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#1Jeremiah Ali 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 3 | Done Empty on Sat Mar 03, 2018 12:43 pm

Jeremiah Ali

Name: Demonic Flight | Wings of the Fire Demon
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Supplementary
Element: Fire
Range: -
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: By shouting "Demonic Flight" Jeremiah conjures two 2 x 2 meter wings on his back that allow him to fly up to five meters in he air at his own speed.


Name: Black Panther
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 15 Meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain  
Effect: Jeremiah extends one of his hands forward with his palm facing the opponent. A  3 meter in length black panther is created in front of his hand. Creating black flames is hard for a Demon slayer, so streaks of white flames can be seen throughout the body of the panther. The panther first dashes towards their target, trailing white flames as it does. When the panther comes in contact with with the target it will engulf them in flames, causing (B RANK DAMAGE) 3rd degree burns before vanishing. If sustained the panther can run towards an opponent as long as Jeremiah directs it with his finger. The panther can be destroyed by B rank damage.


Name: Demonic Spark
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Instant  
Effect: Jeremiah points his finger at a target, sending a 1 x 1 inch spark towards them. The spark will follow the opponent up to 15 meters away for one post as he directs it with his finger. Upon contact the spark explodes, creating a fiery 4 x 4 meter explosion that deals (B RANK DAMAGE) third degree burns to anything caught within the explosion.


Name: Demonic Explosive Wave
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 15 Meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Jeremiah faces his palm towards a target before releasing a fiery 3 x 3 meter blast. The blast reaches up to 15 meters away and upon contact causes (B RANK DAMAGE) 3rd degree burns. This spell can be sustained to cause 3 degree burns per post.


Name: Mbwiri (Stage 1)
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Fire Demon Slayer
Type: Defensive
Element: Fire
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Jeremiah shouts "Mbwiri" (The demon of possessions) out loud before creating a fiery rib cage anywhere within 15 meters of him. The ribcage is 4 meters in Diameter. Fire fills the gap between each rib and is capable of defending everything within them. This spell can take 1 A rank, 2 B rank, 4 C rank, or 8 D rank magical before before breaking. This defense is stationary and cannot move.



Last edited by Jeremiah on Sun Mar 04, 2018 8:09 am; edited 4 times in total

#2Akira Shimada 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 3 | Done Empty on Sat Mar 03, 2018 11:54 pm

Akira Shimada
Hey! I'll be reviewing these.


  • Demonic Flight | Wings of the Fire Demon --> Approved
  • Black Panther --> Please reduce the size of the panther, 4m is the AoE maximum, at which point it cannot move. Additionally, mention the rank of damage.
  • Demonic Spark: Please remove the part where the spark follows the opponent, if you want to control it so it follows the opponent, it will require an action from you, also add the rank of the damage.
  • Demonic Explosion: Once again, the 4x4 m blast cannot travel for 15 meters, AoE spells cannot travel also please add the cooldown.
  • Mbwiri (Stage 1): Please mention that once you make the dome around you, it will not move with you.


Bump when edited.

#3Jeremiah Ali 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 3 | Done Empty on Sun Mar 04, 2018 12:59 am

Jeremiah Ali
bump

#4Akira Shimada 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 3 | Done Empty on Sun Mar 04, 2018 1:18 am

Akira Shimada

  • Demonic Flight | Wings of the Fire Demon --> Approved

  • Black Panther: Specify that once the damage is dealt the spell will go into cooldown and that the panther will follow the directions only within the range. Add a durability to it and the rank of the damage that it will do.

  • Demonic Spark: Add the damage rank.

  • Demonic Explosion: Add the cooldown and the damage rank.  

  • Mbwiri (Stage 1) --> Approved (missing the word damage after 8 D rank, alternatively, you could say its got an A rank durability)


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#5Jeremiah Ali 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 3 | Done Empty on Sun Mar 04, 2018 8:10 am

Jeremiah Ali
lol ok, bump.

#6Akira Shimada 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 3 | Done Empty on Sun Mar 04, 2018 8:41 am

Akira Shimada
These spells have been approved for training.

#7Jeremiah Ali 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 3 | Done Empty on Thu Apr 12, 2018 5:24 pm

Jeremiah Ali

#8Akira Shimada 

Fire Demon Slayer | Page 3 | Done Empty on Thu Apr 12, 2018 5:27 pm

Akira Shimada
The spells, Mbwiri & Demonic explosion have been approved for usage.

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