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#1Jeremiah Ali 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 4 | Done Empty on Sun Mar 04, 2018 5:10 pm

Jeremiah Ali

Name: Kuharibi (Destruction)
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: To activate this spell, Jeremiah faces his palm upward, creating a fireball the size of a baseball in his hand. When Jeremiah aims said palm and fireball at a target or throws the fireball it will travel 20 meters away. Upon contact, the fireball causes a fiery explosion up to 8 meters, causing A rank burning damage (4th degree burns) to whatever it comes in contact with. After the spell comes in contact with something it goes into cooldown. This may only do 1 A rank damage per post.



Last edited by Jeremiah on Tue Mar 06, 2018 5:16 am; edited 3 times in total

#2Snowflake 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 4 | Done Empty on Mon Mar 05, 2018 12:17 am

Snowflake

Hello, I'll be grading your spell.

Kuharibi:

  • A diameter of 6 meters is too large for a beam, it is almost an entire AoE spell. Please reduce the dimensions.
  • Please remove the controlling of the spell. With a beam size as large as that, added with controlling movements is a bit powerful. A bit of motions with your hands and you can cover an area almost larger than the total range.
  • Note that you cannot continuously fire the beam in a single post, meaning that it has to be Instant. You cast a beam once and you cannot do it again until the next post.


Bump when done.

#3Jeremiah Ali 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 4 | Done Empty on Mon Mar 05, 2018 6:38 am

Jeremiah Ali
bump

#4Snowflake 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 4 | Done Empty on Tue Mar 06, 2018 12:28 am

Snowflake


  • Please mention that the spell may only do 1 A-Rank damage per post.


Bump once edited.

#5Jeremiah Ali 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 4 | Done Empty on Tue Mar 06, 2018 5:16 am

Jeremiah Ali
mk. bump

#6Snowflake 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 4 | Done Empty on Tue Mar 06, 2018 5:03 pm

Snowflake

This spell has been approved for training.

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