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Bennu the Phoenix (TO) | Pg. 2

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#1Jeremiah Ali 

Bennu the Phoenix (TO) | Pg. 2 Empty Tue Dec 26, 2017 2:20 pm

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Name: Eye Blast
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50 -50-
Requirements: Phoenix Takeover
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Bennu shouts the words "Huris Alnaar" Which translates to "Horus Fire". From his third eye a fire ball with a 1 meter diameter is released, Since this spell is of a more mature level, the color of it has brightened from the color of D rank level spells, making it appear more orange. Upon contact this spell deals C rank burning damage. This fireball can be controlled by one of his fingers after it is shot but after it hits something equal to its rank, it will be no more.

Name: Quick Rebirth
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Phoenix Takeover | A flame created by the user
Type: Supplementary
Element: Fire
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Bennu the Phoenix is known for resurrecting from it's own flames. When a flame that was created by Bennu is within range Bennu can rise out of the flame allowing him to maneuver quickly through the battle field. Bennu simply folds his wings over him, before rising out of the flame in a second. However, after rising out of the flame, Bennu cannot activate any other spells until the following user post.

Ascend Form:

Name: Ascend
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50 -50-
Requirements: Phoenix Takeover
Type: Self-Buff
Element: Fire
Range: Self
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Bennu engulfs his entire body in bright orange flames to signify the difference in C and D rank level skills. This fire boosts his strength by a total of 10 stat points.

Name: Protect Lvl. 2
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50 -50-
Requirements: Phoenix Takeover
Type: Defense
Element: Fire
Range: Self
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Bennu lifts his arms and creates bright orange flames around them. These flames cover his entire arms (1 meter) These flames can defend against 1 B rank, 2 C ranks, or 4 D ranks.

Name: Hot Wing
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Phoenix Takeover
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 15 Meters
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Instant
Effect: Bennu flaps one of his wings, sending out a 2 meter long line of fire diagonally towards a target. When this strike of fire, it causes C rank burning damage. (2nd degree burns)



Last edited by Jeremiah on Sun Dec 31, 2017 11:21 pm; edited 2 times in total



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#2Fleur 

Bennu the Phoenix (TO) | Pg. 2 Empty Thu Dec 28, 2017 9:52 am

Fleur
I'm Fleur and I'll be your moderator. I apologize for the long wait - let's get started!

Eye Blast: All sustained spells have mana costs of the original cast, not half. In this case, change all the 25's you have to 50 mana. Having your third eye control something is a form of minuscule movement, which isn't allowed anymore. Please change the action to something a little more noticeable.

Quick Rebirth: I'm a bit confused on this spell, primarily due to the name. Is this spell meant to be a resurrection spell or a maneuverability spell? If it's the latter, please clarify in the description so that there's no confusion in future quotes of the spell.

Ascend: Just the mana.

Protect Lvl. 2: Please state the dimensions of these flames. Note that full body defensive spells aren't allowed at this rank. Also, change the mana to 50 for sustained.

Hot Wing: Despite it making sense, you can only choose to have one damage multiplier (either cutting or burn damage). If you choose to have both, you must cut your damage in half, resulting in D-Rank damage dealt for both multipliers.

Bump when everything's corrected! If there's anything you want to dispute, feel free to as I make mistakes too.



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#3Jeremiah Ali 

Bennu the Phoenix (TO) | Pg. 2 Empty Sat Dec 30, 2017 11:23 pm

Jeremiah Ali
Thank you, bump.



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#4Fleur 

Bennu the Phoenix (TO) | Pg. 2 Empty Sun Dec 31, 2017 9:04 pm

Fleur
General: If you could just name the damage type for each spell, we could get this approved immediately. I apologize for not noticing this the first time around.

Bump once it's all done!



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#5Jeremiah Ali 

Bennu the Phoenix (TO) | Pg. 2 Empty Sun Dec 31, 2017 11:22 pm

Jeremiah Ali
No problem, no worries. Bump~



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#6Fleur 

Bennu the Phoenix (TO) | Pg. 2 Empty Mon Jan 01, 2018 7:54 pm

Fleur
These spells have been approved for training.



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