Kairos's Starter Spells

**Kairos Narcissa** · Fri Aug 09, 2019 11:31 pm

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

25,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Race :

Dragonborn

Experience :

2,500

Class :

Berserker

Magic :

Hardest Apostolica

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

200

Pouch :

1x Epithet Image

Name: Aspect of Mercury
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hardest Apostolica
Type: Buff
Element: Arcane
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Bouncing on his feet, Kairos firmly plants his feet on the ground. This causes a familiar burst of golden magic to escape from his body and culminate around his legs. Afterwards, his speed is increased. (D-Rank Buff to Speed.)

Name: Aspect of Mars
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hardest Apostolica
Type: Buff
Element: Arcane
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Slamming his fists together, a burst of golden magic erupts from his body and coats his hands and forearms. Afterwards, his strength is increased. (D-Rank Buff to Strength)

Name: Aspect of Vulcan
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hardest Apostolica
Type: Buff
Element: Arcane
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Crossing his arms across his chest and focusing for a moment, a golden eruption of magic comes from his body and lingers around him like a veil, increasing his endurance. (D-Rank Buff to Endurance)

Last edited by Kairos Narcissa on Mon Aug 12, 2019 2:46 am; edited 1 time in total

Vali Onfroy † · Mon Aug 12, 2019 1:23 am

Epithet :

Viking King

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Bounty :

200,000

Jewels :

5,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Werewolf

Experience :

321,750

Reputation :

5,400

Class :

Spellsword

Aura :

Priestess Aura

Strength :

35

Speed :

87

Constitution :

92

Endurance :

97

Intelligence :

50

Mana :

2,970

Ring :

Maraq's Ring V4

Companion :

Winged Lemur

Pouch :

1x Death Coin (23/08/2020)

Yo Kairos, I'll be reviewing your start spells my friend.

Aspect of Victoria: Firstly, Only one attribute may be buffed with a spell so multiple buffs using one spell is a nogo. Remove "(+2 to each)" You only need to write that the spell gives a D rank buff to an attribute.
Aspect of Mercury: Remove "(+6 to speed)". As stated before, you only need to write that the spell gives a D rank buff to speed. Keep in mind that D rank buffing spells always increase an attribute by 5. Classes and other bonuses from other things are kept out of spell descriptions and are instead mentioned upon use.
Aspect of Mars: Remove "(+6 to strength)", refer to above.
Aspect of Vulcan: Same as above ^.

Bump when edits are made.

**Kairos Narcissa** · Mon Aug 12, 2019 2:46 am

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

25,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Race :

Dragonborn

Experience :

2,500

Class :

Berserker

Magic :

Hardest Apostolica

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

200

Pouch :

1x Epithet Image

Dropped off Aspect of Victoria and edited the other three accordingly!

Vali Onfroy † · Mon Aug 12, 2019 2:51 am

Epithet :

Viking King

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Bounty :

200,000

Jewels :

5,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Werewolf

Experience :

321,750

Reputation :

5,400

Class :

Spellsword

Aura :

Priestess Aura

Strength :

35

Speed :

87

Constitution :

92

Endurance :

97

Intelligence :

50

Mana :

2,970

Ring :

Maraq's Ring V4

Companion :

Winged Lemur

Pouch :

1x Death Coin (23/08/2020)

You still have one free starter spell, my friend. Guessing you'll make it later.

These starter spells are approved.

Kairos's Starter Spells

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