dimension if they spend the equivalent mana cost to the spell.

Name: Medium Ranged Kamui
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Defensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps the temple of their head prompting their eye to change in appearance and activate. They then may teleport anything they are looking at into the kamui dimension which only they can access. This can be an individual, spell or equipment, even general environment within the 8-meter Area of Effect. This allows them to block up to S-Rank damage if a spell is offensive or the individual is attempting to attack them. If an individual is teleported into the Kamui dimension the user must pay an additional 200 mana. The target can also break out of the Dimension if they spend the equivalent mana cost to the spell.

Name: Long Ranged Kamui
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Defensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps the temple of their head prompting their eye to change in appearance and activate. They then may teleport anything they are looking at into the kamui dimension which only they can access. This can be an individual, spell or equipment, even general environment within the 16-meter Area of Effect. This allows them to block up to 2xS-Rank damage if a spell is offensive or the individual is attempting to attack them. If an individual is teleported into the Kamui dimension the user must pay an additional 500 mana. The target can also break out of the dimension if they spend the equivalent mana cost to the spell.

Name: Kamui Phase
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Supplementary
Element: Arcane
Range: 25 meters
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps the temple of their head prompting their eye to change in appearance and activate. They then suck themselves into their right eye entering the Kamui dimension allowing them exiting back to whatever location they please within the spells range. Upon entering the dimension a magic circle will form indicating their origin. The user must sustain the spell to keep the dimension active in the topic itself. At the cost of 500 more mana, they may bring one extra person with them if they touch them with their other hand for at least 5 seconds. The user may freely leave the dimension once per turn and return in the following post with a magic circle appearing at the users new location. The user must pay an additional 500 mana per turn for each additional individual in the dimension. If the user is knocked out or killed everyone within the Kamui dimension will be forced out of the Kamui Dimension.

#2Sage Meilyr 

Arts of The Kamui Empty on Wed Dec 25, 2019 4:00 am

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Name: Dimensional Walk
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Supplementary
Element: Arcane
Range: NA
Cooldown: 1 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps their toe once and a gray magic circle will appear underneath them. There will be a soft purple glow around their feet and they will be able to instead of walk and run, skate through any surface. (The speed of the user stays the same as their running speed.)

Name: Blink
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Supplementary
Element: Arcane
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user jumps towards a direction while having one of their hands in a position where only the index and pinky fingers are raised up. A grey magic circle appears underneath the user and the user can dash up to 5 meters towards a preferred direction based on the user's speed. The dash will create purplish afterimage of the user.

Name: Wave
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user swings his arm towards a direction and a gray magic circle will form in front of them and releases a 2-meter purple energy wave that travels up to 10 meters dealing up to C-Rank damage to everything in its way and disappears after it does so.

Name: Kamui Energy Blast
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user places their palm towards a direction. A magic circle will appear on their palm and a 2-meter diameter beam of purple energy will surge out from their palm and deals A-rank damage to anything it hits.

Name: Cataclysm
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user places their palm towards a direction and a magic circle will appear in front of their palm. The spell will travel towards the target area. A gray magic circle with an area of up to 8-meter diameter will form on the surface of the target area and pinkish white light will blast within the area of effect, damaging everything in it by an A-rank damage.

'Kamui Cube' Set:
Name: Kamui Cube I
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user closes their palm and a gray magic circle will form in front of it. A purple dimensional cube the size of an apple will form in the user's palm immediately. They can then throw the cube into a direction where it will travel up to 5 meters from the user and when it comes into contact with something, or reaches its max range, it will create a 1-meter diameter explosion that deals D-Rank damage to everything within the area of effect.

Name: Kamui Cube II
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user closes their palm and a gray magic circle will form in front of it. A purple dimensional cube the size of an apple will form in the user's palm immediately. They can then throw the cube into a direction where it will travel up to 10 meters from the user and when it comes into contact with something, or reaches its max range, it will create a 2-meter diameter explosion that deals C-Rank damage to everything within the area of effect.

Name: Kamui Cube III
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user closes their palm and a gray magic circle will form in front of it. A purple dimensional cube the size of an apple will form in the user's palm immediately. They can then throw the cube into a direction where it will travel up to 15 meters from the user and when it comes into contact with something, or reaches its max range, it will create a 4-meter diameter explosion that deals B-Rank damage to everything within the area of effect.

'Kamui's Curse' Set:
Name: Kamui's Curse I
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user touches a target with one of their body parts and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a D-Rank Debuff on their Constitution.

