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#1Sora Mamoru 

on Fri Dec 01, 2017 2:47 pm

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Name: cool head hot heart
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: fire element magic
Type: supplementary
Element:fire
Range: 00 Meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: sustain
Effect: Sora's magic makes sure his body always stays at the right temperature so never gets cold in the coolest weather or never gets hot in the hottest desert. It works only on the environment. It doesn't work when the heat or cold comes from someone else its magic

Name: hot body
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: fire element magic
Type: offensive
Element: fire
Range: 00 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Sora has the magic to heat up his hands, knees, lower legs, feet and elbows. He is able to heat up things this way with a single touch heating up water. If he touches a person's skin then he will deal D-Class burn upon them.



Last edited by Sora Mamoru on Mon Dec 04, 2017 7:18 am; edited 4 times in total

#2Kon 
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on Fri Dec 01, 2017 4:25 pm

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Cool head Hot Heart: change mana cost to 25, change spell type to supplementary, remove the comment where it causes you to be immune to your own magic. Change all elements to Fire.

Hot Glider: Self-buff only increases your statistics in the class of a sorcerer only speed. Rephrase your spell to list that as the only ability of that spell. change type to self-buff speed, otherwise rephrase this spell entirely.

Hot Body: Remove the temperature quote as temperatures of that extreme cause third-degree burns, you are also unable to melt metal regardless of the period that the heat is sustained on the object. Change type to offensive




"Being of Evil, Blight on the world the time is nigh for your demise. Hear me and fear me, for I will be the bringer of your end. ~ Konstantin Sokolov, Demon Raid!
#3Sora Mamoru 

on Fri Dec 01, 2017 4:34 pm

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i edited it

#4Kon 
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on Fri Dec 01, 2017 8:50 pm

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Cool head Hot Heart: Cool-down to 1 change the duration to sustain. Change element to just fire remove the heath

hot glider: Again, that's a flight spell that can only be used at B rank and is considered a supplementary spell, Self-buffs only affect a person's statistics, not their abilities. Change element to just fire remove the heath

hot body: Change element to just fire remove the heath




"Being of Evil, Blight on the world the time is nigh for your demise. Hear me and fear me, for I will be the bringer of your end. ~ Konstantin Sokolov, Demon Raid!
#5Sora Mamoru 

on Sat Dec 02, 2017 11:09 am

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edited again ... big chance it is good now:)

#6Kon 
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on Mon Dec 04, 2017 3:20 am

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Cool head Hot Heart: change the duration to sustain.

hot body: Approved




"Being of Evil, Blight on the world the time is nigh for your demise. Hear me and fear me, for I will be the bringer of your end. ~ Konstantin Sokolov, Demon Raid!
#7Sora Mamoru 

on Mon Dec 04, 2017 12:08 pm

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last time edit i think

#8Kon 
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on Tue Dec 05, 2017 10:47 am

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These spells have been approved.




"Being of Evil, Blight on the world the time is nigh for your demise. Hear me and fear me, for I will be the bringer of your end. ~ Konstantin Sokolov, Demon Raid!

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