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Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad [C-Rank|Second Batch]

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#1Sage 

Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad  [C-Rank|Second Batch] Empty on Thu Aug 31, 2017 6:48 am

Sage
Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad  [C-Rank|Second Batch] 150204b0f9910688ff40ca7e8b38709a--olive-green-mother-nature


Second Batch:

Name: Leaf Cutter
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Beast Soul Magic: Dryad
Type: Offensive
Element: Nature
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Sage slashes his arm and a 30 cm long and 5 cm wide leaf will appear in front of him and hurls at the intended target, if it hits, it will deal a C rank cutting damage.

Name: Leaves' Blessing
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Beast Soul Magic: Dryad
Type: Defensive
Element: Nature
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Sage place his hand forward, a pile of leaves would gather 1 to 10m in front of his palm forming a 5 to 10m wide wall, which could take a B rank damage before it would be destroyed.

Name: Thorns
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Beast Soul Magic: Dryad
Type: Supplementary
Element: Nature
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Sage say the word 'captionem', and the 2m diameter of the targeted area will start two grow thorns 1m high. Anybody in that area will be trapped inside the thorns unless the thorns is destroyed by a C rank damage.

Name: Nature's Blood
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Beast Soul Magic: Dryad
Type: Strength-Buff
Element: Nature
Range: N/A
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Sage place his hand on his heart, his eyes will glow in a pinkish colour, then his dryad form will turn blood red and he will receive a B Rank strength buff.

*is ready for training*



Last edited by Sage on Wed Sep 20, 2017 1:06 pm; edited 3 times in total

#2Snowflake 

Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad  [C-Rank|Second Batch] Empty on Sun Sep 17, 2017 6:01 am

Snowflake

Leaf Cutting:

  • A piercing damage is for knifes/spears or sharp objects. Since you intend to slash your enemy, the damage should cutting or bludgeoning damage.


Leaves' Blessing:

  • The diameter of the wall is too big, 5 m to 10 m diameter means that it'd have a total with of 10 m to 20 m, which is already out of the range.
  • Instead of using diameter, use width or length.


Thorns:

  • There cannot be any extra damage in a spell, so remove the part where you mentioned that the enemy would receive D-Rank cutting damage if they moved.
  • Hybrid damages are allowed, however, the rank of the damage will be reduced by 1 rank.
  • Your thorns can resist up to 1 B-Rank damage btw, or equivalent.


Nature's Gift:

  • Rephrase the sentence "his strength will raise by one B-Rank" to "he will receive a B-Rank strength buff".


Bump when done.

#3Sage 

Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad  [C-Rank|Second Batch] Empty on Sun Sep 17, 2017 7:50 am

Sage
bump

#4Snowflake 

Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad  [C-Rank|Second Batch] Empty on Mon Sep 18, 2017 2:56 am

Snowflake

Thorns:

  • State that the spell can only do 1 C-Rank damage per post.


Nature's Gift:

  • You still haven't changed the part where I asked you to in the previous post.


Bump when done.

#5Sage 

Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad  [C-Rank|Second Batch] Empty on Wed Sep 20, 2017 7:53 am

Sage
bump, the thorns is supplementary and only traps people, it doesnt deal any damage

#6Snowflake 

Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad  [C-Rank|Second Batch] Empty on Wed Sep 20, 2017 12:16 pm

Snowflake

Oh, my bad. However, spells that trap enemies cannot be sustained, so please change it to Instant.

#7Sage 

Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad  [C-Rank|Second Batch] Empty on Wed Sep 20, 2017 1:06 pm

Sage
bump

#8Snowflake 

Sage's Beast Take-Over: Dryad  [C-Rank|Second Batch] Empty on Thu Sep 21, 2017 10:10 am

Snowflake

These spells have been approved for training.

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