Name: Kamui's Curse II
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user touches a target with one of their body parts and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a C-Rank Debuff on their Constitution.

Name: Kamui's Curse II.i
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user touches a target with one of their body parts and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a C-Rank Debuff on their Speed.

Name: Kamui's Curse III
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user touches a target with one of their body parts and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a B-Rank Debuff on their Constitution.

Name: Kamui's Curse IV
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user touches a target with one of their body parts and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a A-Rank Debuff on their Constitution.



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#3Noyiah Dashi 

Arts of The Kamui Empty on Thu Dec 26, 2019 6:27 pm

Noyiah Dashi
Name: Kamui Phase
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Supplementary
Element: Arcane
Range: -
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps the temple of their head prompting their eye to change in appearance and activate. They then suck themselves into their right eye entering the Kamui dimension. Upon entering the dimension a magic circle will form indicating their origin. If the magic circle is destroyed by dealing 1xB-Rank damage the user will be ejected from the Kamui Dimension. The user must sustain the spell to keep the dimension active in the topic itself. The user may freely leave the dimension once per turn and return in the following post with a magic circle appear at the original position.

Approved

Name: Short Ranged Kamui
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Defensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user taps the temple of their head prompting their eye to change in appearance and activate. They then may teleport anything they are looking at into the kamui dimension which only they can access. This can be an individual, spell or equipment, even general environment within the 4-meter Area of Effect. This allows them to block up to A-Rank damage if a spell is offensive or the individual is attempting to attack them. If an individual is teleported into the Kamui dimension the user must pay an additional 200 mana. if the target's Strength is of higher rank than the rank of the spell, they can break through the spell as though nothing happened. The target can also break out of the if they spend the equivalent mana cost to the spell.

Approved

Name: Medium Ranged Kamui
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Defensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps the temple of their head prompting their eye to change in appearance and activate. They then may teleport anything they are looking at into the kamui dimension which only they can access. This can be an individual, spell or equipment, even general environment within the 8-meter Area of Effect. This allows them to block up to S-Rank damage if a spell is offensive or the individual is attempting to attack them. If an individual is teleported into the Kamui dimension the user must pay an additional 400 mana. if the target's Strength is of higher rank than the rank of the spell, they can break through the spell as though nothing happened. The target can also break out of the Dimension if they spend the equivalent mana cost to the spell.

Approved

Name: Kamui Phase
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Supplementary
Element: Arcane
Range: 25 meters
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps the temple of their head prompting their eye to change in appearance and activate. They then suck themselves into their right eye entering the Kamui dimension allowing them exiting back to whatever location they please within the spells range. Upon entering the dimension a magic circle will form indicating their origin. If the magic circle is destroyed by dealing 1xS-Rank damage the user will be ejected from the Kamui Dimension. The user must sustain the spell to keep the dimension active in the topic itself. At the cost of 500 more mana, they may bring one extra person with them if they touch them with their other hand for at least 5 seconds. The user may freely leave the dimension once per turn and return in the following post with a magic circle appearing at the users new location. The user must pay an additional 500 mana per turn for each additional individual in the dimension. If the user is knocked out or killed everyone within the Kamui dimension will be forced out of the Kamui Dimension.

Approved

~~~~These are all good to start training ( you'll have to resubmit the S rank you don't have slots for but for now feel free to start the training on these, the other spells will take more time to Review.~~~~

#4Noyiah Dashi 

Arts of The Kamui Empty on Fri Dec 27, 2019 12:46 pm

Noyiah Dashi
First Set  Magical Sensory  -  Cataclysm :

Name: Magic Sensory
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Supplementary
Element: Arcane
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user closes their eyes to activate the spell. They are then able to 'see' anything that possess mana within the spell's range in their mind. They won't be able to make out what the object is but would be granted the knowledge of its position and trajectory. As well as how strong the object is based on the amount of mana it possess.

Arcane cant have sensory traits unfortunately

Name: Blink
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Supplementary
Element: Arcane
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user jumps towards a direction while having one of their hands in a position where only the index and pinky fingers are raised up. A grey magic circle appears underneath the user and the user can dash up to 5 meters towards a preferred direction based on the user's speed. The dash will create purplish afterimage of the user.

Approved

Name: Wave
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user swings his arm towards a direction and a gray magic circle will form in front of them and releases a 2-meter purple energy wave that travels up to 10 meters dealing up to C-Rank damage to everything in its way and disappears after it does so.

Approved

Name: Kamui Energy Blast
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user places their palm towards a direction. A magic circle will appear on their palm and a 2-meter diameter beam of purple energy will surge out from their palm and deals A-rank damage to anything it hits.

Approved

Name: Cataclysm
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user places their palm towards a direction and a magic circle will appear in front of their palm. The spell will travel towards the target area. A gray magic circle with an area of up to 8-meter diameter will form on the surface of the target area and pinkish white light will blast within the area of effect, damaging everything in it by an A-rank damage.

Approved

Second Set   Kamui Cubes :

Name: Kamui Cube I
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user closes their palm and a gray magic circle will form in front of it. A purple dimensional cube the size of an apple will form in the user's palm immediately. They can then throw the cube into a direction where it will travel up to 5 meters from the user and when it comes into contact with something, or reaches its max range, it will create a 1-meter diameter explosion that deals D-Rank damage to everything within the area of effect.

Approved

Name: Kamui Cube II
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user closes their palm and a gray magic circle will form in front of it. A purple dimensional cube the size of an apple will form in the user's palm immediately. They can then throw the cube into a direction where it will travel up to 10 meters from the user and when it comes into contact with something, or reaches its max range, it will create a 2-meter diameter explosion that deals C-Rank damage to everything within the area of effect.

Approved

Name: Kamui Cube III
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user closes their palm and a gray magic circle will form in front of it. A purple dimensional cube the size of an apple will form in the user's palm immediately. They can then throw the cube into a direction where it will travel up to 15 meters from the user and when it comes into contact with something, or reaches its max range, it will create a 4-meter diameter explosion that deals B-Rank damage to everything within the area of effect.

Approved

Third Set   Kamui Curse :

Name: Kamui's Curse I
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user makes contact with a target with one of their body parts or their weapon and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a D-Rank Debuff on their Constitution.

it doesn’t seem to utilize the 5-meter Range. I would add something about Activation must happen within the Range of 5 feet.  And I would like you to specify how long before you can not activate it after making the touch.    If you don’t mind them being Touch only I would like that said.

Name: Kamui's Curse II
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user makes contact with a target with one of their body parts or their weapon and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a C-Rank Debuff on their Constitution.

Same idea, Mechanically this is fine, but see note on “Kamui Curse I”

Name: Kamui's Curse II.i
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user makes contact with a target with one of their body parts or their weapon and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a C-Rank Debuff on their Speed.

Same idea

Name: Kamui's Curse III
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user makes contact with a target with one of their body parts or their weapon and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a B-Rank Debuff on their Constitution.

Ditto

Name: Kamui's Curse IV
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Debuff
Element: Arcane
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user makes contact with a target with one of their body parts or their weapon and a small gray magic circle will form between the contact area. Purple aura can be seen engulfing the target giving them a A-Rank Debuff on their Constitution.

Though again I like it,  it makes sense in all the ways its suppose to but refer to notes on “Kamui Curse I”

Over All, thank you for carefully reading through the rules and not making me pick it all apart mechanically,  they have a staged upgrade feel from the previous version and i appreciated the template you used.   If you have question feel fee to PM me on discord or post here to continue.

 all of these will not be considered approved until we speak about the changes that can be considered.

#5Sage Meilyr 

Arts of The Kamui Empty on Fri Dec 27, 2019 3:39 pm

Sage Meilyr
bumpy bump bump~

#6Noyiah Dashi 

Arts of The Kamui Empty on Fri Dec 27, 2019 3:46 pm

Noyiah Dashi
Name: Dimensional Walk
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Kamui
Type: Supplementary
Element: Arcane
Range: NA
Cooldown: 1 posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user taps their toe once and a gray magic circle will appear underneath them. There will be a soft purple glow around their feet and they will be able to instead of walk and run, skate through any surface. (The speed of the user stays the same as their running speed.)

Approved

The others are also good now, Approved all for Training Good luck and may inspiration be ever-flowing!

#7Sage Meilyr 

Arts of The Kamui Empty on Tue Apr 28, 2020 12:13 am

Sage Meilyr
Int: 249 (+5 from staff)
50% wc reduction

Training I
-Kamui Cube III
-Short Ranged Kamui
-Kamui Phase (B-rank)
3 B-rank spells: 3x1000 words (-50%) = 1500 words

Training II
-Kamui Cube II
1 C-rank spell: 1x750 words (-50%) = 375 words



#8Konyo 
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Arts of The Kamui Empty on Tue Apr 28, 2020 12:44 am

Konyo

Kamui Cube III, Short Ranged Kamui, Kamui Phase and Kamui Cube II have been approved for use.



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